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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay this one almost 70 likes too! You're in triuble karina ;) too many upates in demand; heartbeat and this :D well good for us :)
Yes this was filmy ;p not your usual style, but i really liked it. This was more like virika from the show while most of your other stories have very professional and modern virika... Hope to read the update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
IF YOU ARE BOTHERING TO SEE MY LOVE KANI YOU HAVE EXACT 70 LIKES NOW!
THAT MEANS THIS CALLS FOR AN UPDATE
UPDATE OR ELSE 😕UPDATE OR ELSE 😕 UPDATE OR ELSE 😕 UPDATE OR ELSE 😕 UPDATE OR ELSE 😕 UPDATE OR ELSE 😕 UPDATE OR ELSE 😕 UPDATE OR ELSE 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Charucrazy

IF YOU ARE BOTHERING TO SEE MY LOVE KANI YOU HAVE EXACT 70 LIKES NOW!
THAT MEANS THIS CALLS FOR AN UPDATE

UPDATE OR ELSE 😕UPDATE OR ELSE 😕 UPDATE OR ELSE 😕 UPDATE OR ELSE 😕 UPDATE OR ELSE 😕 UPDATE OR ELSE 😕 UPDATE OR ELSE 😕 UPDATE OR ELSE 😕


you give me Chavi first 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
loved it
poor virika
continue soon
its 70+ likes
update soon
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here goes the last chapter! Hope you all enjoyed reading this short story! Please do press Like and drop in a Comment ❤️ - Thanks!

chapter 3

2 weeks later...

Jeevika was in the kitchen cooking breakfast for her husband. These days she wouldn't even let him come out to the dining area to eat. She would always serve him and feed him in his room. For Viren it was like jail, expect a beautiful one where he would be pampered and yelled at from his wife. Viren was sitting on his bed looking through his phone trying to send his emails for work. He knew if Jeevika saw this he would be busted, but it was really important. And just what he didn't want happening, HAPPENED! Jeevika was standing in front of Viren holding his breakfast and looking at him like she wanted to kill him.

v - "I'm sorry, it was just one really important email. I'm almost done sending it"

Jeevika kept looking at Viren the same way.

v - "Okay okay fine. I'll send it later. Oh I mean I'll tell Virat to send it for me" he said putting down his phone on the table next to him.

j - "Thought so. Here's your breakfast"

v - "My favorite sandwiches?"

j - "No. Oatmeal and boiled eggs"

v - "You do realize that I'm not in the hospital plus only my arm is a little swollen"

j - "Does it look like I'm going to be listening to you?"

v - "No" he said looking at his breakfast and accepting reality 🤣

v - "You know what would make eating this boring food better?"

j - "What?"

v - "If you feed me with your beautiful two hands"

j - "Virenji, I have loads of work to do. I still need to pack lunch for Shlok and make breakfast for everyone else. And I need to go help Ma with something also"

v - "Jeevika how long has it been since we got married?"

j - "I don't know"

v - "Today is our one month anniversary. And instead of spending time with me all you can think of is making Shlok's lunch. Thank You" he said getting up from his bed and walking to the bathroom in anger.

j - "shit! How can I forget. I already trouble him enough and now he's more upset with me. What should I do?"

Jeeivka thought to go make Viren's favorite sandwiches and maybe his favorite kheer as well to celebrate their one-month anniversary. This time she would remember to put the sugar unlike last time 😆. She quickly went to the kitchen and started making it trying to finish it ASAP before Viren would come out of the bathroom. She put everything on a separate tray and took an extra plate out where she wrote sorry and drew a sad face with ketchup. Boy did marriage change this simple and down-to-earth girl! But it changed her for the good. She was a totally smitten in love now. After her birthday she realized her life now started and ended with her husband. He was hers and she was his and no one could change that. By the time Jeevika went back into their room she saw Viren struggling to put his shirt on. He looked a little angry so she went and put the tray in front of him. He looked at the plate then looked away putting his shirt back on. As shy as Jeevika was seeing Viren shirtless she liked the sight in front of her. She took Viren's shirt in her hand and helped him put it on without moving his arm to much otherwise it would start bleeding, which it already had.

j - "Virenji wait let me bandage this first. Sit right here"

v - "It's fine I got it"

j - "Virenji please"

Viren just remained quiet while Jeevika went to get the first-aid kit. She made Viren sit down while she first dabbed on the blood with some cotton and then did his dressing. He moaned in pain a little freking Jeevika out, but then she thought she heard a mumble. She went in front of him and looked at his little smirk.

j - "Was all of this acting? You being angry?"

v - "No of course not" he said lying

j - "Virenji"

v - "Jeevikaji"

j - "How mean. Here eat your one-month anniversary breakfast by yourself now"

Viren caught her wrist with his left hand. Even though he wasn't left handed he still got a firm grip of his wife bringing her closer and closer.

v - "How can you leave me' Today you are not doing any work understand?"

Jeevika was a little frightened at how close she and Viren were and a little scared of him at the moment. She just nodded yes in a straight face. Jeevika helped Viren put his shirt on being as careful as possible not to hurt his dressing. She was going to walk away due to anger but Vien quickly ran to the door and shut it locking it from the top. Jeevika's mouth was left opened, shocked by this move.

j - "Please I don't have all day to sit around to your fake anger. I need to get my work done"

v - "I did that on purpose"

j - "Why?"

v - "So you could help me put my shirt on. Don't deny that you didn't enjoy it" he said naughtily 🤣

j - "Shameless you are"

v - "Why don't you become also with me? Imagine how fun that would be"

j - "No you keep your shamelessness to yourself and go eat your breakfast"

v - "I won't eat till you feed me"

j - "Fine" she said holding his hand and making him sit on the bed.

Jeevika first fed him a bite and then he fed her a bite.

v - "This sorry plate is quite cute actually"

j - "Thank You"

v - "Waise Jeevika on our one-month anniversary don't you think you should give me a gift at least?"

j - "What if I ask you the same?"

Viren stood up and walked to his cubbord. Jeevika followed him curious to know what he was doing. He got out this huge pink card which looked handmade, and it indeed was. He handed it to her as he captured her priceless facial expression.

v - "Open it, you'll see another surprise"

Jeevika took the card from his hand and sat on the bed. The front page was a beautiful picture of Jeevika from their wedding. It was actually Viren's favorite, and she knew this because it was his wallpaper on his laptop and on his phone. Around the picture which was in an oval shape were real red roses all glued on the card. Jeevika could still smell their beautiful fragrance. Viren had beautifully made this most perfect and amazing card. She opened the card to a beautiful poem written:


Our anniversary means a lot,
even though it's just been a month
Much more than any another day;
I celebrate my love for you today,
And cherish you in every way.
Through passing time, our love still grows,
A caring relationship to explore;
Our life together will get only better and better,
And I keep on loving you more and more

Without you I wouldn't know
What true love really meant
I couldn't be content
If not for you, I'd never have
The pleasures of romance.
I'd miss the bliss, the craziness,
Of our loves sweet, silly dance.


This poem was enough for Jeevika to start crying. Viren saw her all emotional and then he pointed to the little envelope. She opened it up and saw the cutest bracelet with a heart charm. Viren took it from her hand and put it on her wrist himself.

v - "Two years ago I had gone to meet Virat in London when he was getting his degree in music. And the both of us went shopping, and I decided to get this bracelet. Don't know why or for whom even. But now I realized it was for you. This gift was always meant for you"

j - "Virenji this gift is nothing compared to the bestest gift I have, you. I love you so much and I know I don't express it, but you make me complete in every manner. I could never imagine feeling this amazing and in love with anyone. Thank You for showing your love always. Every day every minute every second with you is a gift for me" she said taking him into a hug.

Viren hugged her tighter, squeezing her with himself.

v - "Can I ask you for a gift now" he said as they continued hugging.

Jeevika just nodded yes and broke the hug. Viren didn't need to say anything to make Jeevika realize what he wanted. He wanted a kiss, or maybe more and it was evident in his eyes. Jeevika slowly got closer to Viren getting him all excited. He went the remaining distance, and took his wife's lips near his. Jeevika moved closer to Viren and he snuggled his arms around her waist getting more comfortable. They didn't even care to stop for a breath, they just embraced each other like they would FOREVER ❤️

"Everyday is a Gift, that's why its called a Present"

❤️ Even though this is the last chapter, I really hope you guys give me some feedback and press like! Hope to see 70+ likes again 😊And thank you all for reading ❤️
Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all thanks a ton karina for updating this last part inspite of the busy day...🤗
soo much of work, then you updated we found love also n now this ss...outstanding karina
you are really a multitasker...😃

this means a lot to me...❤️
this update was marvellous...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
i was like this while reading the part ...

jeevika's concern for viren was amazingly written...😊
viren felt like he is in jail n jeevika is jailer 😆 😆
viren was not even allowed to send an email... soo cute... 😆

jeevika's anger n viren's condition was superbly shown...👍🏼
their convo was mindblowing...😃
jeevika forget her one month anniversary n viren's fake anger was outstandingly written...

jeevika made viren's favourite sandwiches n kheer n wrote soory on plate was damn cute...
jeevika helped viren wearing his shirt ...

brilliant part...

best part was gift...❤️
viren made a card for jeevika...fantastic...
the poem was sooo beautiful n romantic...loved it alottt...☺️
viren gave jeevika a bracelet that he purchased two years ago...viren is such a sweetheart...❤️
jeevika gave viren a kiss as his gift ☺️

the way you relate this whole ss to the title at the end was superb...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

terrific ss as a whole...loved it from the bottom of my heart...❤️
thank you once again for writing this... 🤗

i love you dear n will miss u...❤️

forgot to say that first one to comment...🥳
Edited by sweetdollashita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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UNRES😃

m really sad karina that this wonderful story is ended...😭

the update was superb...it was the best ending of the best story...👏

every bit of it was lovelyyy...awww loved how jeevika made sandwich for viren...😳 OMG she saw him shirtless😳😆

the gift of viren for jeevika aww cute...first the pink handmade card...😳 awww soo sweet...and then the bracelet...😊

in the end ahhaaa jeevika's gift was more awesome...😉😳
VirIka a simple yet beautiful couple...
and ur story described it brilliantly...👍🏼

thanx for writing it and for all ur pms...😊
Edited by latika_AshVik - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
resss

tomorrow confirm u ll be getting all my commets
sorrty

unreserved
last part nooo 😭
i freaking loved this ss alot 👏👏
from the start to end it was just amazing seriosly even beyond that 👏

coming to the part
loved the caring side of jeevika 😊

1 month anniverasy 😳

viren fake anger lol loved it 😆

jeevika making sandwitches for him how sweet

shirtless viren even jeevika cant resist 😉😳

loved how she was helping him

jeevika anger more cuter

viren gist left me speechless

the poem was so freaking amazing

it said everything

their feeling his love for her awesome

the bracelet how sweet

viren is no doubtely jeevika gust

the kiss me blushing again 😳😳

fantastic work 👏👏

keep giving us more ss 😉❤️
Edited by mariarauf48 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Resss

will read all d parts n unres😆

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