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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: kendra

awesome start.

rk is a divorcee and 14 years her senior ??
pls do pm me when u continue

Thankyou
how can I ever forget your Pm ...you are such a sweet heart

Originally posted by: Anjali.12

Very nice refreshing SS,,RK 's character ib the show was really murdered.😳 But at least writers like u keep the old RK alive in your wonderful stories & by beautiful writing skills..Loved the concept & Rk's character too...Madhu also very bold .Really enjoy reading it..plzz continue soon.Thanks for the pm..😊

Aww thankyou so much anjali... I am glad that you enjoyed it...it is people like you help us keep writing...you are always welcome for the PM

Originally posted by: zunaiba5

rk business man ..hmm interesting



awsum



do continue

happy that u found it interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AroraN

Nice start Dear 👍🏼

Title its self is very different...looking forward to read more 😃

Thankyou😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This also seems like it will go beyond my contemplated chapters but still will remain a SS (hopefully)
I Just forgot about this one...but will make sure to work on it regularly if you guys like it ofcourse

Chapter 2

Bittuji left and I was certain I would get all the info about Balraj choudhary and Mukund dixit by tonight. Even if what Madhu said was true what could I do? I was trying to think and find out a way that would be safe and permanent for her. After a lot of retrospection I came up with a plan but I needed two people to help me out in this Aniket singh, my only real friend. I had many who thought themselves to be my friend but I had only one whom I considered to be my friend. I gave him a call and after everyday mundane questions, the likes of how are you, Bhabhi, etc etc. I tried coming to the point. My tone but I guess tattled about my restlessness.

"Rk is everything alright" he enquired

"Oh yes all's fine, can anything ever go wrong with RK" I replied

"Where are you just now" he asked

"Office"

"I will be there In 20 mins" He said and hanged up. That is what a real friend is all about you don't have to say anything.

Now the call no. two. I dialed his number.

"Hi see me in the head office within this hour. It is urgent"

"Yes Boss"

It had not yet been 20 minutes and a huge fellow barged into my chamber.

"Without any preface or edifice blurt it out" he commanded "and where is your girl" he looked around as if looking for someone.

"My girl???" My eyes were as big as a saucer.

"What don't look at me like that. There is something going on because I cant seem to locate your girl and your man both. Is it about the girl?"

Now my saucers were all ready to fly away and land in some unknown planet. I never thought I was that transparent. Now was not the time to think about that. I knew I needed his help now so I will have to confide in him. Even if I dare not to, and I am certain he will telecast an unconfirmed news of God only knows what on his 24 hour news television. So I with all sincerity told him the entire story.

"Mukund Dixit, is he of the Shubh Vikas bank scam fame"

"I have no Idea, yeh pavitra prem ki gagri mere sar pe aaj hi phooti hai. I never had to deal with small time money lenders so I would not know."

"If he is the same one atall then unfortunately RK sir your beloved girl is in big mess. He is not only involved with money laundering but also involved in sex trade. I don't think it will be long before the police will nab him."

"Are you sure ?" I asked my heart was really sinking.

"Yes if it is the same Mukund Dixit and by what your girl has said he appears to be the same" Aniket responded

"I hope your sources of info are correct. Otherwise what I am going to do now would unnecessarily sabotage a poor girl's wedding."

"You are doubting a nationally acclaimed journalist's information circuit, by all means be my guest but at your own risk. And poor only poor?? Arrey yeh to duniya ki sabse badi Jhalli bhi hai."

"Haan wo to hai" I could not deny. The way she had confessed her love to me, that to any sane person would have appeared like a silly PG rated movie star rehearsing her dialogues. That was another facet of Madhubala. She lived in her own sweet dream land most of the time.

"Vaise is pavitra prem ki nishchal dhara mein kitna pani aapne daala hai wo abhi thoda samajh nahi aaya. Batane ka kasht kareinge aap" It was Aniket.

I gave a him a glare which could have been good enough to freeze anyone in place but him. He looked at me unamused and said

"Tell me what you are thinking boy"…He again said

I hated it when he talked to me like that as if I was really a teenager. Right now but I could do nothing about it. I needed his help to plan everything. Madhubala needed rescuing and I was not an answer. I called Bittuji.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 3

Bittuji came in and before he could say anything I said

" Bittuji get me a picture of this Mukund Dixit"

" Chief I have it on my mobile he had come to get miss Mallik yesterday and I had clicked"

I saw the pic and I was for the first time shot with the canon ball of jealousy. It left me all charred. How on earth would I execute my plan. I passed the phone to Aniket to see if his Mukund and Madhu's Mukund were same. Though there was little doubt in my mind but I just wanted to be 100 percent sure, and 100 percent sure we were now.

"What are you planning to do?" it was a chorus that I heard.

"Hmm calling the police chief to see if they could grab this man today because that would save me a lot of pain" I replied trying best look bored

They both looked at each other as if they had heard the most silly talk of the day. Aniket gestured me to cut the line.

"But they could buy me some time by atleast withholding him for investigation or something to make things work."

"Your plan please" Aniket said

"I am planning of buying of her rascal uncle's loan and then putting forth a condition of Madhubala's marriage with Arihant"

"Arihant?? Your little bro."

"He is not little he is 32"

"Yes I am 32" Arihant entered.

"yeah and it is soo much better than 39" Aniket said with all the sarcasm he could manage to induce in his tone.

" yeah and better than a wheel chair" I said with bitterness

" Ok so I am admist some serious war of sarcasm but why, boss I was down there in a very urgent meeting when you pulled me out. What is wrong"said Arihant

" Chief aap agar ek baar wo spine ki surgery ke bare mein seriously sochein.."

" And based on this feeble hope that may be this surgery will help me get up from this wheel chair, I can shackle an innocent girl to it. Right, how much more should I stoop to prove that I am a Man?"

"excuse me but you are planning to buy her or her uncle's loan and then push her into marrying your Bro who happens to be the best known Casanova to this noble circle of yours. Pray tell me which nobility does your lordship belong to." Aniket retorted with equal amount of sarcasm.

"Marrying me to his white goose. Bhai please main aangan mein khada koi aam ka ped nahi jispar koi bhi tota maina aaker apna ghosla bana le.

"We need to get her out of that man's claws Balraj Choudhary, only marriage to someone influencial will buy her the security she needs, plus the kind of girl she is she will surely tame Arihant" I said with a wink.

"Tame me, FYI I am a man not an animal to be tamed to show antics at the beck and call of a woman in a circus."

"and how is this feeble hope of this awesome man being tamed by that white goose is better than Bittuji's hope??" It had to be Aniket, no one else had the audacity to question me like that.

"Do we have any other option?" I was now beginning to resign to him. I could not force her into another hell after all.

"Yes we do and this will buy all of us more than sufficient time to fix all the loose ends."

I was blown over, his plan was more than perfect. I could have asked for no more. This would give Madhubala an opportunity to find new beginnings.

"Aniket I am so….."

"yeah yeah thanks and all …..I will take my share of profit and thanks from this transaction when time comes. So for now rest, you have a long journey tomorrow."

"So around 6 PM Bittuji and you will pick her up from that hall where they are getting her engaged." I said to Arihant

"and you are flying off to Switzerland even before that by the next available flight" Said Aniket

"Yes Sir, but you will handle everything here and you little man (bittuji) Keep me updated"

" Yes chief" he showed his cutest smile to me

" Put your smile in your pocket it is so irritating aur bahar mat nikaliyega mere samne" I was really irritated. Not that things are always under my control but just that they were never so out of order also.

"Bhai please bhai keep me out of all this , that white goose of yours is so irritating. I cant stand her for a minute you want me to bear the torture for so long. Meri mano to aap bhi isko kissi door talab mein chod do. You wont be able to keep her in check for long."

"Arihant she is far better than you are."

"I know bhai too good for me to keep pace with" he said

"wash that sarcasm off your tone. And keep your hands in your pocket, Don't try to hang onto my pants. My bad I should not have trusted you with this. I would rather find some one else."

"Bhai , bhai bhai sorry boss sorry, Oji you don't worry atall. I will see that she is safely sent to the "neverlands" and finds some one else's brother to bother."

"Arihant"

"last time sorry bhai, never again."

" And you were planning to get that poor girl married to him" another one from Aniket this time.

It was all settled then and I went ahead to book my tickets. I had managed to bargain with Aniket to go for her engagement to see her 1 last time. I had promised him That as soon as Bittuji would enter the premises I would leave the place without a delay of a second. SO here I am watching the door like a watchdog to get the much awaited glimpse of Bittuji.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the updates.

RK as a middle aged lover is an exiting angle.

but i will miss your ss... going to be inactive till july.

please PM me even then coz i dont want to miss your writings.

keep up the good work.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am luvn dis luv story... ''AND U WERE PLANNIN TO GET DAT POOR GIRL MARRIED TO HIM'' agree wit Aniket.. Nd askn u d same quesn.. Ru ? 🤣 Arihant Anikets all dailogue were just owesome specially d one ... sent to'neverlands 4sumbody else brothr to bother 🤣 Rk janta nahi madhu kitni ziddi hai., bade aaya bhai ke saath shadi rachane.. Nd nt to 4get our luvly bittuji.. Nd last sentence just crakd me .,like a watch dog.. 🤣 continue soon cant wait to c Madhus Reactn to Dis proposal...nd hw dey gonna execute it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so here also Mr. RK is planning to force his decisions on our madhu but I dont think he will succeed as she too is our ziddibala and that makkhi is irritating every1 here also...even this arihant is irritating me...
I enjoyed the convo dialogues...
di do u love this name aniket as in both your works he has been portrayed as a good loyal friend to RK...
Edited by aksuji - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Updates Saumya...👏👏Loved both updates alott...❤️❤️Loved the covno between RK-ANIKET-ARIHANT...Aniket is very good friend..😊😊
Let see how will RK 's plan work...😉😉
Continue Soon...
Thnx for PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnx 4 pm


arhiant n anikets ...lol

wats next


do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A lovely man by the name of John Green said, "Writers are professional worriers". I think you are definitely one of them. I imagine you sitting in a rocking chair, thinking of all the ways a simple love story could go wrong. I have amazing imagination😆 I admire your ability to mess things up, you do it better than most people. Great job👏

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