ArHi FF: Vivaah~ Chapter 1 pg.33

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Ritu

@.khanak.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ritu

@.khanak.

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Posted: 12 years ago

~ Characters:

Arnav Singh Raizada: A ruthless and handsome busniss tycoon of 26 years.He doesn't believe into love anymore.In his college life he used to be the heartthrob of everyone and the cocky playboy but there is no time and no space for this stupid things anymore in his life because of some past story.Arnav hates his father,lies and betrayal.

Khushi Mehta/Singh Raizada: Khushi is that sweet next door girl and 26 years old.She is a warmhearted person and daughter of a famous surgeon and soon going to be a gynecologist.Khushi has hidden lots of pain in her soul.She listens and helps everyone but never shares her pain.

There are lots of secrets hidden in her innocent soul.

Aditya Singh Raizada: Arnav's father.Doesn't get along with his son very well but gives his

best but always fails.Inwardly he loves his son.He also loves Khushi a lot.

Anjali Raizada: Arnav's elder sister and mother of two daughters: Pari and Gunjan.Anjali is sweet and loveable (well actually almost like the IPK-Anjali ALMOST)

Antara Singh Raizada: Arnav's younger sister who is still in college and loved by everyone but also a spoilt little princess.

There are many many more characters in this story but yeah gotta keep the suspense I mean I already revealed too much.

Itni paise main itna hi milega😳😆

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

FIRSTTT

u..

gave me..

a..

SHOUT OUT.

*Dies*

LOL

Love ya too babes :D

OMFG

THAT WAS FREAKIN AMAZINGGG

*Wipes a tear*

I remember we once had this convo on scraps where u told me u will write an FF sometime in future that wud be titled as "Vivaah" and u did it babes <3 :D

and it's awesomeee

I am so soo sooo waiting for this <3

Arnav's character is so..woah.

And the quotes u used were amazinggg ughh ur awesomeee

LOVE YA

~Ur Fangurl [Vani]

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Siva

@siva2901

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow Ritu U back 🥳

Really Missed ur ff's Now I am very Happy to c u Again🤗

Me Second dnchak dinchak😃😆😳

Awesome Prologue dear👏👏👏

Love to read more so pls continue soon 😳

Edited by siva2901 - 12 years ago

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Simran

@-HoneyBoo-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Feels dejected and leaves...

EDIT!...
Just because im giving an essAy here doesnt mean im tAlking to you!...HPMH...LAAD GOVERNORE KAHIN KE!... Watch how i pareshaan u know *smirks evily*
Im gonna be formal though!...
So here it goes!...

HELLO RITU (dammit ...being formal to a sister is hard)...dear (*snorts*..."dear"...really Sim?...)this was a lovely prologue...I loved everything about it and the setting is just wonderful!...Poor Khushi...the doll has to suffer just because of some silly misunderstanding i suppose right?...

Whats in the contract Ritu dear?...(*smacks head*...syapa...phite muh mera)...

I thorougly enjoyed the scene where she finds it really hard to decide whether she should sit on the bed bollywood style or stand like a retard...(I wud have started jumping on the bed...i mean rose petals everywhere...*shit*...forgot i was being formal *shoots an angry glare at Ritu*...)...
I hope that the misunderstanding becomes clear and their marriage would be a sacred bond with souls and not a f**king contract...

I DEMAND you update sooner and thats my final word..Keh diya toh bas keh diya!...
Behen hoon tumhari...its my "Hak"

I really want to know what the future holds for Arhi in this lovely FF of yours!
And I would gladly comment longer when you update the next chapter!

So Ritu...stop swooning over SiRi and get ur hands on that keyboard and open up microsoft word and type 15 pages worth of Chapter...BAS!

As of now...lovely and epic start...love everything!..
Thank you for the pm ...

PS: I know you gave me a shoutout...but its doesnt mean This Sundri cant be mad at her Rakshas *supresses a laugh*

If u forgot my name..its ...

-Simran

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achu_arshi

@achu_arshi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow Ritu Neww FF from you!! i really missed you so much

Glad you are back :D

party time then ;)

cool concept (LOL)

why Arnav had to be such a idiot always?! always hurting khushi?!!

can't wait to know what will happen now!! is it any contract paper?

ok calm, i will wait for next chapter :D

😆

Edited by achu_arshi - 12 years ago

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fan09

@fan09

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

thought it would be like the movie vivaah with shahid kapoor...😳
still, no worries... the story seems really interesting...
many secrets to be revealed...😲😲😲

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popstar

@popstar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Nice start
Thanx 4 the pm

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anu_j_menon

@anu_j_menon

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

nice prologue...loved it...

waiting 4 d update...

continue soon...

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Deeksha

@dinku93

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Hello

The synopsis made me dream about my future life partner and just below that what I read and I was like "what the hell there is no link between these two ".

Then I read the characters and I was like "that's interesting ".

can I get a update soon..just a bit curious for the story to unfold'.

Edited by dinku93 - 12 years ago