M Challenges : vm's , Os

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey evryone Actually i am again here .
as the past week was the best week of mine on Arjun Forum coz i was WOTW .
by the way coming to the main point .
here i am going to post all my challenges which i have faced last Week .
hope you will enjoy the vm's and os .

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Payal_156 ( My first challege vm
Here goes my chalenge...
two vms wo bi full sng
or try atleast more dan 2 min pls...
vm on arni both
arni on song
duhai frm ABCD
Arni on
kaisa ye ishq hai frm brother ki dulhan
lol..
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4dGydxI_OvY
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cAWbZVaArDQ


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Posted: 12 years ago
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My second challege which was actually my fisrt os i was ever writing .
a challege by haruhi26

Concept :

hmmm I'll let others do the grilling, for me a small challenge
write an OS of Arjun practising to propose to Riya, by practising with a tomato and Rathore sees him and hears his talkWink

OS : Practice

ETF headquarters
It was 8 pm now , everyone was busy in their works ...
arjun was sitting down on his knees holding a flower
Riya mein tumse bohat pyaar karta hoon mujhse shaadi karogi ?
plz naa...mat kehna mera dil tutt...jayega ( He was saying in filmy style ) she slap him and say '' idiot ''
she grab the rose and throug down while puting her feet on the rose she walk away
arjun was crying like a baby he hold a rose petal in his hand and BG song was playing
Dil ke armaan aansuon mein beh gaye
Hum wafa karke bhi tanha reh gaye
Dil ke armaan aansuon mein beh gaye
arjun come in his sence and say '' uff...Thanks god that was just my imagination not in real he hit himself
budhu aise filmy style mein karega toh wo tujh pe kabhi vishwas nahi karegi stupid !!!
he start walking here and there in his cabin while thinking and was more tensed ...
Arjun : Ab..kya karun mein...Kese kahun ?
god plz help me...kese kahun apne dil ki baat riya se ?
he go ahead and open the window , a cold and fresh air was Flickering outside his eyes was closed and he was enjoyinh the air..
suddenly he open his eyes and say '' arjun to hamesha nikama nikama hi rahega ek choti si baat nahi keh sakta ...huh !!!
Okay one more time
he turn back and walk with full attitude ...
riya mujhe tumse ek baat kehni hai , mein tumse pyaar karta hoon agar shaadi karni hai to thike hai warna...
shit yaar arjun...aise baat karega usse to wo definatly na bol degi kuch aisa soch jisse wo teri baat samajh jaye
practice shuru he hold a tomato in his hand and put his hand far mamimum 50 cm
Riya...aaj mein jo kehne jaa raha hoon usse dhyaan se aur dil se sunna
Har Pal Har Waqt
Har Saans
Aur Dil ki har Dharkan kehti hai
ke mujh tum se pyaar hai...mujhe tumse pyaar hai
suddenly he heard voice of rathore '' ye kya ho raha hai rawte ?"
arjun got shocked
rathore???
uski awaaz kaha se aarahi hai ???
rathore : tumhare peeche se rawte
he immidiatly turn back and look at him
his mouth was open " Ra...ra...rathore tu..tum yaha ???
rathore : kyu ?
kya mein yahan nahi ho sakta ?
arjun : umm...nahi mera wo matlab nahi tha
rathore : ye kya ho raha hai ???
arjun : kya ho raha hai ???
rathore : rawte mein subha se dekh raha hoon kabhi yaha ghoom rahe ho to kabhi waha ...
aakhir tumhara dyaan kaha hai ?
arjun : nahi rathore wo bs aise hi...
rathore look at tomato in his hand
rathore : ye tamater ?
rawte jaha tak mein tumhe jaanta hoon you hate tomatoes na ?
to aaj ...????
arjun : ( fake smile ) ahaha...wo...wo iss mein shock hone wali kya baat hai , of course
tamatar to khane ke liye hi hota hai ( He take a bit of tomato and again give a funny smile )
rathore : ( laugh ) rawte tum bhi na
arjun was again the hell shocked
arjun : ye tumhe kya hua rathore ?
rathore : sorry sorry kuch...nahi
acha batao ye kar kya rahe the tum ?
arjun : woo...rathore rehne do tum haso ge
rathore : chal zyada bhao mat kha aur bata ye tamatar ke saath kya kar rahe the tum huh ???
arjun : mujhe wo gaya hai...
rathore : oye...tu itna sharma kyun raha hai ?
aur wo kya ??? , dekh sidhe sidhe bata officer se panga nahi lena ..?!
arjun : yaar woh tu ( he make heart with his hands ) yeh !!!
now this was time for rathore to get shock
rathore : kya baat kar raha hai rawte ?
arjun : dekha...dekha...mene kaha tha tum haso ge , meri feelings ko koi nahi samajhta jao nahi karni mujhe tumse baat...
rathore : acha baba sorry ab itna to bata do ke wo hai kon ?
arjun : ( smile ) R...riya aur mein usse propose karne ki practice kar raha tha ( He was not able to control his smile and emotions )
rathore : kya ?
he again make face to laugh and finally laugh out loud ...
rathore : sorry again...dekh agar tu riya ko aise propose karega na toh pakka 100% wo tujhe na hi kahe gi .
arjun : kya...to ab ?
malab mein riya ko kabhi i love u nahi keh paunga ( he made a sad funny face )
rathore : bache...to ye tera bhai kis liye hai ?
arjun : Matlab ?
rathore : matlab ke ab se tujhe ek practice mein dunga propose karne ki samjha ?
arjun : ( Big smile ) Samjha to shuru karein ?
rathore : kya ???
arjun : practice...aur kya ?
rathore : sabar beta sabar ...kal...huh ?
after saying that he leave with high on floor
arjun jump away on air saying " Yahooo..."
rathore turn back and give a look to him saying " pagal hai..."( with a smile he walk away )


Actually i don't know kesa hai ?
funny hai ya emotional
if emotional hua then plz forgive me coz mein khud emotional insaan hoon 😆
but just jo mere mind mein aaya mene type kar diya..
sorry for any mistake :)
and waise bhi first time hai challenge mein and it's my first os i am writing ever...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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A challenge by ...Mithuz...


Concept :

Arisha after marriage... Typical husband-wife fights on small matters... Arjun Shows his male ego and determines to prove that he is better than the Ayesha ... What she can do, so can he..

Ayesha asks him to handle household work for a 3 days... Arjun readily accepts, but then he realizes he cant... Ending mein he bends down to Ayesha sayin he cant handle, but Ayesha says he has to now as he is going to be a father now...!!!

Make it comedy, with the ending confession of Arjun a bit emotional...!!!

(After WOTW, please post all ur OS challenges in the Forum at one thread.)

(Get ready for more OS challenges!! U are going to be grilled tough)


Ur os is ready mithuz plz don't through tomatoes on my plzzz😆

OS: Challenge

Aisha and Arjun are a Married couple, May you thing why i haven't say Happy married couple it's because...

It was an evening of that day; Arjun just came home and ring the bell

Aisha who was busy in kitchen and she didn't hear the door bell

Arjun was tired of work and angry coz his boss scolds him in office today. He again ring the door bell even kick the door and Yells Aisha

She hear Arjun's voice and immidiatly run to the door , she open the door and there was arjun standing Angrily ...

Aisha : aagaye Tum ( With a smile )

arjun : Dikhayi nahi deraha kya ?

aisha : nahi mera matlab tha ke ... ( Before she can complete Arjun cut her )

Arjun : kya matlab tha tumhara huh ?

Aakhir tumhari problem kya hai ?

agar yaha kade ho kar behas karne ki bajaye 1 glass paani puch leti toh kya ho jaata ?

lekin nahi...tumhe to ladne ( Fighting ) Ka shoq hai , pehle to office se boss ki daant suno aur ghar aake tumse behas karo ...

Aisha : nahi arjun me...( He cut )

Bs karo aisha mujhe to samajh nahi aata ke aakhir koi mujhe chain se jeene kyun nahi deta ???

He through the bag on sofa hardly and walk away to room ...

Aisha was still standing there and a tear drop from her eyes...

Later in bedroom

Arjun was lying on Bed relaxing , aisha bring a glass of milk for arjun

Aisha : Arjun...tumne kuch nahi khaya kam se kam doodh

arjun get up and say " Tumhe meri parwah ho to tab na "

aisha : arjun tum hamesha mujh se aise rudely baat kyun karte ho ?

aakhir meri galti kya hai jo tum mujhe itni badi saza de rahe ho ?

Dam ghutta hai mera yahan

Arjun : saza ? aisha mene tumhe har tarha ki aazadi di hai phir bhi tum kehti ho ke tumhara dam ghutta hai ?

Aisha : arj...

Arjun : nahi ...tumhari koi galti nahi hai koi galti nahi hai aisha kyunke saari galti to meri hai na...jo mene tumse shaadi ki...

After hearing that aisha was like half on Earth

aisha : samajh mein nahi aata arjun ke tum itne badal kese gaye ?

ab tum woh shaadi se pehle wale arjun bilkul nahi rahe

najane wo arjun kaha chala gaya jo mujh pe jaan lutata tha ...

arjun : plz aisha mein pehle hi bohat thaka hua hoon nahi sunni mujhe tumhar faaltu ki bakwaas

aisha : aur agar yeh baat mein tumse kahun ?

ke arjun mujhe tumse bakwaas nahi karni toh ?

agar mein kahun saara din office ki kamar tod mehnat ke baad ghar aake mujhe ek housewife banna padta hai aur mujhse ye ghar ke kaam nahi hote toh ?

arjun : aisha tum koi akeli wife nahi ho jo office aur ghar dono ek saath sambhalti hain

aisha immidiatly say : Aur unke husband unse tumhari tarha ladte nahi

agar itna hi asaan lagte hain ghar ke kaam to 3 din ...sirf 3 din ghar ke kaam karke dikhao to mein maan jaungi ke housewife banna mushkil nahi ...

Arjun : Challenge de rahi ho ?

aisha : kuch aisa hi samjho

Arjun : done...

Aisha : thike hai kal se le jar agle 3 din tak pura ghar tumhare sar...

Both was looking at each other like a cat and mouse look in eachother eyes'

Next day

Aisha wake up and saw arjun was not there she got tensed she get up and go out

The was all Smokey and a smell was comming from kitchen she move to kitchen from where the smoke and smell was coming , and the whole kitchen was messy suddenly aisha saw arjun Coughing and was cooking egg , aisha cough and ask arjun ye sab kya kar rahe ho tum ?

Arjun : bhul gayi tum ne mujhe challenge diya tha whole house sambhalne ko

Aisha : wo to mene bs aise hi kaha tha that doesn't mean ke tum ghar sambhal sako ge

Arjun : don't disturb me go and take get ready for office mein late jaunga

Aisha : arjun are you sure tum kar lo ge na ?

Arjun give her a look

Aisha : acha baba jaa rahi hoon ( She leave while giggling )

Later in Dining table

Aisha was sitting on chair waiting for breakfast , arjun come with breakfast and put the tray in front of aisha

Arjun : ho gaya ready nashta , dekho kitne ache lag rahe hain toast

Aisha hold a toast which was half burn ,

Aisha : ( Laught ) ye break breakfast tum ne banaya hai ?

Arjun : haan mana thora jala hua hai by the way tum egg tast karo

Aisha take a bit of egg, she taste and say "yakh"

Arjun : kya hua ???

Aisha : it's so salty

Arjun : what ? par mene toh sirf 5 spoons daala tha , itni nahi hoga tum phir se check karo

Aisha : ohm...really to thike hai tum khud hi taste kar lo .

She give him a bit and he immediately through out from his mouth and give a look to aisha like now what ???

Aisha laughs out loud

Later aisha leave for office while arjun was busy in cleaning whole house after cleaning the room he sit down on floor for rest , after a little time when he realize he immediately get up and start cleaning rest whole house ...

In the office 4.30 pm

Aisha was doing her work but a thought of arjun come in her mind and her hands stop working she saw him he didn't reach office till yet , she pick he phone to call him on phone but then she call on house telephone , arjun's head was on table and he was taking a break suddenly the phone rang he pick the phone and say "Hello

Aisha hear his voice and feel he was tired , he again say hello but then aisha cut the phone,

Arjun : cut kar diya ?

Ho na ho aisha hi hogi ( He say with a smile ) .

It was 6.30 now and aisha take leave from office , she just come in front of house door and open the door ...

The house was dark , all light's was off and she was shocked , suddenly arjun switch on the lights and the whole house was decorated with balloons etc...

That was a big surprise to aisha given by arjun , he come in front of aisha and sit down on his knees and wish her Happy anniversary Mrs. Aisha rawte and give her a rose ...

Aisha's eyes was full of tears , arjun get up and say " I am sorry aisha aaj pura din ghar sambhalte sambhalte mujhe ehsaas hua ke ek housewife sab se hardworker hoti hai i am really very sorry mein bohat sharminda hoon

Aisha : nahi arjun...tumhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya mere liye yehi kaafi hai upar se ye surprise ( With a smile )

Arjun : to lao mera gift ?

Aisha : gift kaisa gift ?

Arjun : matlab tumhe yaad nahi tha ke aaj hamari wedding anniversary ...jao mujhe tumse baat nahi karni

Aisha smile and bring out a watch and give to him

Aisha : Mr. Daarling apni wedding anniversary ho aur hum bhul jayein aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya ?

Happy 2nd anniversary Mr.Rawte

Arjun look at her and both hug eachother


Happy ending😆


Finally mithuz ka first challenge complete hua

Mithuz i am sorry if mene aap ke expectations tak nahi likha toh !

But mujhe jo acha laga i just write up . hope u will like it !!!

Come soon with another interesting challenge

PS . as u say ke arjun kehe i can't handle that but aisha say u have to that irritates me a litle so have not include this father waali baat and haan i made it a little emotional


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved both the OS's.
It was truly amazing.

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