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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

awww Avibig hug emoticon

take care of urself yarflower smiley
awesome Teaser muahhh

Thanks Sona...
glad you liked...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think I am going to Love Dev. Kill me🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

😎
Naintara *whistling* 😃
Avi, very less ppl show Naintara in a nyc n positive character, confessing li'l of my likes, I wud say, I've never disliked the lady, apart from her particular character in GHSP .. Otherwise I've alwyz loved her character whenever any writer has portrayed her in a positive light... N believe me when I say that Avi, I simply loved the character yew presented her in 👏 I thought the lady who played her role, the original, Karishma was so elegant and lovely, it was a shame she was a vamp; not to say that only ugly people can be vamps😆, but there was so much class in that girl, I liked her.
Now comes the starting, Hrithik Man I even loved him in that blue shirt wid red pants 😆 Some ppl may find it funny but Hrithik did look charming then too 😳
Song's soft n melodious .. Hrithik-Song combo , mast 😉 For all my HR pagal pankhes here..
🤗🤗Hoooh ! bus The harshest of the reality of our society ! I grinned wid Naintara's reaction... Hit hai bandi 😃 N then that auntie, dil to kr rha tha k Naintara unke bhi ek lagaye, but khair wo to nhi hosakta tha, but dil garden garden hogya wid her words to that auntie 😆 👏 Dialogues were very powerful n I love the strength each word portrayed 👏 I had fun writing it. I had that experience in Bombay trains once and I wanted to do what NT did but alas I don't wear high heels😆 aur mere bhai ne usko dhaka de diya..Clap
Dev bechara 😆
The Khurana himself got slapped on very first day wid no mistake of his , poor Dev 😆 I can imagine Abhinav putting his hand on his cheek having most innocent expression n thinking wat did he actually do to deserve such 'warmed' welcome, oopsie, I mean slap 😆 😆 😆
Prologue n Dev's thought were definitely about Naintara, I got that 😉 Thank you.. I also wanted to slap Dev for what he did to Geet so I am taking my badla...
In love wid the story Avi 👏 Dun take this from ur friend take it from a reader 😃
Dev-Naintara ki spicy love story k lye em more than waiting 😳
But hamaraa seedha sadha lover boy is also awaited 😉
When I read Geet's name there, instantly a thought crossed my otherwise useless top floor k she isn't the one wid Dev, but I never said that 😳
Khair, lastly Dun ever think k this isn't appealing enough , yew r doing absolutely fab job, n I mean that jaani 🤗

Thank you so much Naureen. Tum sab mera saath de rahe hai na, toh I have decided that I will continue even if no one else reads but you guys!
🤗 Get ready for my Maan soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sooper Dooper Teaser Avi 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Teaser dil khush kar gaya Avi 😉
desperately n now more eagerly waiting for 'Tum aaye to aaya mujhe yaad Gali me aaj chand nikla' 🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Teaser dil khush kar gaya Avi 😉
desperately n now more eagerly waiting for 'Tum aaye to aaya mujhe yaad Gali me aaj chand nikla' 🥳

Kuch aur sooja hi nahi iske siwa...
your and my fav hai, toh chipka diya...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj

chalo bhai.!! hum toh teaser pe hi first aake naach lenge!!



Yehi or sakti hai Tu 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aaj bohut better hoon.
Sab paper work aur sab sort karna padega accident ka so busy with that.
Meri aur Nauri ki pasand ka song tujhe accha laga?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Aaj bohut better hoon.
Sab paper work aur sab sort karna padega accident ka so busy with that.
Meri aur Nauri ki pasand ka song tujhe accha laga?



Maine hi sunwaya hai usko yeh song 😉 😃
I just dis 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Thanks for putting that note up Avi. It definitely clears out a lot of confusions readers have been feeling. 😊

I am hoping that is so..
Ahh!! I love the song! And HR too. 😳 Confession, woh bhi aapse your Honor...😆

So this girl hates the male population in general. Period. But by the little echos of the words from her past, I can't say that her hatred towards that gender is biased or baseless. I'm curious to find out why she dreamt of HR turning into Dev Khurana and why she believes that there can be no Dev Khurana in her life.Her past has something to do with that...Itching to write their love story first, then bring it out.

I've had a discussion with Onir once about what dreams actually mean, whether they're the suppressed desires coming to us when we're the most vulnerable or not. Of course, this debate will never end with both parties agreeing on a single thing but I do believe that some dreams are the suppressed desires. The ones that we constantly keep locked up in a part of our mind and never let them come out when we're conscious.

I loved loved loved the way she stomped on that idiot's foot! A very-well deserved one! And he had the guts to chide her after that act of his?! 😲 Demented!

I practically said 'oh yeah!' when she gave it back to the fat aunty. Agrees that she did speak up for the girl but when? There was no use of it then. Seriously, such people can only stand by and watch, not stand up for the truth for fear of getting involved in things. But when it's them in the line of fire, all they're left with is afsos!
😆 Tu itni khatarnak ho sakti hai, maine kabhi socha nahi...😆For this girl, it happened what happens so often with us. The bad gets worse and the worse turns to worst. I don't think anything can be worse than slapping your new boss on the first day! 😆

I had an Indian boss that I have mentally slapped many a time when I was straight out of college.. Dufus, credit stealer, mistake passer and blamer tha...
Now now! That was one dhamakedaar entry of Naintara! There's been very few stories where I've liked the women who were actually vamps in the show but I can say that I'm going to love this woman. She's definitely something! Can't wait to witness the fireworks that explode between DevTara! 😃
Yeah me too, waiting to present that ...
One thing I really am waiting to know is Geet's name came up in the second chapter, how did she end ho with Khuranas and as a favourite of the matriarch. But don't worry. I'm equally eager to read DevTara as well.
Coming in the next part about Geet...

Thanks for this update Avi! 🤗

Just in time before the teaser...😆

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