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Posted: 20 years ago
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I no that u ppl r worried that jassy_armaan has stopped writing the fanfic,due 2 the effect given by the previous episodes of JJKN. here i'm writing a fanfic......read & write ur comments......PART-1......Jasmeet Walia is a typical middle class punjabi girl....very simple....wears ordinary short salwar...wears glasses,long hair...she plats it.she is attached 2 her parents,dadi & her dearest brother Pratham {Hiten-kutumb}she joins a new college.she was teased by all the guys.bcoz she was an exception in that college of fashionable girls.everyday she was getting embarassed.one day she was crying under the college tree.suddenly a girl comes & touches her:Jasmeet WAlia...she looks at that girl.tall,fair,short hair,tight jeans,short top.she smiles at her:hi,i'm a Gauri. jasmeet walia smiles. gauri:1st u wipe out ur tears.then smile. she did so. gauri:jasmeet walia,du u hav any pet name? she:the ppl who r close 2 me call me Jassy. gauri:wow,i'll also call u jassy.bcoz i'm ur friend.see jassy,yellow flowers...r falling on us...u no yellow is the color of frienship...gauri takes a yellow flower:it proves that we r gud friends.is'nt rite jassy? jassy smiles:yes. gauri was thrilled:that means u 'll be my friend? jassy:i'll not be just a friend,i'll be ur very gud friend. gauri:really? both of them smile. gauri:this smile shud there on ur face always.shud not cry when stupid guys tease u. jassy becomes shy.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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How is it? 😊 plz write comments....
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part-2....gauri:jassy,u hav 2 change.i was like u b4.now see my change.u hav 2 be smart. gauri teaches her how 2 walk in stylish way....she changes jassy's dressing.jassy starts wearing western clothes.she makes her hair short. slowly slowly she adjusts & becomes a smart girl.evey1 was surprised at her change. there is a raksha bandhan party in a hotel. gauri invites jassy 2 come with her brother. gauri:many brothers & sisters will come.we'll tie rakhi 2gether.how nice it will be! jassy goes there with her dearest brother pratham. pratham was surprised at the high class ppl's party. gauri comes near jassy:hi jassy. pratham falls 4 her at the 1st sight itself. jassy:bhayya,this is gauri. he smiles at her. jassy:this is my brother pratham. gauri:hi. pratham was flattered:hi. jassy:ok,i introduced my brother 2 u.where is ur brother? gauri shows her only brother PURAB. purab falls 4 jassy at the 1st sight. all the sisters tie rakhi on their brothers' hands. pratham tells gauri:gauri....his voice was really cool,soft & romantic.he:i came 2 thank u. gauri:2 thank me?4 what? pratham:my sister was very shy,reserved...but u changed her.now jassy is very happy.u made her really beautiful. gauri laughs:i did'nt make her pretty.she was already very pretty. gauri smiles.pratham was serious& looks at her eyes deeply.gauri becomes shy 2 look at him. pratham:ur smile is so beautiful....luvly... gauri smiles:thank u. pratham thinks:coming 2 this party was not a waste.infact it was very useful. purab always about jassy.gauri finds out his secret luv 4 jassy.she teases him. she reveals it 2 theirparents.they come 2 jassy's house. jassy comes out.purab's parents liked her very much.they did'nt care that jassy is a middle class girl. purab's dad:we came here with a proposal.we wud like 2 get jassy as our bahu. they were surprised. gauri:my bayya luvs jassy very much. pratham says in his mind:jassy's brother luvs u gauri. the wedding gets fixed.but Mr.walia told them 2 wait till her studies get over. they agree. when they were going,without their knowledge,pratham winks at gauri. gauri did'nt expect it.she feels funny. do not 4get 2 write ur comments....
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Posted: 20 years ago
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i like it !!
its quite gd!! 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
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i just read it... i havent been coming to the forum in a couple days due to the whole armaan and malika thing but im ehre now and it was very good!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was really good plz continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
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cool jasmine....real cool 😎
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part-3....bOth pratham & gauri at the icecream parlour. he was looking at her. gauri:pratham,why r u looking at me like this? hiten smiles.gets embarassed.understanding his embarrasement she laughs. he:u look very beautiful when u smile. gauri:u always talk about my smile.i'm getting bored of that. pratham gets embarassed. gauri:tell me why did u call me here? pratham:that u did'nt understand? she:if u don't tell me how can i understand?tell me why did u call me? he: gauri,when does a person becomes silent&wordless? gauri laughs:how rubbish ! he:this not rubbish.its connected 2 luv.a person struggles 4 words when he has 2 open his heart b4 his beloved.yes gauri i luv u.u also luv me no? gauri smiles:no...he:no,u luv me. she smiles:no...he:if u luv me,u shud come 4 2day evening's party. she smiles. in the party,pratham was searching 4 gauri. jassy:bhayya,whom r u searching 4? he did'ntt get words. later ppl started dancing.suddenly gauri comes....in short top & parallels...with lots of bead work. pratham dances singing....ajave mahi....{FIda}.gauri also join with him.every1 was shocked 2 see their intimacy. jassy's dad's voice was raised:whats this? pratham:i'm sorry papaji,we luv each other. suddenly every1 laughs 2 their surprise. bcoz of the horoscope,pratham-gauri's wedding was conducted early. gauri becomes an ideal bahu. jassy's college life gets over.they get ready 4 the wedding.but unfortunately b4 the wedding purab meets with an accident.his car falls into big river.his car was fully damaged.they did'nt even his body. every1 was sad.jassy was heart broken.she takes months 2 recover. months passed.when gauri forces jassy starts going 4 modelling.4 that she shifts to another city. she goes 4 a shoot. they call 4 the photographer.he comes.he was well dressed.he was very handsome.he smiles nicely. he was touched by jassy's presense.he falls 4 her at 1st sight.he is none other than ARMAAN. he runs 2 dadi.he is her pet. he was thrilled:dadi,i met the girl of my dreams. dadi:what? he:i told u no,i see a girl in every dream.2day i saw her. dadi:who is she? he:sh is jassy,the upcoming model. armman's mind tells:1 day jassy will come b4 u. she'll admit that she luves u. armaan goes 2 a dream world. he dreams having pretty moments with jassy.song....nazar..nazar...{FIda}
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Posted: 20 years ago
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plz read & giv comments
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Posted: 20 years ago
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part-4....Jassy's work was greatly appreciated. she:1st of all i wud like 2 thank my photographer Mr.Armaan. she smiles at him:thanku armaan. he smiled as if her complement is the gr8st achievement of life.jassy joins that company as the chief model. Lter jassy was surprised 2 no that armaan is not only an ordinary photographer,but also the owner of this company.he has no parents ,only his dadi.actually due 2 the craze of photograghy,he works there as the photogragher.jassy thinks how purab was interested 2 take her photoes. 1 lady of the company tells her:armaan sir does photograghy only if he likes the model.u r his fav model. jassy simply smiles. jassy's co-star was not performing well.so the director ot angry & puts him out.he becomes upset:in this last moment whom will i try? suddenly jassy looks at armaan:Mr.armaan,why don't u try?armaan was shocked:me?no way...it will harm ur name too jassy.i don't want that 2 happen. jassy:it'll never happen.i think u r the right choice.just try. ever1 forces him & finally he stands as the model. that work becomes a gr8 success. he thanks jassy:its bcoz of u,we cud achieve this success. jassy smiles:no Mr.armaan...he:plz jassy...don't call me Mr...just call me Armaan. she:ok armaan...he:how sweet! she:what?i did'nt hear u. he:nothing.jassy,can we become ud friends? jassy thinks about her 1st meeting with gauri:whats the need of asking that?we r already friends. armaan becomes happy. jassy:i no a sister & brother who giv a lot of value 2 frienship.i learnt the value of frienship from them. Armaan was so happy about jassy's frienship that he runs around like a mad person dreaming...song..koi milgaya..{koi mil gaya}. Armaan-jassy go 2 a restaurant.armaan becomes emotional.he looks at jassy's eyes deeply.jassy remembers that lady telling her that arman's fav model is herself. Armaan:jassy,i luv u.will u marry me? jassy was shocked. armaan:jassy,will u? jassy gets upset:u'rs is not luv armaan.its just an attraction 4 a model.u r luving my beauty,not me. armaaan cud'nt bare it:no jassy.jassy plz don't take it funny.i'm serious.jassy,i'll tell u a truth.i used 2 see u in my dreams b4 i saw u.that day onwards i started luving u. jassy does'nt believe it.jassy gets fed up & she goes away.he follows her:jassy,don't go.plz listen 2 me.i'm madly in luv with u.believe me jassy. tears started coming from his eyes. jassy:ok,i believe u armaan.but what du u no about me. she tells him about purab. she thot armman will change his mind hearing that.but he continued walking behind her.he even goes 2 jassy's house with his dadi with the proposal when she was not there. after they return,jassy comes 2 the house.her papaji tells:2day a guy called armaan came here.he was not alone.his dadicame along with him. jassy was shocked. pratham:what relationship u r having with armaan? jassy becomes upset.

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