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Posted: 12 years ago

It's a filler… rplyd to u all

Chapter: 8

Benji went to the airforce base , took diya to the bureo..

Benji: kya hua why ur so quite..

Diya: I donot know… seeing u like this is strange….

Benji: why….

Diya: I mean CSI people must be geeks , arrogant nevr to smile kinda

He laughed…

Benji; to ur surprise than .. all of us are not like this… han ek mayank asa tha… us ko bhi bhabi ny thik kerdiya…. She made her wht he was actually.. he sigh

Diya: so u guys area gang there… so Samrat must also b apart

Samart: ya Samrat is also…

Sumwhere no matter how much they try to think that nupur is on a mission they cant get out the thought that she is so much danger…. And that is making them all so so so restless…feeling of helplessness….

Diya: kya hua.. why are u so tense…

Benji: hmm…nhi nothing… its just the case..

Diya: its big thing for u…

He surprisingly look toward her…

Benji: its int a big thing for u… 5000 hostages in between sum bas**, who are so engrossed in them self that they ar even letting us know wht the bloody hell they want…

Diya: maybe they want nothing….

Benji: huh… they would be wanting sumthing… they all are mere set of selfish people..

Diya: how can u say just they are… evry one is selfish to sum extend… for them its there job.. and for u this ur job…

Benji:I cant believe ur supporting those terrorist..

Diya: aray nhi .. I m not supporting them I m just saying…. Tht sumwhere we are responsible for making people wht they are… as a society

Benji: better not to talk like this infront of maaynk… else u will face circumstance… here is the bureau…

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Benji: diya yeah mayank hai aur yeah samrat

Diya: hello…

Mayank: good to cya diya…. Common .. we donot have time… kam per lagay… we donot want to waste any more itme…

Diya: sure…

She started to work on the getting inside the security system ' main computer … trying to hack it to make it work again….

Benji , smarat and mayank all were on back of her , looking wht she is doing

She was trying like hell… and she was getting more n more confused

Diya: dam…

Benji: wht

Diya: u said there primary blockers …

Benji: yes they are…

Diya: they aren't… its territory level ones… I cant break them

Mayank: wht… try it again diya take ur time… if ur feeling nervous with al of us around… u do it alone oku… we need this really need this…

Diya: I cant do this.. its big thing

Mayank: calm down diya pls… ur are hope pls.. try

Samrat; pls.. common… even if ur doing this for the first time give it a try.. benji u stay here we are in our cabin…

Benji: oki…

Mayank: sirf kam kerna hai… he whispered in his ear and benji push him out..

Benji: are u oky diya…

She was sumwhere panicking and he can see this…. He ask placing his hand on her shoulder…

She took it in her grip… and turn to him

Diya: I donot think so I can do this …. I m sorry u trusted me so much and I …

Benji: hi.. relax… he placed his hand on her cheek.. clam down… its oky… u give it a try… do it for the first time… try it… I am here and nobody is gonna say anything to u… alright.. even im trying to break that but jammers keep changing… so its oky

Diya: oky…

Mayank who was cuming back to took the file, smiled and went away…. He has finally found the one… the one who can make him more responsible towars his life… he just cant wait to tell suhani ( benji's sister) about all this…

Samrat: kya hua kyun muskura raha hai

Mayank: suhani k reaction sooch ker…

Samrat: chukled… pori duniya sir per utha lay gi … tujy pata hai nah kitni barai nautanki hai woh… tu janta nhi hai us ny meri shadi per kya kya kiya tha..

Mayank: pata hai nupur ny har pal ki report di thi… aur mjh se poch raha hai… us ki shakal yaad hai meri shadi per… yeah kasi shadi hai…. Yeah koi tareeqa hai…

Diya was working like hell to hack there pc but it wasn't working.. benji himself was surprised ot see all the jammers change just few mins back he check thy were same yet now ….

Diya: just to this level I can hack… u can get to know how many mainframe areas they have in control… more thn this I cant… benji I have never seen anysuch thing…. I even know this coding.. I m really sorry

Benji: its oky… we all have tried and failed… still u are able to atlest go inside there pc thts better

Benji: guys.. bad news

Mayank: donot tell me benji

Benji: yes they have changed there programming…

Samrat: dam it… but u said diya can do that

Benji: I really thought so… she still sum how manged to enter there system yet further geting out things… its nt working

Mayank; yeah unk kasy baata chala k we are breaking it… this is going way to weird… humaray itny careful rahny per bhi how cum they know

Samrat: yes… are u sure… he was on call…. Thanku so much

We got a clue… a dam big clue

Mayank: wht it is…

Samrat: I flight was diverted to Delhi airport … as there was suddenly fuel out and they have turned it back to Delhi

Benji: wht was in that….

Samrat: gold… the reserve bank of India was shifting sum of its gold...

Mayank: dam it.. they want that…. That's why they are not asking anything from us.. they just want the control of the airport to get it…. That means they will make it shift sumhwere else to…

Jam it .. jam every signal in the city .. they shouldn't be able to fly a thing… a thing… benji u get on the pc… and try to break it.. we need the thing inside… samrat I ask u to trace the person

Samrat: I m on it… there are so many programmer in ur 12 years job man… I m working…

Mayank: good do it.. alteast we got sumthing to know… track the pilot and his records too… mayb he is involved to.. asay tu achank fuel nhi khatam hosakta…. Aur kahin aur layjnay k bajhy who public airport per land keray ga

Samrat; I think tu waps ghar ki taraf ja…

Mayank: kyun…

Samrat; the call u shouldnt be attending it here… jis tarah se unhony apan pora security plan change kiay ahi… yaaha se unko kuch tu pata chak raha hai

Benji: woh thik kah raha hai… tu ghar ja… aur waha se mange ker… mein bhi thori dair mein araha hoon…

Samrat: ya taking data.. mein bhi wahin ata hoon…. After giving the orders

Mayank: do it now… jam everything around… and without letting people know… oky… its already 10 pm… so they will not panic to much…

Benji: mein soch raha hoon diya ko waps bhej doon

Mayank: is waqt.. pagal hogaya hai kya… ghar lay aa us ko

Benji: woh panic ker ahi hai.. kafi naaya hai us k liyan yeah sab… aur ghar per\nhi

Samrat: matlab

Benji: yaar ek tu she failed tu she is very sad…. Upper se yeah sab yaha k humara mahool n all tht she is really freaking out seeing arms n all

Mayank: tu ghr per kya masala hai….oh tujh se control nhi hoga kya

Benji: bakwas maat ker

Mayank: kyun us ko ajeeb lagy ga .. tu hotel mein shift kerday us ko subha jay… hopes so subha tak sab thik hojay ga…

Benji: acha aur us ko kuch na pata chaly pls

Samrat: benji tu thik hai nah… tu kah kya raha hai

Benji: kuch nhi bus itna k woh nai hai in sab hai… us ki ek bewaqufi se koi baat bahr hogi tu hum muskil mein jay ga…. Tu islyn bus bhabi k naam all abt her na aay hum mein se kisi ki zaban per…

Mayank: tu thik hai nah…

Benji: kay hogay hai yaar… mein kya galat bol raha hoon

Mayank: nhi kah tu thik raha hai tu

Benji: phi… do it… aur ja tu..

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Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres

since i have nt been rrsding it so i hv startd reading it.
i read first two parts and they were awsm cnt read anymre tn8
since its vry late nw...lovd it



"uff khuda… mera sadu
pati waps agaya… ek wohi
hosakta hai jo atay hi complain
box khol day…"

Haha..
lovely
Edited by yashu_arti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
good
sahi hatay hain log intazar ka phal meetha hota hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
arre waah!! back2back updates...😃.. aapne toh dil khush kar diya fiza-ji..
i love the way this story is progressing.. waiting for the next part.. suspense rakhna bara mushkil ho raha hai..

plzz update soon..

🤗
~jiya~
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww
awsm update fiza.
though i did not undesstand clearly d flight related thing.
still lovd it.
is diya among d terorist?
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read all the parts and the seasons of this ff... wonderfully done yaar
it was amazing <3 totally perfect
Wonderful job (Y)
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice updt fiza
finally they got know reason behind this hijack..hope dia is not part of terrorists
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
di its really amazing and awesome update di
ap ne kya dimag pay he de 😳
wow its really superb updates di
ohhh to nupur ki jaan ko abhi khatara ho sakta he
aur mujhe q aisa lag raha he ki dia me kuch gadabad he pata nhi q 😡
anyways di ur a engineering student

agar ho to ap is ff me uska poora istamal kar rahi he 😆 🤣
thanks for pm me such intelligent update 😆
and 😭 for late reply


love u always di

deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update
but missed Nupur today

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
missed nupur
😊

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