kashmksh-mix ff part7 pg 19

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

loved it.. u focused fully only on nimmi.. loved it.. simmi expressed her love to nil n nil too feel d same for simmi.. nice.. loved it.. waiting for next part n i too like this game its interesting ...

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MANAVI KHATTER

@dazzlingmanavi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

really nice

bahut ache parts the but thode chutku the

pls give little long updates

liked that you focussed on nimmi

is it a kr ss or tr ?????????????

please update soon and pm me

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

this is an awesome ff

a creative story

i just hope kriyansh will be together soon ( i guess thats what u r planing ..right ?? )

the small and little swaron moments are very very cute

luved the updates

thanxx for the pm

update soon

and do pm me ... 😊

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khushboo

@khusbooluvarsha

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

that was really good

loved it :)

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

nyc little chpter but plz aksher bad ho skte haiii😃itne bade😉

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@Black_Stone

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

nyc updte dear

nimmi was gud

waiting

updte soon

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Hii. . .ashwini r8?? . .
I just now read ur story. .i mean part1 only. . .tell me frankly ki yeh T.R story hai ya KR story. , .coz seriously mai apna time waste nai ker sakti T.R story padh ke . . .
Do reply. . .
And in anycase,if its a T.R story then pls dnt send me p.m. . . .its a requst . .

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ashwini

@kria_reyd3

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Madhukumari
Hii. . .ashwini r8?? . .
I just now read ur story. .i mean part1 only. . .tell me frankly ki yeh T.R story hai ya KR story. , .coz seriously mai apna time waste nai ker sakti T.R story padh ke . . .
Do reply. . .
And in anycase,if its a T.R story then pls dnt send me p.m. . . .its a requst . .

hey chill yar. I m big kriyansh fan. Thodi der tr ko tolerte krna pdega.end me kriyansh hi sath honge.hv a patience dear. . . 😛

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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

nice update...

luvd it...

plzzz jaldi kr ko milao...

update soon nd thnx 4 de pm...

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ashwini

@kria_reyd3

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Part 3(b)

Ashi-chalo,to phir next. (phir turn ata hai sharon pr)
All-hm . . .sharon Rey-swyam,kuch puchana chahte ho to puchlo accha mauka hai.
Swyam-hm . . . .mujhe nhi lagta aisa kuch hai jo me sharon ke bare me nhi janta.vaise bhi hmari relationship to no complaints or no demands pe chalti hai.
All-hm . . . . (sharon blushes.)
Sharon-pr mujhe kuch kehna hai swyam . . . .2mse. (swyam ekdam tensed ho jata hai kyunki sharon ke aise reaction tensed krnevale hi hote hai.)
Sharon-hey,tensed mt ho jao break up nhi krnvali. (in mind)
swyam-thank god. Kuch kehna hai swyam, 2mne hr bar apne pyar ko sabit kiya hai,tab bhi jb dazzlers aur weakling me divide tha,tb bhi jb shivam mere sath tha, aur . . . . .
Swyam-plz,sharon . . .
Sharon-nhi,aj kehna hai. mere asthma ka sach janne ke bad bhi , swyam 2mne mujhe accept kiya,bina hickichat ke,aur nahi mujh pr taras khakr,aj shrf isliye sath ho kunki bahot pyar he,hai na . . . mera rude behaviour ,i know that bahot taklif hoti thi na,hr bat pe insult,taunt. . . .pr . . . .pr tumhare isi pyar se dar lagta tha mujhe,shayd isliye is relationship se dur rehti thi hmesha. . . . it just because of my mom n dad.i know that maine ye sab kisise kha nhi hai,except rey. sabko lagta hai mere pass sab kuch hai, The sharon rai prakash . . . . . Kya kmi honi chahiye mujhe.pr sab kuch hokr bhi mere pass kuch nhi hai. . .sukun bhi nhi hai me mere mom dad se bahot pyar krti hu . . . .vo duniya me sbse ache mom dad hai . . Pr hmesha unke beach ho rhe zagde dekhkr badi hui hu.mom ka vo akela pn dekhkr badi hui hu. Meri mom dad ko bahot pyar krti hai,vo dono sath to hai pr shrf duniya ko dikhane ke liye. jb choti thi tb puchti thi dad se' ap mom se pyar nhi krte kya' tb vo mujhe ignore kr dete the,aur jb thodi samjdar ho gyi, to dad ne kha-sharon,kisi insan ko apne dil me jagaah dogi na to bahot soch samj kr dena,uspr jis pr tr trus kr sko. . . . . dad ki vo bate us vaqt samaj me nhi ati thi.pr bahot gussa ata tha.mom ko itna rulane ke liye. Pr jb badi hui to vo reason pta chala,papa ke akhome gussa nhi sawal dikhe,mom ke un akho me pachtava dekha. is truth ne bahot kuch badal diya.maine mom dad ko pal pal marte hue dekha hai maine unke relationship me swyam . ...bs us dard se apne ap ko safe rakhna chati thi me.isliye apne charo tarf maine ek dewar banayi thi. Aur hr bar 2me use cross kiya,bahot gussa ata tha 2m pe,ek aisa shaks jisse mera koi emotion chupa nhi pati thi.jo mujhe bahot deeply janta tha,samjta tha. pr aj . . . .aj me yakin ke sath keh sakti hu,jo mere mom dad ke sath hua vo hmare sath kbhi nhi hoga. . . .
Swyam-(hath pkdkr)mujhe nhi pta ke 2mhare mom dad ke beach kya hua. pr mujhe ye pta hai ke ye swyam shekhavat ,tumhara hai aur hmesha tkmhara hi rahega. (n pehla nasha tune starts.)jiska pyar uski siren sharon ke liye kbhi km nahi hoga.
Rey-hm . . . .hm . .
Vicky-game ke through bahot sari bate samne aa rhi hai.
Nil-ha yar . . .
Bharat-2m logo ki machmch hogyi hogi to age bdahe.
All-ha ha. (ab turn ata hai ashi pr).
Boys-swyam ke tarf dekhte hue . . . .ashi.
Ashi-me kya batau.
Rey-jo 2mhe batana hai.
Vicky-nhi nhi 2mhara sch nhi sunna ,hm jo puchenge uska ans. do.

Bharat-abe kya puchna hai.
Neha-(in mind)khi mera babu ashi ko prupose to nhi kr rha.(n neha shouts loudly.) N . . .a . . .h . . .i
Nil-oye 2jhe kya hua.
Sharon-ha,ha neha 2mhe kya hua,r u all right na.
Neha-ha,ha me all right hu,pr mera babu isse swal nhi kr skta.

Vicky-are pr me.

Neha-nahi.nahi.nahi . . . .
Bhart-abe 2 aisa kaise kr skti hai re.
All boys-uff. Ye ladkiya.
Girls-shut up,guyz . . .
Nil-k.me puchta hu. (phir hmari diwani ke jan me jan ati hai.)
Ashi-k.k.koi types bhi pucho pr jaldi pucho.dimag ka dhi mt banao.
Nil-ha to me ye puch rha tha ke . . . .

Ashi-(irritate hoke)are jaldi types pucho.
Nil-(ekdm fast sharon ki trf na dekhte hue )ha to u like swyam na. Mtlab mera matlb ye he 2m swyam se pyar . . (yha swyam ko pta hi nhi hota hai ke kb uske dost uski romantic movie ko action movie me change krne vale hai.)uska muh to khula ka khula hi reh jata hai.

Swyam-guyz.
Rey-(swyam ko protect krte hue.) . . . .guyz,kya 2m log kuch bhi puchte ho.
Sharon-nhi,ashi ko quest. Kiya he to ans. Use dena hi padega. ashi 2m bolo.
Swyam-pr sharon.
Sharon-(in angry look) S-W-Y-A-M. (ab devi sharon ke samne hmare majnu ki kha chalti hai.) . . .
Ashi-well. . . .ha . . .i like swyam.(ab to hmarn majnu ki jan gale tk aa jati hai.) I like swyam so so much.mtlb ap mujhe psand ho.apka nature,kisi bhi situation ko bahot camly handle krna,all n al . . So,ya i like swyam . .

Boys-to . . . Ashi-to kya.
Vicky-to tumhe jealousy nhi hoti sharon se.
Ashi-nhi jealousy kyu ho.
Bharat-abe ye na hme yeda banakr chodegi, Abe 2 abhi boli na 2 swyam ko pasand krti ho,pr swyam to sharon se pyar krta hai.
Ashi-hey bhagvan. 1st of all let me clarify something. Ha me swyam ko like krti hu pr itna nhi ki unke liye jan types nhi dedungi, ya phir unhe pane ke liye +ve character se -vn nhi bnane vali.it just a crush.aur kuch nhi.
Swyam-(saans chodke.)to phir thik he ,he na sharon.

Sharon-(gusse se)kya thik he.hw dare u. Ashi 2m mere b.f. Ko like kaise kr skti ho. . . Hw dare u. (all r tensed 2 see the face of sharon.)
Ashi-me to bs . . .
Swyam-sharon,ashi to sirf.

Sharon-kya . . .ashi . Ha swyam (ye bolte vo jor jor se hsne lagti hai.) Itne tense kyu ho rhe ho guyz.chill me mazak kr rhi thi. Chalo next . .
Rey-2me to dara hi diya sharon.
Swyam-ha yar.
Sharon-(smiles)chalo next . . Ab turn ata he hmare babu pr.
Boys-hm . .vicky . .vicky
Vicky-guyz,chup baitho yar nahi mujhe kuch btana he aur nahi mera kuch secret he. irritate mt kro ab.

Girls-oye aise kaise,hr kisika secret hota he.

Swyam-ha ha hr kisika secret hota he. Vicky ko teased krte hue-ab phsi na machli jal me . .
Neha-k.k. My turn.me sawal puchungi apne babu se. . .
Vicky-lga hi tha mujhe.
Neha-babu . . .kya hua . .ab 2m mujhe like nhi krte kya.2m kitna mujhe ignore krne lge ho.pehle to aise nhi krte the.thik se bat bhi nhi krte, mujhe pta he vo break up vali bat 2me gusse me khi thi.
Vicky-gusse me nhi neha.maine bahot soch smjkr ye decision liya he.pta nhi 2mhe smj kyu nhi aa rha. mujhe koi aisi ldki mere life me nhi chahiye jise mere jitne se prob. Ho.footlose comp. Ke bad jo bhi hua usme mujhe smj me aa gya. . . . .m sorry neha pr hm saath nhi reh skte.
Rey-vicky, 2 ye kaisi bat kr rha he.
Vicky-jo sach he vo bol rha hu. . .
$haron-bs vicky,jyada ho rha he
Neha-nhi sharon bolne do use.
Sharon-neha,but
Neha-m sorry vicky . . . .sorry isliye ke maine kbhi 2mhe smja hi nhi.ye smj hi nhi payi ab 2mhe mere sath nhi rehna he. pr puri tarh se break up krne se pehale me 2mse kuch kehna chahti hu. Ke kitne asani se 2mne break up krne ka decision kr liya vo bhi akele. (us vaqt rey ko uska aur kriya ka break up vala moment yad ata he.) mujhe pta he ke meri galti thi.ke maine 2mhe smja nhi.pr me ye nhi manti ke me puri tarh se galat thi.us vaqt mujhe mere dosto ka sath dena jyada imp. Lga. . . . .us vaqt harne ka gussa tha . .maine ye nhi dekha ke opp. Side me koi he jisse me pyar krti hu. us vaqt mujhe apne dosto ke sath rehna jyada thik lga.pr 2mne ye janne ki koshish hi nhi ki babu . . .sry vicky. Vicky chup chap ekdum stunned ho ke neha ko dekh rha hota he kyunki neha ki ye side usne kbhi dekhi hi nhi rehti he.) Ke me kya sochti hu.sire keh diya ab sath me nhi rehna. Pr phir bhi maine 2mhe manane ki bahot koshish ki,pr ab bs . . M sry ke maine 2mhe bahot sataya.
Sharon-r u k.neha.
Neha-i m . K. .me ekdm thik hu.(apne asu chupate hue.) Chalo.game start kre guyz.

Note-1st of all . . .sry fr the late updte.exams chalu thi na. . . .pr ab regularly updte krne vali hu.pr mujhe ap sbse dher sare likes aur comments chahiye . . . . .

Edited by kria_reyd3 - 12 years ago

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