taani os... only fro taani lovers

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here is os on current track

Taarey haters stay away, ita not for u….i don't want ur meaningless comments in my post…

Swayam comes late to home…he goes to kichen to eat… he sees nothing is ther in kicten….

Taani just enterd kictchen to prepare food…..

Swayum saw her with angry….he shouted…:- so taani u ve changed too lot…. Firstly u dint give me respect…. Now u r treating me as stranger….

Ta:- wot did I do now….

Sw:- u dint even cook anything fro me… daily u use to cook today wot happened all of sudden….oh I m getting now… dat I m not important to u …. So for u I m not ur brother now…. Fine…. Even I don't need any blood relation feeling…. Just u r my cousin I m allowing u too stay in this home… after college u can go back to jodhpur… from today onwards we will ve official talks in college.. no more personal talks…. U r just like a paying guest for me…..he outbursts and leave to his room……..

Taani was in utter shock by her bhai reaction….she left to her room sobbing….. bhai I never knew u wud react like this to me… u ve hurted me more today….u r hurting me more and more……

She cried badly……….she was crying till morning ……….. so she slept……….in morning….

She dint attend the clg that day…..

Swayam entered college…….met with all of friends and was chit chatting… no one inquired about taani..

Just then rey came..:- hello guys……..

D3:- hey rey…..

Re:- swayam taani mera phone kyun nahi uta rahi… its swiched off…. Wot happened is she all ryt…

Sw:- I don't know rey … well she is not my sister any more… so don't ask any questions about her….

Rey:- tum thik hona….. swayam wot happened…..

Swayam explained sterday's 9t scene

Rey :- no ways taani nwvwr do such thing swayam….

Sw:- I m her brother u need not to support her….

Rey shuts his mouth fro swayam's rude reply… he wanted to see taani very badly… coz he knew how much she was hurt last 9t

Gang:- well swayam u did a good job…….taani aise kiya….. she has changed a lot dude……

All stared rey at that moment … he got frustrated by their comments….

Ni:- chod na rey….taani has changed… atleast now ditch her….

Sw:- wow hold on I m angry on taani… dat doesn't mean I ll let her hurt like this…

Sh cutting the convo:- guys we ve dance offer at memorium hall don't forget… its already 11 ,,, we shuld reach @ 12… get ready…

Sw:- teek hai… chaliye…

All leaves… but rey stand still .. he got hurt by Vicky words….

Sh:- rey come…

Re:- I m not interstd Sharon… u guys carry on….

Sh:- don't say me ur girl friend has asked u to take for date noe…

Re:- shut up Sharon….. taani is not like that……… well I m not interested by myself… so I m not coming…. Bye……

Sh:- oh leaving bff coz of gf…… fine wotever…. She leaves with attitude….

Rey I ve to speak with taani y did she do like this to swayam….

He leaves to taayam home…

He goes from window…. He saw taani…….. taani had slept on floor …. Ahe had cupeed her whole body with fear……… her face were indicating how much she had cried…. Her body was wet due to sweat……..

Rey to himself:- taani yesi situation mein mein kabhi dekha… kitna hurt huhi hai mere taani….

He goes towards her…. Taani taani he calls….

Taani still wont get up…. He rubbed her fore head taani get up its me rey….

Taani slowing opening her eyes….her eyes were full red….

As soon as she saw rey she hugged him…… but lost her balnce due to heavy fever……..

Rey when hugs her found she has a high fever……

Re:- taani u r not well…… come lts go to doc….

Ta:- no rey its k…….. she got tears as she saw his concern…

Rey:- kya hua tanai kal…… swayam was angry … wot happened sweetheart?????

Ta starts sobbing:- rey yesterday I came home at 9:30…. It was late…. Just then bahi came….. after getting fresh I went to kicken to cook food…. But bhai outbursted at me…. She told him everything and started crying continuosly………

Rey hugged her,,,,,,, don't worry taani ,,, swayam can never be angry on u more… after all ne is ur bro…

Ta:- no rey… he totally forgotten the fact that I m not his sister… for him also I m just a gs…..

Rey cupped her face…. And said fine everything will be k…. now come on ll take u too doctor…u r burning taani…

Ta:- rey I need water….

Re took the glass and made taani to drink it…

Taaani dint have strength to stand…

Rey lifted her and placed her on bed….

Ta:- thanks rey… I don't need doc…. I ll ve tablets….

Re:- cool… waise mein tablet aur breakfast lekhar aata hoon… till then u take rest…

Taani nodded….

Rey bring breakfast and tablets…

He will feed her and makes her to have tablet…

Re:- now u sleep….

Ta:- kya mein apki lap mein aaram karoon

Rey smiled :- of course sweet heart … she slept on rey's lap…rey was twirling her hair….

Ta:- rey

Re:- ha taani

Ta:- kyun aapne college bunk kiya….

Re:- agar meri jaan itna hurt hua hai…..toh how do I get interst on other activities..

Taani smiled :- thanks rey…… bhai kaisa hai… aur gang kha rehearsals kaisi ho rahe hai….

Re:- taani abhi aaram karo…. Jyada bath karna band karo…. Waise aaj d3 kha dance performance hai memorium hall mein….so no one in college….

Ta:- aur aap yahan kya kar rahe hain…

Re:- huh taani wot u mean…

Ta:- aap bhi d3 gang kha hissa hai…. Toh aap bhi wahah hona chayiye na..

Re:- no way taani… how can I leave u like this…

Ta:- rey I know u wont leave me…. First of all all are angry on me…. I know it was my fault in bashing my brother but I realized later…. Now if u leave the group for me…. They gonna surely hate me more………

So rey I don't want any rifts in d3 coz of me so u leave now…

Re:- but taani

Ta:- rey u love me na….

Re nods….yes

Ta:- so go and perform please for my sake………

Ray thinks she is ryt and gives a peck on taani forehead… and keeps her head on pillow… and covers blanket…..

Taani:- bye rey all the best…

Rey:- by evening my taani must be recovered… k

Ta:- k boss….. now leave….

Rey smiles and leaves …

In hall…. Vicky :- rey toh jyada hi arrogant hua….

Sw:- oh toh hai…

Sh:- aaj rey ne mera trust tod diya…. Taani became more important than me…. All gang was scolding taani due to her rey dint join us….

Rey hears every ones convo…. He felt bad inside…. But he tried to manage … after all his d3 gang it was…

Re:- he guys I m here……..

Sharon jumped :- I know rey u wont break my trust … I know u wuld come….

Vic to nil:- look rey is haapy inside it means rey dictched taani I think so

Swayam listens to it:- oh no yesa hoyi nahi sakta…. Taani will scatter all alone….

But she deserved it I think hoti koun mein inka relation mein hath rakne ke liye……..

Finally rey and gang gave a good performance …. All reached college in evening 5……..

Vp sir calls ags,gs,acs……..

Every one enters cabin

Vp:- so how is ur dance rehearsals going on….

All 3:- good sir…..

Vp:- I don't think so… cause I dint get any routine of ur dance for ndc…….

All 3 murmered:- are we did routine practice for d3 dint do it for ndc then how can we give……

Vp :- I dint get that…. Waise taani is in leave today… so I require u sharon and rey to make the tape and send it by evening 7…….

Sh & rey :- k sir…

Vp:- k guys u can leave….

All 3 was about to leave…

Vp:- swayam one minute…

Sw;- s sir…

Vp:- how is taani now…. She had a light fever sterday… moreover she left at 9 ….. so how she is now…

Swayam:- did she leave home at 9 …..

Vp:- ya u dint see her…

Re:- sir actually swayam had stayed in my home… so he don't know about taani fever……

Vp:- oh k take care of her … I want her badly as I ve given full responsibily of ndc to her… as she is gs…

Sw( hurt):- k sir…. I ll

All came out … met d3 gang…

Sw:- vhe wot I have made… I hurted her …..

Ni:- wot happened

Sh:- guys actually ther was no taani fault strday… she was late to home… but swayam misunderstood her…

Neha:- oh neha feeling bad…

Aashi:- sad types honge taani…

Swa to rey:- kya tumse uske sath bath huhi…

Re:- don't worry she is fine… she had high fever by now she will be alryt………

Sh:- so rey y did u come to perform today… ur gf na she is….

Re:- wot u mean…

Sh :- ha waise she wud hve said u to stay with her ryt…

Re:- she is not cheap Sharon…. Today I came to perform its becoz of her…. U people are insane….. u never understand her….. I m leaving now bye…..

He left with frustration…. Calls taani….but she dint pick phone…

He thought may be she is sleeping……….& leaves for his home…

All gang felt bad among themselves….

Most hurted was swayam…I need to go now….taani is not well

Swa leave shome in hurry… he goes to taani 's room… he saw her sleeping like a small kid…

He rushed towards her… and hugged her… taani gets up by tight hug…

Sw:- I m sorry taani m sorry……I m sorry for yesterday…….

Taani smiled…I know bhai…. U din mean it…..

Both hugged in tears …. Swayam cupped her face and said:- my cutely weird behen…. I love u… he sive a peck on forehead….. how r u now… he touches her neck & says hmmm lyt fever…

Taani:- ha no fever I m alryt now….

Sw:- I know I know… come we ll ve dinner…

Ta:- k bye I ll get fresh and come….

Swayam leaves …. Taani sees her cell rey had called thrice… she calls back… he picks and say :- hi sweet heart how r u now….

Ta:- I m perfectly alryt rey… bhai bhi bath kiya. I m happy for that….

Re:- I said na everthing will bhi k…

Ta:- k now shud ve dinenr will c u tom in college …. Bye rey I love u….

Re:- love u too dr …. Bye

And next day in college every one apologise taani and taani accept and apologise for her rude behavior… everyone will have a group hug…………..

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patie thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
wow it ws short and sweet ...oww rey is so caring luv him
Edited by patie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
loved it...
kash aisa kuch hota d3 mein...
but i know it will remains as a dream only...
anywayss...os is awesum...
atleast rey ne tho taani ka saath diya happy 4 that...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww its cuteee loved it... rey is super cool n swayam awwwee after all he loves taani may b nw he can b rude bt it can't b forever(i think this word should suit for current track )... taayam n taarey r always amazing😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
just hated swayam sooo much 😡 but thank god rey was there with taani
and the so called miss diva 😡
how cheap of nil and vicky 😡
rey is dam sweet 😳
the ending was amazing , thank god they understood taani
brilliant job dear 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
That was absolutely beautifull.. 👏 👏 👏
Hope tayaam misunderstanding ends with a scene Like this and their bond gets stronger after this track.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was emotional nd sweet... luvd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It a wonderful OS so senti but I love it, this gang is something else telling Rey to ditch Taani and Swayam saying all those rude things to her. She is not his cook to always feed, and Rey I am so proud of him. He is so caring love the way he take care of Taani. U did an excellent job I love your OS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
this one was really sweet... i m nt getting words to say hw much happy i m aftr reading ths os... it really feels nice whn al d mu s r cleared n atleast smone stood wt taani dis tym n i love rey for that...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
nice os dear...
taarey bonding was so nice...

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