arshi new ff:love-a feeling once in life*editd*

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Posted: 12 years ago

HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT so guys here am with my first ff .dnt knw if u guys like it
u r free to throw tomatoes on me 😃
teaser:
scene-khushi in delhi hospital n her dad Mr.sandeep malik was near her bed with khushi's sistr payal.
suddenly khushi woke up. both her sis n dad bcm happy
s-khushi beta thum kesa hun?thumhe ye achanak se kya hua tha thum hum lokhon par ethna gussa kyun kar rahe hun?
k-dad mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai...pls aap mujhe kyun nahi bathe rahe hain ki arnav kahan hain?n its been 5 months since u r hiding it frm me n telling lies to me
s-nahi beta hum tho sach kah rahe hain
k-oh dad pls...
doctor came he said that she need rest she bcm unconscious bcz she has nt eaten anythng so jst allow her to rest dnt ask her nw anthng
khushi was vry angry with payal n her dad .sha dont want to look at their face 😡

WILL CONTINUE IF U GUYS WNT ME TO CONTINUE WITH IT😃
SORRY IF IT IS A REAL CRAP
N WIL STOP IT IF IT WAS A CRAP
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U R OPEN TO SHARE UR COMMENTS😳</font> guys pls like n cmnt if u wnt me to continue.
If u guys like it i wil gv d chrctr sketch n wil continue.
Pls guys let me knw wat z ur opinion i knw dat it was a crap bt wil defenitly try to improve pls guys need ur supprt.😔

Edited by SARUNBST - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

CHARACTER SKETCH

[THE STORY BEGINS FRM THE PAST]

ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA 17 YRS OLD 2.

KHUSHI MALIK 17 YRS OLD 3.SANDEEP MALIK-KHUSHI'S DAD 4.SANDHYA MALIK-KHUSHI'S MOM 5.PAYAL MALIK-KHUSHI'S SIS 6.ANJALI RAIZADA-ARNAV'S SIS 7.RIYA ,SHIKHA,RISHAB,RITHVIK-ARNAV N KHUSHI'S FRNDS ARSHI IN SAME SCHOOL N SAME CLASS THEY R BEST FRNDS 😃 I KNW THE TEASER WAS A STUPID ON E BT THE STRY I WILL TRY TO IMPROVE I WROTE THE CHRCTR SKETCH BCZ I THOUGHT U GUYS WOULDN'T HAV UNDRSTOOD THE CONCEPT PLS ATLEAST READ THIS😕