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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
2nd part is as beautiful as 1st.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Thanks for the nice SS. Hope CVs steal your idea of Anandi's further education.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
simply sweet
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice OS! Sweet and lovely! Pl continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1 Scene 3



'Yes please, can you give me regular coffee black with no sugar and one cappuccino light and sweet' said Shiv through the drive in counter


'Ji medium, thank you' continued Shiv


'Anandi, aapko kuch khana hai. aapnay tho sahih tarah sey breakfast bhi nahi Kiya' said Shiv


Anandi looked at shiv and then simply shook her head in a no.


'Breakfast!? she thought.


Her thoughts again sailed away to the morning when she had made yet another important decision.


Anandi was at the kitchen with Ira and Meenu helping to prepare breakfast.

Ira and Meenu where throwing furtive glances at each other, not knowing how to approach an unusually silent Anandi.


'Anandi, kuch pareshan lag rahi ho. Sabh kuch teekh hai na beta' asked Meenakshi


'Kya choti ma...ji.. han sabh teekh hai... kiyun?' said Anandi surprised.

'Beta, kahin thum kal ..sanchi ki bataon sey...'started Ira


'Nahi nahi ma. Aisi koi baat nahi' assured Anandi


'tho phir kya baat hai beta. Agar thum bataogi nahi tho meray demag main tarah tarah kay khayal athay rahengay' continued Ira


'Shiv aur thumaray...'she yet again said now her face clearly showing worry


'Bilkul nahi ma. Shiv tho kabhi bhi.. mera matlab hai unkay saat... nahi ma' she finally concluded, her face slightly pink.


'abh bata hi do Anandi, thum didi ko warna voh tho pareshan hothi rahengi pura din' smiled Meenakshi


'Ma voh... mujhe aapsey ijazat leni hai' said Anandi tentatively


'kis baat ki beta' asked Ira


'aapko meray college janay sey...'started Anandi meekly


'Lo... thum is baat sey pareshan thi. Main bhi kya kya soch rahi thi...'laughed out Ira.


'bhala mujhe kya ayetraz ho saktha hai beta. Yeh tho bohot achi baat hai aur Shiv nay bohot acha socha hai. Balkay main kudh chahthi thi ki thum kuch karo yahan aaker. Warna ghar per bait ker bore ho jathi' said Ira


Aanandi smiled. She remembered how the very thought of study used to bring a shiver of fear down her spine in her childhood. Only after many years of struggle was she finally able to go ahead with achieving her dreams.


'kuch aur baat bhi hai...'asked ira again..


'ji..voh... college main ladkay ladkiyan ikhatay hothay hain..'said Anandi hesitantly


'Han tho?'asked a confused Ira


'Yahan ka mahol, alag hai , isilye maine kafi socha ki shayad mera pallu lena college main sahih nahi hoga' said Anandi in a slow voice.

'Lekin ma..agar aapko nahi sahi lagtha tho ...'


Ira and Meenakshi started to laugh out loud.


'Anandi, thum bhi na. Are didi aur mujhe thum roz dekhthi ho. Kya humaray ser per pallu hai?

aur kya hum bahar nahi jaathi? jahan per ladkay bhi ho' said Meenu laughing.


Anandi smiled once again.


'Beta jo thumhay sahih lagay voh kerna. Meray liye thumharay aur sanchi main koi farak nahi hai. agay sey aisi choti baton ke liye mujhsey ijazat mangnay ke bhi zaroorat nahi hai. Mujhe thumharay har faislay per pura bharosa hai ' said Ira confidently.




'Anandi ji coffee pee lijiye' said shiv

His voice seemed to have brought back Anandi to senses.


Anandi took the cup from Shiv and started sipping on it.


'Shiv, aap mujhe college tak tho drop ker rahe hain lekin aap andhar math aayiyega' said Anandi abruptly


'kiyun?' said Shiv taken aback


He had wanted to go with Anandi and be a part of this special moment. He had been counting on it for days. A wave of disappointment flowed through his eyes.


'Sorry shiv. main janthi hun ki aap meray saath chalna chahthay lekin aapko tho wahan sabh janthay hain na? asked Anandi


Shiv nodded in agreement


'tho pehlay din hi agar aap meray saath chalengay tho shayad voh mujhe ek aam student ki tarah na treat karay' said Anandi


Shiv looked at her and smiled.


'teekh hai. main aapko bahar gate tak chod dunga aur wapis lenay bhi aaunga' said shiv smiling.



Anandi smiled at Shiv and continued sipping her coffee.



'Shiv kya aap meray saath shopping per chal sakthay hain' asked Anandi


Shiv was sitting on the sofa and working on his laptop.

'Han Anandi chalthay hain' said Shiv

'Waise udaipur aathay hain aapko shopping ka bhoot sawar ho jatha hai' he said teasingly.


'Phir sey sadiyan khareedni hai?' he asked


'nahi...kuch aur' said Anandi.


Shiv and Anandi left to the nearest mall. Anandi had picked up few shalwar kameez.


'Anandi aap inka size check ker sakthi ho. Yahan dressing room bhi hai' said Shiv

'Nahi shiv mujhe.. acha nahi lagtha is tarah...' she said blushing

'Teekh hai ghar jaker dekh lijiye ga. Agar sahih nahi hua tho return kernay aa jayengay' said Shiv softly as they headed towards the counter to pay.



'Anandi thum bohot pyari lag rahi ho' Said Ira

'Wow BHabi, aapka dress bohot acha hai' said Sanchi was just passing by


Somehow hearing that from sanchi made her feel a little better.


She slowly looked at Shiv to see his reaction but was suddenly interrupted by Mahi who had then decided to join them.


'Vah bhabhi aap tho aaj bohot achi lag rahi hain' said Mahi..


Anandi was just smiling at the reaction of every family member who had started to praise her, but the most awaited reaction was yet to come.


Anandi went back into her room to change into her regular clothing, when suddenly she felt two strong arms make their way past through her tiny waist.

A shiver ran through her body that made her gasp


'shhh... main hun' whispered shiv

'janthi hun ki aap hain. Aur kon aisi harkat ker saktha hai ' said Anandi shyly


'aap bohot khobsurat lag rahi hain' said shiv.

'Thank you ' replied Anandi


Shiv slowly placed a small kiss on her neck. It sent shivers down her whole body.


'shiv darwaza khula hai.. ' whispered Anandi


'Tho... meri biwi hai, meri merzi..main jo chahay karun' said Shiv naughtily

Anandi blushed profusely



'Anandi .. abhi college aa jayega. Aap zara apnay saaray documents check ker lijiye ek dafa' said Shiv bringing Anandi back to earth.


'aap teekh tho hai na' asked Shiv.


Anandi's cheeks were flushed.


'Ji ...ji said Anandi ruffling her bag and putting a lock of hair behind her ears.


Shiv smiled at her nervous state and continued driving.


Edited by Suchi-Virmanian - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Suchi superfast update from u...😊
Aaj sab Aji ka look upgrade kar rahe hain... 😊... High time...
Cant wait 4 her studies 2 begin...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
suchiii..tum phir se mujhe revengfull banane lag pari ho...šŸ˜‰šŸ˜Š.abhi abhi to ek purana sapna pura hua..adha adhura hi sahi...lekin phir se tumne ek aur purani karwi yaad ko jagaya...mumbai trip...yeh sapna kya kabhi poora hoga...kya maloom...lekn u can do that in yr SS.DON'T UšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

but great going...love u šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Thank you for the comments dear. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
good going...šŸ‘

keep it up...šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
hey suchi...awsum update...

wooow m lovng d change in A...no pallu...salwar -kameez grt going
waitng fr ur nxt update

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