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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha
bunny lovely cs😃

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#132

Originally posted by: --RAINA--
lykd cs
do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: ..Roop..
ahmazing CS...

loved it...

looks interestng...

update soon...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
cs awesome...continue soon wait

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#135

Originally posted by: sanjana_D3
Amaing CS... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: shalini_arsha
nyccc cs... Nw update soon... Thanxx 4 pm

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#137

Originally posted by: kriyansh_Alisha
amazing cs...

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#138

Originally posted by: yogini64
awesome cs tingi 😃
kriya itni intelligent kaise h???? 😲
thode mujhe bhi tips de na 😆
sabse interesting neha ka character...😛
mujhe to abhi se kriya-neha ki ladayi dikhayi de rhi h 🤪

Tu toh antaryaami hai naa Gigu ... 😛

Kriya mere nazariye se is always best example of beauty wid brains ... 😳

Ab tera toh pata ni ... 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Chapter ''1'

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AKD: Akal Ke Dushman

This term will be used in the update.

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Dedicated to all my Lykor's 😳

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''Let's check him out naa''
Haayeee ... ''Hey Rey'' I blushed seeing him again and wished that instead of going to Shikhawat Palace he came to me ..

''Hi Beautiful!''

''I am Seema, Rey '' I was totally flushed on seeing that wink of his.

''Seema ... Nice name .. Btw gotta go darls''

He smiled at me and i ran back to my house, not able to control myself . He was the best a girl needed to be with.!
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'Bonk'
''Tu jaldi aayega or main aaun .. Gosh!''

Agitated,he went up to Shikhawat Mansion and there clashed with Smriti.

''Sorry .. Hey Smri .. Kaisi hai ? '' adressed her by hugging.

''I am fine beta.. Tu aaj late ni ho gaya clg ke liye?''

''Wat do i say now! Aapke sweetlings jaldi aa neeche tab toh we'll go to clg.''
''I so tell u .. Ladkiyon se bi zyada time lagata hai ready hone mein .. ''

''Excuse me! How dare you ..''
''Samajhte kya ho apne aap ko ? And what do you know about girls ?
Sirf morning to utha ... and then chale aaye apni ugly face leke hume disturb karne .. Just like a encroacher ''

''Shonu! Aise baat nahi karte hai ..''

''Oh Mom ! Puhlease.
Now you don't show me my infamy! Guts toh kisi aur ko sikhani chahiye ..'' darting her eyes on Rey.

''Dekha Smri. I told you ki is effusive piece of art ko musiem mein courier kar de .. But aapke sweetlings ke vajah se bach jaati hai ..''

''How Dare--''

''Kitni times bologi Miss Batcutter!''
''Ab isse pehle Smri tujhse irritate ho jaaye .. Phut!'' grinned on seeing her poor face while pinning her to wall.

Kriya boiled on his implacable actions and in a swift moment she came out of his embrace and pinned him to the adjacent wall.
''Aur agar isse pehle ki main tere saath kuch galat kar dun you move your butts outta here .. Okie baby! ''-patting his cheeks.

''Enough!-- Ab bas bhi karo tum dono...
Rey chal late ho raha hai ..''- pulling him from Kriya.

''Bro! Apne friend ko samjha dena ki bubbles kitna bi aasman mein ude .. but phoot ke toh aana zameen pe hi hai ..''

''Zam .. Phoot ? What!?''

''Oppsie! Kaise samjhoge.. Mr. angrez ko hindi toh aati ni''.

''Chale Rey!''

''Chal na ... iski bak bak sunne ko ni khada main'' .. and he passed a glare to kriya.

''Before you go, Muchu tu apne is AKD ko thoda brain donate kar de toh better hoga ...''

''Kuchu.. Chill! Bye .. Meet ya at college.''

''Ab chale Mr. Muchu .. Late ho rha hai ..''

''Don't u call him that! Woh meri copyright hai'' ..showing cute pouts.

Rey for a minute was lost in her cute pouts and the way she murmured slangs, but then was brought out of trance by swayam.
''Kya chale--chale?
Tu meri g.f hai kya jo mujhe aise pull kar rha hai jaise enchant kar rha ho bed pe le jaane ke liye.''

''Shut Up Dude!''

''Swayam .. U and ur sistah! Paagal ho dono ..
Ek dusrre ke saath reh ke lagta hai gender change ho gye tere .. I was right.. Tujhe itni der uske paas chodna ni chahiye tha .. Tu Phoolkumari and teri kuchu Dabangg!''

''Hahaha .. OMG .. ur so funny Reyu ''

''Dekh .. Ab toh saaf sun ra hun ...
Mere Bhai... pehle jaakar koi psychatrist ko mil .. nai toh tujhe control krna mushkil ho jayega ..''

Swayam passed glares to him as if saying this was enough.

While driving, rey asked --'' Tune Dostana movie ke bahaut dose toh ni liye ?''
I mean .. Abishek and John types ..

''Chinta mat kar ..''
Bringing his index finger close to his jaws --'' I'll be soft!''

''Swayam .. Chiii Man! Tu aajkal Femina pad rha hai kya?
Control .. ni toh yehi utar dunga ..''

''Fine..'' *laughing hard*
''But kya karun you are so irresistable .. Haanth kabu mein hi nahi rehte ''

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I tried to make this one funny! 😆
Hope you all enjoyed as much as i did while writing! 😛
Next update will be soon ... 😃

Love<3
~Shailja (sweets)

Edited by ---Shailu--- - 12 years ago

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madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Res:-D:-). . .
Unress. . .
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OMG. . . .
Aaahhh. . . .my stomach. . . .its still paining. . . .
Aaahh.. . . .
Woww yaar. . . .
Dat was 1 one of the most funniest and cutest update i ever read. . .
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i just cnt stop laughing yaar. . .
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1st rey flirting with smiriti,
and then dat KR convo. .
Was superb. . .
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and then ReYam Part. . .
It was super hilarious. .
Lovd it. . .
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update the nxt past super soon. .

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago