New virika FF-The symbol of love* LAST PART*Pg.57 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
cute and lovely updatee!!!!! do continue soon n pls PM me...thnku so muchhh... awesomee updatee!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was a really sweet and cute part!
Loved how diya took viren's side and viren finally got her ice cream!!
I wonder who knocked at the door, but I guess it will be vanshika with diya who must have got a cold or something because of the ice cream, and jeevika will be angry with viren..
Pease update soon and thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sych a cute update
loved diya n papa
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
nicew update. can u pls PM me on ur next update? thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow ireally
must say ur a talented riter
amazing update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hayyeee loved it
continue soon
do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
awesome
loved it
virika little nok jhok n kiss
pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi,sorry for being tooo late i had my exams.So here goes the next part...
PART-3
Jeevika went to open the door.She saw V mom holding little diya who was crying so hard.Jeevika was shocked to see diya in such a state.

jeevika:wat happened ma?
V mom:beta,she is so cranky tonight, i think her temperature is rising.Please check on her i'm so scared.

Jeevika took diya from V mom.She could feel her little angel's body warm than usual.Meanwhile viren came and checked on wat was happening.

jeevika:OMG!!i think she has a fever for sure.virenji,please take the car let's go to the doctor.
viren:ya sure.

Meanwhile all the members of the house woke up due to diya's continuous cry.Viren,jeevika,maanvi and virat went to the hospital along with little diya.

IN THE HOSPITAL:
The doctor examined diya and told to her parents about her condition.

doc:Mr. and Mrs. Viren there is nothing to worry about diya.she has a slight fever and if u give her medications regularly she will be fine in a few days.but make sure that she takes no cold items as it may affect her health.right now u can take her home.
Jeevika stared at viren,who understood her intentions.the 4 of them went inside to meet little diya who was asleep on her little bed .jeevika caressed her hair ,with her eyes welled up.she can't see her diya lyk this.viren sat beside diya,who also felt the same.

maanvi:di,y r u crying doc said that she's fine.please don't cry di.
virat:haan bhabhi,our diya is so strong nothing will happen to her she is gonna be absolutely fine tomorrow and start to demand for another ice-cream :)
jeevika:no virat,it's enough. already ur brother's deed brought her to such a condition i don't want this to happen again.
viren remained unspoken,bcos he knew he was wrong.
virat:no bhabhi,bro didn't do it wantedly ,he had to.
maanvi:ok yaar stop this now lets go home.

The whole was sleepless and was waiting for diya's return.All of them reached home.

V mom: viren,is everything alright how is diya?
viren:haan ma,there's nothing to worry.she's fine.
swamini bua:thank god,ok jeevika make her sleep with u till she is fine.
jeevika:haan buaji.
All of them left to their respective rooms.

IN VIRIKA'S ROOM:
Jeevika gave diya her medicines and made her to lie on the bed and covered up with a blanet.she switched off the A.C so that diya does'nt feel cold.she lay on one side caressing her hair gently and placed a soft kiss on her forehead.Vire lay on the other side and was patting his little daughter.he knew jeevika was mad at him,but he can't stay quiet now as it may lesd to a big fight.finally he spoke up.

viren:jeevika i know i'm the sole reason for our daughter's condition but believe me i didn't do it willingly.i mean i had to...
jeevika:why did u had to virenji?u were not ready to listen to me and now do you see ,its not u or me suffering, its our poor little child.
viren:jeevika i thought a little ice-crem would do no harm.
jeevika:u thought?if u had thought about it a little more u wud have not done this.
viren:please listen to me jeevika,i'm so sorry.
jeevika:enough virenji,i'm not ready to hear anything now.Please leave US alone.

She went to sleep holding diya.The last sentence of jeevika hurt viren to the core.he felt as if he was abandoned by his own life,his love,his wife.His heart was weeping bitterly.

MORNING 6:00 am
Jeevika woke up and the first thing she checked on was diya.she found that she was better than yesterday.she placed a soft kiss on diya's forehead.then she got up from the bed and saw viren who was asleep.she was unable to react and went to take a shower.She returned form her bath and saw viren caressing diya's hair.she knew that he was the best father a daughter can get, but his mistake covered her eyes.viren saw jeevika but he went in for a shower without a word.jeevika moved towards diya who was starting to get up,stretching her little hands and legs.

jeevika:gud morning my little girl!!!
diya:good morning mumma!!!
jeevika:how is my child now?
diya:mumma me so tired :(
jeevika:oh,its k u will be fine later.
diya:mumma where is papa?
viren came from his bath meanwhile.
viren:papa is here :) where will i go leaving my diya alone?
they both hugged and viren gave a sweet kiss to diya.
jeevika:diya come on lets go brush ur teeth.
diya:no mumma.pappa will brush my teeth today :) yes na papa?
viren:sure my dear :)
viren took diya,made her brush and shower.jeevika went to prepare the breakfast.

IN THE KITCHEN:
Maanvi:gud morning di,how is diya?is she alright?
jeevika:ya mannu,she is better than yesterday.
maanvi:and wat about jiju? i mean is everything fine between both of u'll bcos u were mad at him last night at the hospital.
jeevika: ahaan,nothing of that sort.Now go and keep this in the dining table.
Maanvi knew that something was wrong but she never said anything and left.

After the breakfast,viren left for his work but not in a usual way.he bid his good bues to all except jeevika,he was deeply hurt by her words.This was noticed by the problem-solvers of the house virat-maanvi-diya.

IN VIRMAN'S ROOM:
Maanvi:we have to do something to patch them up.
virat:ya, but how? thats always a big question ;(
maanvi:don't u have a brain?think it for ur self.
Meanwhile diya who was seated in the bed was thinking hard to patch up her parents.
virat:wat about sending them out alone for sometime lyk for a dinner or a movie ,so that they can sort it out.
maanvi:wat an old-fashioned idea virat?don't u know anything else except this?
They thought, and thought, and thought,and finally maanvi sprang up witha an idea.
maanvi:ah!!!! i got a super solid idea!!!!
virat and diya:Wat???????????
maanvi:this time its neither virat nor me whose gonna solve this but you diya!!!!
diya:ME???
maanvi:ya dear!!! i'll tell u everything and u do the same. ok????
diya:ok!!!!
virat:don't force ur stupid ideas on my little diya.
maanvi:shut up virat!!!! i'm better in giving ideas than u :)
Maanvi told the whole plan to diya,who had a big smile on hearing it :)
Maanvi: so is it gud diya?
diya: very goood... :)
The 3 shared a cute hug :)


Guys,i'm not happy with the number of likes and comments for my last update,i think i'm not gud at writing :( I'm planning to discontinue this FF if i don't get an appreciable number of likes and comments,bcos ur comments r the one which motivates me to write.So pls press the like button and don't forget to post ur views.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awesome update girl!! 👏
really loved it
hope diya gets perfectly fine very soon...😊
hate to see virika fight!! 😔
little diya in action!! 😆
waiting to see whats there plan and virika's patch up!! 😊

plz dont discontinue the story...its absolutely amazing!! 😭

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Cuttest update ever!
Continue soon!!

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