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Posted: 12 years ago
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The night was shining...shimmering..their was papparazi every where...why not..it was the debut movie release of rishab kundra...son of Mohan kundra...the epitome of hotness...girls were drooling...cameras flashing. ?..it had taken two yrs for the movie to premier and was the most awaited launch of the year...afterall he was yest er yrs superstar mohan kundra son...rishabh...the rk of glamour world was happy...confident with his work. ?.it was the biggest day if his life...and yet he was alone...lonely. ...he was smiling yet was hurt coz his dad was not alive to see his dream fulfilled. ?.he put up a a cloak of arrogance and attitude...and walked swiftly towards the crowd...they were cheering liie crazy...as the movie came yo its climax...their was a huge applause...rk left before he could be held by his fans...he was tired and wanted some peace and solace...so he silently drovevtowards the secluded part of the beach...silence greeted him..he sat on a big rock looking at the unending sea thimking of his father...his mother was too busy in her married life...she never had time for him...he felt like crying his heart out...shsre his experience with someone.
But being a star costs a lot...u never get a friend or a soul who can sooth u without manipulating...and using his ststus quo...he took out his dest friend and drank till he couod forget his surroubdings...his senses..his loneliness, his pain...he started walking unconsciously...he had no sense of place time. ?.just walked where his legs took him...he fidnt notice he was on a road and to be hit by an equally drunk driver at the stiring...when he was ferocious ly pulled back by someone. ?.he felt hardly on the ground and could just see a pair of big almond eyes staring back at him...hefell in a deep sleep just staring at those mysterious eyes...

So guys how was it...would you like an other part to it...for me to continue...it surely is not an ss or ff...but it may tsje two to three parts to end...if I get good likes and comment I would exercise with my fingers or will give rest yo them...

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dreamyjennice thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yupp if I get atleast few more likes...surely...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow..mast hai..👏
likh de next part bhi but don't make it an ss or ff..mujhme itna patience nhi hai padhne ka..🤣
but i will surely want a sec chapter..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice...do continue with longer updates😳😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow good .continue
but please make posts on daily episodes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajjji

wow good .continue
but please make posts on daily episodes


Crazy rajjji koi nahi padega 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice


Crazy rajjji koi nahi padega 😆




ok .see.i never read these os ff and wat not


but please make one for daily episode
i really liked yours
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please continue
and dont frgt to pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice
do continue 😊

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