Rishbala FF Kiss of Poisonous Love#4 #5 link pg138 - Page 52

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part..
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thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-18

Awesome grahparvash !!!!!

in diff astiyle by CD 😉

oh god !!! Some dialogues were uff !!!!! Karne ki rat hai 😆 Besharam CD 🤣 bhoot banga 😆

PERFECT !!!

Edited by .bloom. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome ...

moi sealing my lips for SR part... 😆
loved it...
CD...why can't u miss madhu???????? then me got why... *wink*
oh god!!!!!!! trishna......
but me loved theee invisible slap by rk... ...maza aya trishna bachu... 🤣
feel sad for madhu.....still somewhere she feels..CD dnt love him and its a contract marriage...
enjoyed.all the 4 parts...
update soon...😛
Edited by .bloom. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
trishna ko mooh tod jawab mil gaya...

RK presented himself as bodyguard...loved it:)

Great update..

awesome precap!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb
fantastic update
liked a lot dear
very nicely written
continue soon
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tired of waiting :( update soon plzzz!!!!!
Awesome update
Edited by SnigdhaGautam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanks for the love and support dear friends. Here is the next update and I have changed the song at the last minute lol as I felt this song was more romantic. I hope u will like my song choice and this update.


Besides this some of u raised the fear that maybe in future some problems will come in Rishbala's relation and there will be misunderstandings well let me clear problems will come BUT RISHBALA WILL SAIL THROUGH IT WITH EASE BY HOLDING EACH OTHER'S HAND THERE WILL NEVER BE ANY MISUNDERSTANDING IN MY STORIES:) EVERY PROBLEM WILL MAKE THEIR RELATIONSHIP STRONGER AND WILL BIND THEM IN A BOND OF TRUE LOVE

PART 22

Trishna: It's so sad to hear that Mrs. Madhubala Rishab Kundra has to deal with her problems alone poor u I guess atleast u deserved a single bodyguard if not more

Before Madhu could gather courage to reply her back a strong manly voice replied back

The voice: Madhu is so special that she deserves a special someone to be with her day and night

The two ladies moved their heads towards the direction of the sound

Madhu's smile was an indication of her happiness. The man standing in front of them was none other than her Charming devil' her hubby HER RK.

RK walked confidently and within a matter of seconds he crushed Madhu in his embrace taking Trishna completely by shock

RK: Your personal bodyguard at your service my beloved wife

Madhu was totally surprised by RK's words

RK placed a quick sweet peck on her lips and whispered huskily

RK: Didn't I say darling that I won't miss u?

Madhu was rendered speechless; she hid her face in the cocoon of his chest as RK lifted her gracefully and started walking towards the rehersal hall opening the doors of many special and unexpected surprises that were waiting to welcome his beloved wife' HIS SOLE POSSESION HIS MADHU' ONLY HIS'

The rest of the models along with a jealous Trishna followed Rishbala towards the hall.

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Je3xzx_Axyo

Music

Madhu's eyes were welcomed with a totally unexpected scene. The entrance of the hall was decorated beautifully. A mammoth veil was placed on something that appeared like a statue and a red ribbon formed the boundary of the entrance. As soon as the guards of the new sponsor saw Rishab and Madhu they started advancing towards them; Madhu was just about to inform Rishab about that irritating sponsor and his guards when all of a sudden her mouth got completely sealed as she saw the guards bowing their heads in front of her and placing a scissor in front of eyes as if requesting her to cut the ribbon and step inside the hall' Her hall

Madhu's question filled eyes got a perfect answer through one of the most mischevious wink that RK had ever gifted her

RK: Your PERSONAL EGOISTIC SPONSOR AT UR SERVICE MADAM 😳

He kissed the tip of her nose as he revealed this truth to her

When the night has come
When the night has come and the land is dark

The associate models of Madhu started cheering happily as Trishna continued to drink the blood of her constant silent yet visible insult.

With a magical smile on her face Madhu picked the scissors and waited for RK to put her down so that she could inaugurate the hall

She signalled him through her eyes that its time that he releases her from the solace of his warmth but the typical smirk on his face was enough to make her understand that her charming devil was in no mood to leave her alone even for the minutest second. He wanted her to do the honors by resting right her in his arms' a place which belonged only to her

Madhu entangled her fingers with the fingers of his free hand and like a couple who were drenched in the rain of true love and trust both of them ripped the ribbon and thus took the first step in the paradise of Madhu's dreams.

When the night has come
When the night has come and the land is dark

For a moment or so Madhu could not believe her eyes.

Few moments back her heart had desired a simple wish of RK gifting her a token of his love in the form of a single rose but that time even in her wildest imagination she had not anticipated this action of RK

RK had brought the entire flower house right here in this hall and now she understood why the guards had not allowed her to enter the hall previously; the guards were utilizing that time to decorate the hall as an exact replica of that flower house

RK: I understand the language of ur silence Madhu u wanted a rose but when I went to purchase a special rose for u I realized none of the flowers possessed the strength to match the beauty of my wife so I purchased the whole flower house for u now u decide which flower can match the grace of myMadhu I bet u won't find any as my Rishab's Madhu is unique' 😳

Madhu didn't knew what should be her reply in front of her CD's gesture; she conveyed her feelings to him by kissing him lovingly on his cheek

RK: Darling a sweet gift but at the wrong place ☺️

Madhu hit him playfully on his chest with this teasing statement of his. RK brought Madhu closer and stepped inside the hall.

The entire hall had the feeling of a romantic night in it. The stage was grand and pearls of artificial snow that were making its way onto the stagefloor were giving a royal and divine feeling to the setting.


And the moon is the only light
And the moon is the only light
And the moon is the only light

we will seeSo darlin', darlin'

But the heart of this decoration was something else. As soon as RK stepped inside the hall carrying Madhu in his arms the veil from the hidden statue like object got lifted making every member spellbound

Right on top of the stage a larger than life setting was attracting everyone. It seemed an angelic beauty was blushing and scaterring her divinity by residing majestically on the seat of the royal moon.

When Madhu took a closer look at this appealing figure; for a moment or so; she was sure she had got completely paralysed as the figure was nothing else but HER OWN SCULPTURE MADE UP OF REAL SANDALWOOD THAT WAS SECURELY PLACED ON THE FOLDS OF THE MOON WHICH WAS MADE OF ARTIFICIAL WAX.

With a slight moistness in her eyes Madhu turned her face to admire her hubby. RK kissed her forehead and declared'

O mehrma mere mehrma
O poori hai duaa

RK: The world needs to know this truth that my angel can only be located in the excellence twinkle of the moon or the ecstasy of my arms' The dust of the earth can never be an ornament of my angel as the whole universe can happily sacrifice its divinity just to witness one innocent smile of my princess such is the speciality of u my beloved.

Madhu gave him the most loving smile that he had ever witnessed

Abb kuch bhi toh kam nahi
Tujhe paa ke lage mukammal hai khuda

A royal swing made up of real diamonds made way from the upper stage with one smile of Madhu thus making RK's statement true that the beauty of the sky will sacrifice their diamonds if Madhu gifts them their one smile

Some of the models pushed Trishna as they rushed behind Rishbala to see the first ever diamond studded swing that they had witnessed in their life.

Trishna was all ready to show her attitude but before she could create a scene in this romantic setting she landed straight on the floor with one strong push of a collegue. Her nose actually touched the dust of the ground as RK placed Madhu on the glittering decor of her special swing thus once again showcasing the difference between his lady love and the desperate attention seeker Trishna.

O rehnuma o mere rehnuma O o..o tere naam saa

Ab koi bhi lafz nahi Padhkar dekhe sau kitabe sau dafaa

Everyone was expecting RK to place Madhu on the swing but to everybody's surprise RK sat on the swing and gave a very special seat to the queen of his heart; the throne of his lap

Some of the male models whistled with this gesture of RK as Madhu hid her blushing face in the manly chest of Rishab

RK lifted her face by holding her chin and marked his signature on her rosy petals by gifting her a loving peck on her lips

He placed a bunch of keys on her palm and whispered huskily


Dildara dildara ye ratti bhar ka jag saara
Dildara Dildaara tere nazar o karam pe sab waara

RK: A marriage gift from ur CD Madhu from today this hall belongs to u. Like the gift?

It seemed Madhu's eyes had the twinkle of millions of stars at this duration of time. She simply submitted herself by getting cocooned in the arms of her man giving rise to a soul searing passionate hug

Before reciprocating to the hug RK snapped his fingers and gave a signal to one of his guards; it seemed it was time for another surprise for Madhu.

The guard understood RK's orders and went ahead to fulfill his wish

By this time Trishna got up from the floor as no one was interested to help the drama queen from front.

As soon as she got up the guard had executed RK's next surprise

Dildara dildara jag jeeta jab tujhse haara

Dildara dildara

The diamond studded swing started to sway in a rhythmic fashion forcing Madhu to break the hug partially and admire the proceedings that was going on

Heart shaped balloons made way in their direction as slowly but steadily the swing started to move in an upward direction

RK held Madhu possessively as if promising her u need not worry your SHADOW is here forever with u

Darling, darling stand by me Com'n stand by me
Stand by me

Darling, darling stand by me Com'n stand by me
Stand by me

The screen which was present adjacent to the stage started a slideshow of their Rishbala's marriage pics

With every new picture that was beautifying the screen Rishbala's special swing continued its journey to reach the topmost level of the stage wherein Madhu's Sandalwood sculpture residing on the wax moon was placed.

As soon as the swing reached the topmost level artificial clouds formed the cushion of their special swing thus making it appear as if Rishbala were moving to and fro in the heavenly swing

Madhu would have definitely considered this act as the last gesture of RK's romantic nature had her eyes not witnessed the words that flashed on the screen with their final marriage pic

RK read out the message that was getting displayed on the screen to make Madhu realize that how much importance she possesses in his life

Darling, darling stand by me
Just as long as u stand Stand by me

Darling, darling stand by me

Just as long as u stand Stand by me

RK: I may have commited countless sins but I am sure I have commited one EXCEPTIONAL GOOD DEED as a gift of which God blessed me with the most precious gem of my heart' U' Thanks for making me a part of your life Madhu; without u I was incomplete but today even if I lose my whole wealth and fame I will still remain the richest man ever in this universe as I HAVE U IN MY LIFE' THANKS FOR COMPLETING ME MADHU; U ARE MY MOST SACRED POSSESSION THAT I OWN.❤️

Sa ni sa...

Every member was getting drowned in this land of Rishbala fantasy but Trishna wanted to do something in order to ruin this moment😡

Her wicked mind got a perfect idea as a message flashed on her mobile screen.

She read the message partially and took the liberty to announce something with an evil smirk on her face

Trishna: Aise chote mote surprises toh koi bhi de sakta hai par iska ye matlab nahi ke Madhu iss jahah ki sabse lucky ladki hai. Iss waqt duniya ki sabse lucky ladki wo hai jiske husband ne aaj subah ek royal bid mein Queen Jasmine ka sabse naayab, mehnga aur anchuaa shahi kangan apni biwi k liye khareeda. Aaj k industrialists apne 4-5 industries bhi bech de tab bhi wo kangan khareed nahi paayenge itni keemat thi uss kangan ki. Wo kangan shahi khandaan ki raunak thi aur aaj tak khud maharani ne bhi usse nahi pehna matlab aaj tak wo anchuaa tha hui kya nahi wo ladki lucky' surprise ho toh aisa warna' [Anyone can give these small useless surprises but this does not prove that Madhu is the luckiest girl in this world. According to the latest newsflash the luckiest girl of this world is the one whose husband won the royal bid of Queen Jasmine and became the owner of the costliest, unique and untouched royal bangle of the queen's treasury. The richest industrialists would have to sell of their 4-5 industries if they wish to dream of owning that bangle such is the cost of it. Till date none of the royal members including the queen have used that bangle as it was regarded to be so precious so this proves that the girl whose husband won this royal bid is the luckiest wife now this is what I call a surprise or else'.]

When the night has come and the land is dark
and moon is the only light. When the night has come and the land is dark
Darlin' darlin'

Madhu was just about to revolt back when Trishna's mouth got automatically sealed with the biggest unexpected shock that her eyes bestowed on her

RK took out a box from his pocket and honored himself to hold Madhu's hand and without any further delay he placed THE ROYAL BANGLE in Madhu's wrist.

Trishna's mouth remained open as her mind digested the fact that it was RK who had won the bid for Madhu

She scrolled down her mobile screen and read the message completely and all her hopes of this turning into a dream got shattered as the newsflash displayed RK's name as the winner of the bid.

Not able to take this insult any further she walked out of the hall immediately.

O rehbara o mere rehbara o o tujhse waasta

(and the moon is the only light)

Tu manzil hai aur tu hi uss manzil ke aagee ka rasta

(when the land is dark)

Meanwhile,

RK kissed Madhu's hand lovingly once he completed the process of introducing the bangle in his beloved's hand

RK: Yaad hai Madhu tumne mujhse ek sawal kiya tha ke agar aaj ke din kismat mujhe mere kaam aur tummeinse kisi ko chunne ko kahe toh main kise chununga? Maine jawab diyatha ke main apne kaam ko chunuga. Yahi toh wo kaam tha agar aaj main waqt par nahi pauchta toh shayad ye nayab pechkash kisi aur ke haath lag jaati aur ye main kaise hone deta? Iss jahah ka sabse naayab khazana toh mere paas hai toh iss nayab kangan ki haqdaar bhi toh wahi huina? [Remember Madhu u had asked me a question if today destiny gives me a choice of making a choice between my work and you then whom would I choose? I had answered I would choose my work. This bid was that work Madhu if today I had been late even for a second then maybe this royal entity would have been someone else's possession how could have I allowed this to happen? The world's most unique gem belongs to me so this special bangle should also be her possession right?]

A pearl drop made way though her eyes

Madhu: Itna menhga par' [So costly but']

RK placed his finger on her lips and stopped her from making any further statement

Dildara dildara ye ratti bhar ka jag saara
Dildara Dildaara tere nazar o karam pe sab waara
Dildara dildara jag jeeta jab tujhse haara
Dildara dildara
Darlin' darlin' stand by me...

RK: Rishab ke liye uski Madhu se zyada keemti koi aur nahi [Nothing is more precious to Rishab than his Madhu]

This simple confession of RK made Madhu's heart the slave of his unsaid love

She hugged him and crushed him with such intensity that there was no place for air also to pass through their bodies

Darling, darling stand by me
Com'n stand by me
Stand by me

Darling, darling stand by me
Just as long as u stand

Stand by me

Her collegues whistled and applauded in happiness but she failed to hear any of these sounds as the only sound she could here as of now was RK's sweet melodious husky words that he was whispering in her ears

RK: Dildaara dildaara ye rathi bhar ka jag saara dildaara dildaara tere nazro karam pe sab waara. Dildara dildara jag jeeta jab tujhse haara'dildaar dildaara [O beloved, this whole world is of no significance,O beloved, I sacrificed everything on your kindness,O beloved, I won everything when I lost to you..
O beloved, O beloved..]

PRECAP: Madhu: Ab kya hai kehna humko hia rehna jannatein bhulake teri bahon mein panah leke [What is said to be now? I have to live forgetting the heavens taking refuge in your arms]

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Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super and mindblowing update sweetu👏👏👏 ...uff am loving this RK ...he is romantic cum possessive ...MB is really the luckiest gal
The sculpture, diamond swing and bangle very innovative...RK isn't leaving any stone unturned make his MB feel special...moi i love it ❤️
Good for that 🤬 Trish she tasted dust ...very well deserved 😡
Precap is romantic😉
Thxs for this awesome updt
Love u bless u baby
Rab rakha❤️🤗
Edited by -Priya01 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it to the core
Great update
Beautifully written pure emotions of rishbala
Great simply
Mb is lycky to have rk nd vice versa

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