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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



sothi 5 ko ho tho utthi kab ho>?

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Posted: 12 years ago

me thora ulta chalti hn jb sb sote hain tb main jagti hn n jb sb uthte hain to me soti hn.. :P

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Posted: 12 years ago

updating😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aqvum

me thora ulta chalti hn jb sb sote hain tb main jagti hn n jb sb uthte hain to me soti hn.. :P



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Posted: 12 years ago


yipee... jaldi karo
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Guys I do not understand what you want from me. Can't you all just trust me with the story; maybe I am disappointing you, but who said life is always a bed of roses, it has thorns to and so is with maan. But I am just asking your support for the story, can't you give me that???

Every day few of you say that if anything is wrong done to maan, you will stop reading the ff. but it's a limit now, I write for my loyal readers who do understand and keep trust on me and I will keep writing for them, but I can't read those warning comments.

I know I had asked you all to say your thoughts for the ff but it doesn't mean you will give me warnings as I am in no way going to change the story whether you all like it or not.

May be I am being rude but it hurts to read such warnings.

PART 26

In morning, maan was all ready when geet was about to go for school. She was surprised to see him awake as she hadn't woke him up today, as she hadn't opened the tie knot yesterday, just pulled it out. Aap itni subah kyu uthe, she asked as she moved to him. I had some work on the way of your school so will drop you and then go there, looking at his face she very well knew it was a pure lie, he had woken up to drop her today too.

She waited for him to tell his decision about hostel, but he didn't even consider the topic. She wanted to say but she had already decided to leave the matter on him, if he will agree to allow her, he himself will say yes, otherwise his silence itself is a "no" for her.

Maan dropped geet and went away. Geet and meera met at door as they rushed to assembly. They were the one to reach first to their class after assembly, geet saw a girl with her head down on table, sitting in the back row while a boy was standing beside her. geet nudged meera and asked, who is she???

Meera shook her head and said, why don't you ask yourself??? giving her a wink. Geet looked confused ta both of the students who were still oblivious to their presence. Geet went to them and asked worriedly, are you ok??? Girl didn't lifted her head, while the boy said, she was feeling congested in assembly that's why I brought her here, let her rest, as he placed a comforting hand on girl's shoulder, while earning a flare from meera for that.

He immediately lifted his hand, and said meera, you here, assembly ended earlier today, laughing sheepishly. Geet got worried and said, did you made her drink water, it will help her, while she took out bottle from her bag. Yash wanted to laugh out loud hearing geet's worried voice but controlled seeing fuming meera.

Geet stop yaar, and they are just acting nothing serious. By the way why this drama today, and wake her up, kitna soti hai ye, she said as she jerked pari roughly breaking her slumber. Yash laughed out loud seeing pari yawn and push meera away while geet stood confused in the corner.

Aaj madam came late and was damn sleepy so we excused ourselves with that congestion idea and came here, so she can complete her beauty sleep while I can complete my next level of angry birds, he said giving a wink to pari, who was checking her hair and face in hand mirror she carries always.

Yash was the coolest guy in the class, carefree and with little worries of life. You will find him always with that silly smile on his face which could bring an instant smile on yours. He knows how to enjoy life, but that doesn't mean he is a brat, he loves his parents and his family more than he loves himself. If left on him, he would have bunked school every single day but just because his mom wanted him to carry over the multimillion business of his dad to more success, he is in here, india's biggest school on his capabilities not because of his dad's power.

Pari is a little bubbly and cute girl and aspiring model. Her favourite hobbies are to make up and sleep or shall I say beauty sleep, being the lazy bum she is. She is a friend with whom you can say anything but you can't expect any solution for any problem as she herself is a problem most of the time. A girl good at heart, and loves her friends the most after her makeup kit.

Gosh you are too much, whole year you bunk assemblies and none of the council member stops you buys because of so real acting of yours. And this pari, always want to sleep or do makeup uff, fed up of you two. And I forgot, meet geet, remember I mentioned about her yesterday, and geet this is Pari and Yash, two biggest fools of our class, said meera

Geet smiled seeing the friendship between them, as she remembered her own old friends. They used to be best buddies like them but now, no contact with them. She knew they must have been worried for some time but with new class and friends, she would be forgotten too.

Yash and pari said hellos to her, as they took their seats in the middle row. Any information of mish, asked meera, as whole class got filled with students now. yaeh, she is back to her favourite place, must be coming in few minutes. As professor shekhawat greeted them and started class, he was interrupted in mid by a loud 'may I come in, sorry professor am again late'.

Professor turned to look at the tallest girl in class, as she stood holding her bag which he was sure doesn't have even a single book relating to studies. She was wearing a jacket and baggy trousers as she tried to hold her messy hairs in place.

Misha, the coolest girl in whole school or rather in whole country, she is the only girl in whole school who plays every sports that too with boys and win over them too let it be rough football, or brainy chess. Boys are scared of her as she gyms everyday for atleast an hour and messing with her means a reward of a strong punch on your eye. But the think that makes her scared is studies; you won't talk books with her as you won't get any answer from her. She studies just to pass the class, and thanks to meera and her notes, she reaches distinction easily and that's more than she could wish.

Misha, first day in class eleventh and again late, you are really hopeless and don't say that sorry with that foolish grin, now go and take your seat.


Sir it isn't my fault, you know football tournament is on the way and am the captain, so I need to make my team ready that's why got late. She said as she moved toward meera's table but meera didn't gave her space, then looked at pari who refused to look at her, giving a glare to both, she roughly pushed meera and sat beside her.

Misha that's your pretext everyday, so am used too of it. Now maan if you are ready can I start my lecture back, he said in sarcasm as he again addressed the class.

Mish, just create some space or I will die here, you are stinking so badly, said meera as she scrunched her nose while geet kept her handkerchief on her nose. What can I do, if you are on ground for more than an hour, then only you will understand my condition?

Can't you take shower before coming here, kal se am not going to sit near you that's for sure and ha this is geet, meera said pointing to geet.

Misha gave a biggest grin to geet as a gesture of hello and then they both turned to class.

Next day, geet was ready to go when maan came and gave her a letter. She wondered what it is. She knew he isn't allowing her as he didn't said anything yesterday, so it was a clear no from his side. She opened the letter and read it and couldn't hide that biggest smile as she hugged him by waist.

Thankyou thankyou thankyou very much, I had lost all hope for that, but I knew you won't refuse me. She said as she came out of the hug. Maan smiled at her and said, I have given permission but with a condition that anything wrong and you will tell me that very moment or you will be back here the very next day. Am I clear, he said giving his strict look.

She nodded smilingly as she saw the glow in his eyes. She expected him to be sad but suddenly there wasn't any pain or hurt in his eyes now, it was a happiness the reason for which is still alien to her. maan patted her cheek smilingly as they moved to school.

Meera met geet in assembly with rest of gang. Geet hugged meera tightly as she showed the letter to her. meera shrugged her shoulder smilingly as she said I know it before you knew idiot. Geet looked at her confused. Maan bhai called me yesterday and you know what he talked to me for an hour just to confirm that hostel is safe and nice, food accha hai ki nhi, strictness to nhi hai na, and wagaira wagaira. Ab itne questions ke baad to it was confirm I had got my roommate, said meera with a smile.

Geet was shocked with the peace of information. She didn't know what to say now.

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Edited by neha512 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
not shocked ... maans permission was expected... but y is he not sad???

will edit tom ... with my rest of bakwaas...

neha and anu ...gn ...


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loved the new characters in the story
... especially misha... i havent seen that serial, but i liked her character in that... a complete tom boy... no faalthu bakwaas... looking forward for many masti by these...

kaash i could give this maan a jaado ki jhappi... he is such a sweetheart
... its obvious that he let her stay in hostel only for her sake...

but y he is happy??? kahi maan ne job chodke hostel ke paas dera tho nahi jama raha???
just kidding... am not able to figure out y he is happy?but i liked the fact that geet too noticed his happiness and is confused!!

geet shocked hearing meera ... oyeee geet there will definitely more to come... maan is such a darling that he will continue to give such sweet shocks to u...

with regard to the note...though i know that u know this, but still am saying... i trust u dear
... the way u have made me addicted with the story, am sure u will continue to spread this magic ... and with regard to dhamkis... u r getting that only becoz they love ur work... i know u may feel bad hearing it... but still ... plzzz continue with the awesome work and at this pace... dont even think to rush...

did i tell u am so happy that i came first...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

bit sad that geet will leave fr hostl😔

bt i know it is gud fr thm only..😊

plz kuch cuty cuty se maneet momnts b rakhna..😳

loved the updt..

G.N neha n lakshmi.. sweet dreamz..🥱

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Posted: 12 years ago
We trust you with the story... Don't be upset dear..
I am sure when the happy times come, everybody will be dancing...
Aww, he put her happiness in front of his...
Cute scenes between the students
Thanks for updating
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Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
carry on with your pace... it going awesome...
readers get little aggressive dear and you have to keep patience with them... its their love for Maaneet and they can't see either Geet or Maan in pain.. that's simple reason for their anger...
but you write the story with your pace or else the story will get disconnected... I am personally loving the flow...
My heart goes for Maan... ufff his love for her.. awesome
if the story is not touching readers will not react... if you are writing beautifully, readers get attached and thus they ract...

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