THE LOCKET (1) - Page 50

Originally posted by: krati5

it was like watching scene in old movies... i lovr old songs. but i hvn't heard abt ds one b4... so thnks for introducing this one to me... one side i m interested to go with the flow of story & thn learn it wht is it abt. ... on the other side i want to now this very second abt maaneet... or if dev married to geet or to some1 else...

after reading this update i remb a boy named dhruv whom i kind of knw abt(as my family used to knw his parents)... that boy nd his younger sister lost their parents in car accident 1 yr b4... he is 11 nw... but the boy never cried u knw... he bcm a support for his 6 yr old sister... but even at the time of funeral... he never cried...

i wanted to hug him that time... same goes for maan... irony of the situation is this that nw kids only have their dadi wd them just like maan here...

very touching update for me...

Originally posted by: dqno1

I am trying to establish the main leads like this along with the background. To be honest since I am completely bored by character sketches and I almost never read them, I figured to play a little hide and seek while doing this part. Glad that most people liked it and are not completely annoyed by it..

I say it again I like this style of wriitng & revealing the characters...😊

Daadima in the serial was such a strong character that I try to incorporate that in my stories. Some children are closer and easier to understand even for mothers and grandmoms. Some love the person but somehow you cannot reach them the way you want to. Daadi could watch the love between mother and child but somehow cannot replicate that.

Yes, very true. I completely agree. Daadi here is much stronger person to accept her lacking of forming that space in Maan yet not completely sad with it as she knwos she also holds a different place in his hand.

You have described the Maan I wanted to create here perfectly. He is an introvert but a very strong character nonetheless. His parents will influence much of his coming relationship story part. The mother and father here are also the same as the part I wrote for Palin's story, self reflection... As I said before I lack imagination so I narrate and recreate people, things and events I see around me. Nephew plays piano, hence Maan gets to use his long fingers for piano...😆

Glad I was able to understand your view of it all especially with Maan 😳. I haven't read Palin's story yet so don't know it . Piano is something that can recreates it all.

That's another kitchen dance number for us... love it... you had asked about that before, right... kitchen dance means when we are cooking together and something like this comes on, everything is put aside to dance to the song..😆.. I am glad our kitchen does not face anyone's home else the neighbors would be shocked...😆

Oh it must be fun then cooking... 😉 Glad no body is privy to it... 😆

This one was already in my head and so I had to make the scene fit Maan...

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Thanks Onir... was supposed to leave but am delayed so figured I would reply to you first...

Originally posted by: dqno1

of course you can use purple...

I just like to use a color so it is easier to find my reply versus the comment...

Originally posted by: dqno1

Krati🤗

Thanks dear for the comment...

I can give you a hint: NO ONE IS married... yet...

Awww, I feel for the boy you described...

Maan carries his hurt inside him plus we have to see that he is only 17ish when he lost his Mom plus the business is floundering and everything so he is going to grow up in a different way.

Hope you trust me enough to make this a great love story... I will try my best...🤗

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

*Smirks at everyone around*

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ME FIRSTTT

Very poignant update. My heart goes out to the not-so-little boy who had clammed up his grief n had no other outlet

(ohh did i mention i want to give him my pappis n jhappis😎)

ANd u are confusing me😡

The song 😳 can i get a yt link next time...y ekhula nahi..and i had to search for yt🥱

U know by now i am not a oldiesss fan😆😆😆 but i did listen to it *sacchi*😳

Waiting for next update

Thap thap thap😳

Originally posted by: dqno1

Kya baat hai... tu aa gayi... Avi rubbing eyes...😆

Confuse kar rahi hoo? 😲

Socha tha you will get it if not anyone else... last time tak you were the only one on the right track..😊...

The song here had to match his father's generation, na. There is one more that I used in the prologue and there is a reason for it which will reveal in that update...😊

I did not want to use the YT here because the video is 🤢

The words fit isliye I wanted to use this one here...

The others are more recent songs...

Thanks BHB 🤗

kal...😃

unless I throw out what I have written... I still have no confidence when I post...😕