SS:- Business transaction. ch 2-3 updt mar28 pg 6

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

great update.just loved.plz add me to ur pm list and do pm me whenever u update.

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souryadeep

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

loved it totally saumya..

RK as a middle aged lover is truly very exciting and the plan and the titke are very intriguing..

update soon!!!

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Simple-Girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Saumya awesome update..😊Mukund is so cheap😡 Poor Madhu But why RK not marrying her?His brother is marrying her😲 Plzz don't let RK & Madhu get separated like show😳 Loving the story.It sounds more like a crime thriller movie😉 .Continue soon.😊

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SuRu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

really awesome update...😊

nd i m happy u updated it...😉

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luvera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Ouuuhhh... I like scheming... I hope they synchronised their watches...

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luvera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Old, spinal injury... lets see what else you can add to that... maybe impotency or prostate cancer.. Looks like his woes are never ending...

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Saumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri
loved the updates.

RK as a middle aged lover is an exiting angle.

but i will miss your ss... going to be inactive till july.

please PM me even then coz i dont want to miss your writings.

keep up the good work.

Thanks Tanuja...I will keep pMing you but will miss your comments...😊🤗

Originally posted by: Desire6
I am luvn dis luv story... ''AND U WERE PLANNIN TO GET DAT POOR GIRL MARRIED TO HIM'' agree wit Aniket.. Nd askn u d same quesn.. Ru ?

Nope never ever

🤣 Arihant Anikets all dailogue were just owesome specially d one ... sent to'neverlands 4sumbody else brothr to bother 🤣 Rk janta nahi madhu kitni ziddi hai., bade aaya bhai ke saath shadi rachane.. Nd nt to 4get our luvly bittuji.. Nd last sentence just crakd me .,like a watch dog.. 🤣 continue soon cant wait to c Madhus Reactn to Dis proposal...nd hw dey gonna execute it...

Wait and watch i s all I can say... Thanks Naina for commenting 🤗

Edited by mytinypaintings - 12 years ago

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Saumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

so here also Mr. RK is planning to force his decisions on our madhu but I dont think he will succeed as she too is our ziddibala and that makkhi is irritating every1 here also...even this arihant is irritating me...

RK is not forcing anything here , he was just thinking about Madhu's well being...he is the good guy here...and is not the arrogant one...let the story unfold a little more...I had a very strong dislike for Makkhi ...so he is the irritating one here too...but uska part khatam...

I enjoyed the convo dialogues...

I am glad you enjoyed the dialogues

di do u love this name aniket as in both your works he has been portrayed as a good loyal friend to RK...

Haan wo mere bachpan ki mohabbat jo hai...Nukkad mein paan ki dukaan thi vahi milla kartey they hum...lol paan khaye saiyan hamare...🤣Nahi bhai aisa kuch nahi kissi naam se pyaar nahi mujhey it was in that FF so I just brought him here too...and somehow I had this mis info that sultan will be called Aniket in the show...Issise Aniket.

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Saumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Khushi2187
Awesome Updates Saumya...👏👏 Loved both updates alott...❤️❤️ Loved the covno between RK-ANIKET-ARIHANT... Aniket is very good friend..😊😊
Let see how will RK 's plan work...😉😉

Continue Soon...

Thnx for PM...

Thankyou Khushi...

yes Aniket is a good friend ...even I am not sure how his plan is going to work...lets see

😊❤️