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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

finally i read it;-)...

Wowww... what an os:-):-)

so cutie:-):-):-)

loved it:-):-):-)

great job Arif:-):-):-)

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Santhosh Banda

@Santhu.The.King

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

I Already Saw That... Very Cute Childhood Love Story.. Very Beautifully Written...
But.. End Is Bit Rushed....Else Perfect.. I Couldn't Comment Earlier Sorry... Thanks For PM 😃

Edited by Santhu.The.King - 12 years ago

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Farhana

@risingsea101

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Aww, that was very cute

Childhood lovebirds

This was beautiful

What your name(if you don't mind answering)😆

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644078

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

lolz why should i mind answering,
i'm Arif n u?

Originally posted by: risingsea101
Aww, that was very cute
Childhood lovebirds
This was beautiful
What your name(if you don't mind answering)😆

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Wow

It was a gr8 os

A new concept

Well i am quiet a critic so don't take my comments to the heart so much

I feel the os was too short

It should have been a ss

And AsYa meet was too quick and too simple

I loved the small AsYa.. The 13 and 14 year old

But overall it was awesome

Do write more

Ur idea was gr8

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644078

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

thank you

ya i know it is short actually maine ye study break ke samay likhi thi isiliye kafi quick hai

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
Wow

It was a gr8 os

A new concept

Well i am quiet a critic so don't take my comments to the heart so much

I feel the os was too short

It should have been a ss

And AsYa meet was too quick and too simple

I loved the small AsYa.. The 13 and 14 year old

But overall it was awesome

Do write more

Ur idea was gr8