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Posted: 12 years ago
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do write more often On KiSha Zoya
n ya like every1 else me too want a sequel to this OS!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blue_Orchid

do write more often On KiSha Zoya
n ya like every1 else me too want a sequel to this OS!!




aap ka hukum salakhon pe...😉😉.i do hope u get what i mean...😆😆
Edited by arshifan2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshifan2012




aap ka hukum salakhon pe...😉😉.i do hope u get what i mean...😆😆


aww 😳
itna maska kyun??!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blue_Orchid


aww 😳
itna maska kyun??!!




hum yahan kisiko jaante nahi...aur hum toh bus...2 mohabbad karne walo ko milana chahate hain...aapne os main...😆😆😆
Edited by arshifan2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wah wah!! kya dialogue hai!!
have u ever read any of my work!!
jus curious!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blue_Orchid

wah wah!! kya dialogue hai!!
have u ever read any of my work!!
jus curious!!




maybe...yaar yaad nahi...because i came online after 1 month...😭😭..mera retarded laptop😡😡...kharab hogaya tha...but i would love to read ur works...i love kisha...they make me remember my arshi...😳😳..kisha is so fresh...and believe me the cv's are doing an absolutely fantastic job...😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshifan2012




maybe...yaar yaad nahi...because i came online after 1 month...😭😭..mera retarded laptop😡😡...kharab hogaya tha...but i would love to read ur works...i love kisha...they make me remember my arshi...😳😳..kisha is so fresh...and believe me the cv's are doing an absolutely fantastic job...😃😃


I know yaar 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os mannn
So true emotiions kds anger , frustration & kiyas guilt
The kiss b/w kisha
Soo fab
Do write the second part pleaseee
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here's part 2 as promised...😉😉 Hope you enjoy...




"KD...please...i can't..." she stopped...because what she heard...stopped her beating heart...




"Let me go..." he whispered and kiya's eyes closed...as she could understand that she had fainted...



"Let me go..." was the last thing she heard...before she fell...on the his bed...unconscious...




KD was fighting with heart. He knew it was absolutely impossible for him to let Kiya go but for his guard , he has to. He has guard his heart. What if he gets hurt again??? What if he gets humiliated again??? He could bear it this time but wouldn't be able to bear it anymore. He was getting suffocated. Suddenly he noticed that Kiya's sobs had stopped. Thinking that she might have left after the way he insulted , he turned dejectedly to lock the door but to his horror he saw an unconscious kiya lying on his bed.




KD rushed to her aid. He picked her head and layed it on his lap. "Kiya...kiya open your eyes...what happened...wh..." he noticed how pale she looked. The colours of face had drained drastically and her mascare was spread all over her face. Her cheeks were moist. "Kiya...please...open your eyes..." he whispered. He went up to take a little and sprinkled it on her face. He heard her moan..."mm...KD...don't leave me...i can't live without..." her sentence remained as she lost conscious again. "Shit...all this time i was thinking about myself...and...she came up to me to say sorry...how could i be such a..." he sobbed.


KD placed her head gently on his pillow and went downstairs to get some food for her. He came to the conclusion that Kiya didn't have her lunch by the looks of her face. As he hurriedly grabbed the last item of food for her , he bumped into his dad. "Dad..." he gasped. "Hmm...so...is she the 'one' Keshav???" his dad asked. KD was surprised. "Wh...what...are you saying???" he asked. But Mr. Desai smiled and hugged his son and went away. KD was utterly confused by his dad's behaviour but thought of talking to him about this later. Now he has to focus on 'His Kiya'.


As KD entered his room , he saw kiya's face. He felt even more guilty. He called her gently. "Kiya...get up...". As if she heard his cry and gently opened her eyes. As soon as she opened her eyes , it landed on KD's eyes. Both were hurt and guilty. Kiya tried to sit up but couldn't as she was too weak , so KD picked her up and gently made her sit on the edge of the bed. Kiya saw the plate of food and was bewildered. "KD...what's that??" she asked. "That's your food...c'mon now...eat up..." he said as he took the morsel of food near her lips. "Did you eat anything KD???" she asked. "Of course i did...now you eat this..." he said. Only he knew that it was a lie. He hadn't had anything from the morning. First's piddi's tension and then his fight with her...didn't really give him any reason to eat.


But Kiya could read his expressions very well. And she knew that he would never eat from her plate directly. So she thought of a plan. As she put first morsel in her mouth , she frowned. Seeing her frown KD asked "What?? is it bad??" "Tum khudi taste karke dekhlo..." she said and fed him. KD was surprised. "Its ok to me...you didn't like it??" he asked. mm..." she moaned. Like this , kiya fed half of the plate to him , but he found out what she was doing. "Kiya , this food was for you...why did you feed me...??" he asked. "Because i can never eat if your starving KD..." she whispered while tears again flowed from her eyes."Why is it so hard to hate you KD...why do i feel so alone even if im with everyone and your not there..." she thought and wiped her tears , thinking that it went unnoticed by KD. But he did see her tears.


"Kiya...its getting late...you should go..." he whispered. "No...i will not go until i get you back KD..." she gasped. KD knew she would not move an inch without solving the problem , but on a serious note , he didn't want to talk about him , her and ranveer. The way they behave with piddi was killing him from inside. He turned to kiya to ask her this. "Kiya...if you and ranveer hate me so much...then why do you behave so rudely with piddi...what is his fault???" he asked gently. "I am sorry..." she cried and hid her face in her palms. KD's hand automatically went to kiya's head and caressed it. It did sooth her to a lot of extent.


"KD...will you ever forgive me???" she asked him. "Kiya...i was never angry on you...i know i have betrayed you...and you have the right to be against me...i don't mind that..." he exclaimed. "I can't let you go KD...i can't..." she thought. "KD please don't end this...i...need you..." she confessed. KD was shocked at her confession. "Wh...what?? what did you say??" he asked , thinking that he might have heard it wrong. "I need you..." she whispered. KD gasped. He gently pulled her into his arms. As they broke the hug , KD cupped her face "chicklet...i don't have anything to give you...then why do you always come back to me...??". She smiled. "Because you have my pricest possession with you..." she said. "What is that...???" he asked.




"My heart..." she whispered and continued , "KD...you might not forgive me now...but i promise that one day...i will get your forgiveness...and your heart...and will fight until i get them..." she confessed. KD was astounded by her boldness. But the next thing took away the little senses he had left. He found himself being kissed by her. Her lips were soft as feather. She crunched his black shirt to stop herself from getting weak at the knees , but KD caught hold of her shoulders. They kissed for a long period until KD broke the kiss for his breath. "That was..." he whispered ,  she completed "Magical...". They looked into each other's eyes for quite sometime , looking for their hidden answers , looking for their hidden love.


As the clock struck nine , kiya remembered that she had to go home. She looked up to KD and reluctantly said "I...i guess i have to leave now...". KD was so lost in her eyes that he didn't even know what he said "Mat jao..." in a cute manner. This took away kiya's breath. She caressed his hair and said "I have to go...but that doesn't mean that i can't sit here for a little longer..." she said and blushed. Both remained in each other's arms , looking into each other's eyes. All they wanted was to stay like that forever. "Kiya..." KD exclaimed. "Hmm..." she moaned...KD smiled. "Kiya...its 9:45pm...aren't you getting late...??" he smirked. "Oof...KD...can't you sit with me for sometime..." she complained and entwined her hands with his. "Kiya...if you don't go your mom will be very upset..." he exclaimed. But Kiya was thinking of something else. "He hasn't confessed to me...but i will make him confess..." she smiled inwardly.
"KD...you don't love me at all...look..even the time is running fast...its a proof that you don't want me to stay..." with this she was about to get up when suddenly KD pulled her by her arms and gritted his teeth. "Don't you dare doubt my love for you kiya. Mere pyaar ko kisi sabut ki zarurat nahi hain!!!" he exclaimed. Kiya kicked herself mentally. "Shit...i hurt him again..." she thought. "Im sorry KD...i was just..." but she stopped when she saw KD taking her wounded hand and kissing it while looking into her eyes. The intensity burned her soul. "I don't like to stay away from you..." he blushed.  
 
 
"Stoneface kahika...indirectly 'I Love You' bolta hain...but whatever it is , he is mine and i am his...forever..." and with this , she kissed his forehead and went away. Tomorrow will be a new morning for both of them...as they will live every moment of life , together...never letting each other go.
 
 And now...KD will talk to his dad about those ose worwords he said in the kitchen today. He didn't understand why he said thtanhat before but now he did understand. "Yes dad...she is the one!!!" he smiled.
 
OOFF...IM DONE...SORRY THIS WAS UTTER RUBBISH IN MY EYES...DON'T KNOW HOW YOU ALL WILL REACT...SHOOT YOUR COMMENTS AND DO HIT THE LIKE BUTTON...IF YOU LIKE IT...
Edited by arshifan2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG!!!
Someone get me out of the kisha dreamworld please😳
it was A-MAGING...i luved it yaaar...
i wish you would write more on KiSha...
coz with emotions your the best...
i have to say...yaar...
i could see it happen in front on me...everything
right from...
Kiya fainting...her pain (believe it or nt touched my heart!)
I could see the love both held like it was happening in front of me...
fab job...
and i would luv to read more of ur works only on KiSha that is...!
love
safrena

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