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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
oh this girl is good
not only does she have all the shatir dimaag of arnie but the dil of khushi
hey she is perfect combo of two
you know if arhi ever have kids this is what they could be like
that is if they have kids which seems unlikely thanx to a certain ASR
uff that was really good how she managed to fool those policemen
but it was for a good cause so thats okay i guess
you know it really aint safe these days for girls
do these poeple not have any sisters mothers wives or GFs that they would do this to someone else
i mean think about it had the same happened with a girl in their family how would they feel then
such people just disgust me and really there should be really harsh punishment for such people
how can they do such things man
i agree with what ever azmih and khushi did
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Posted: 12 years ago
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10: NK Enters!

Arnav was dreading today, the day when his NK bhai was coming back to RM, not to visit, but to stay at the house for six months for a photography assignment. A house in which his crazy wife, crazy business associate, and crazy cousin lived did not have much chances of survival. Adding to his misery was Naniji, who had taken a liking to his business associate and had started behaving more childish than before. One day he found Nani, Khushi, and Azmih playing volleyball in the high ceiling hall, with the Prakashs moving the furniture to the side. Nani had actually worn his track suite, and he would never get that picture out of his head – or wear the suite again.

Akash had silently observed the past two weeks in which Azmih had started living there. She took a liking to Khushi, Naniji, and even Laxmiji, and she loved annoying his mother, who he was sure secretly enjoyed all the crazy antics. His dad and Jivvy were like a grandpa-granddaughter team, and would go out on walks together, and in the evening, his dad would be telling stories to Jivvy, about his childhood, how he met his mom, etc. Payal also adored Jivvy, and would sometimes be found in the kitchen, teaching the little girl how to cook certain things. Much to his amusement, the Prakash brothers would not be found in the morning – all of them would be hiding, not from bhai's crazy moods, but from Jivvy's crazy plans. In office, she would be extremely professional with the staff and Akash and Arnav, and they wouldn't realize that the girl was the same girl who had fooled the cops. At home, Akash swore that his bhai was jealous of the attention that Jivvy got from Khushi, and he would often chuckle at the sight of a fuming bhai. But amidst all of this, he noticed Jivvy's different behavior towards Anjali and Shyam. She never called out to Anjali or played with her like she did with everyone else, and she always questioned Shyam, sometimes leaving him without any answers. His bhai did not stop Jivvy's inquires about Shyam's work, and that really confused Akash. Before, if anyone questioned why Jijaji was staying at RM, bhai would have ordered, "Off with his head!" However, his bhai acted indifferent towards the questions and instead concentrated on his toast and tea.

The dinning table was occupied with the Raizadas and two Jhas. Jivvy had stayed back at the office with her team, working on an urgent issue. The female Raizadas were surprised and couldn't imagine the girl acting seriously; Arnav and Akash were not shocked, as they knew that when Jivvy came to the office, she would be really focused and well behaved. No one could question her professionalism.

"Hello guys! Whassup?" NK shouted from the door.

Everyone welcomed him and he sat down for some desi food. He began narrating his travel, and much to Arnav's annoyance, Khushi asked Nanheji questions and made plans for the week. Khushi was very happy to see her friend again, and wanted to spend time with him before her six months were over, after which she had vowed to never see any of the Raizadas again; although Nanheji was not a Raizada, he was their cousin, and she wouldn't see him either.

Akash noticed an edge to his crazy cousin's behavior. He seemed to be rigid while talking to Shyam and Arnav. Akash would have probed in the issue further, but Azmih had interrupted.

"Niku?" she shouted from the door, dropping her laptop bag on the ground.

"Azi?" NK replied, going to her and enveloping her in a hug while he lifted her off the ground. NK was an only child, and he wanted a sibling desperately. When he was ten, the neighbors next door had a baby girl, and NK practically started living in their house. He would run after a crawling Azi, feed her vegetables that she did not like, color with her, and even helped her annoy the adults (although she didn't really need any help doing that – she was a natural). She started calling him Niku as she couldn't pronounce his extra large name, and she wouldn't say "N" "K" because it did not follow the alphabet.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
lovely update
nk and azmih already know each other
poor arnav he will surely go crazy

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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh my it seems that the entry of nk will bring forth more drama in shantivan
and it seems somehow that nk knows of what happened with khushi shyam and arnie
well why else would he behave indifferently to them both
wonder how he found out but that he did is the biggest question for sure
hmmm akash you are observing so much about your family and yet you cant tell what you saw
but then he wont believe naa why would azi as nk calls her would be so aloof with the jhas
maybe they just hit the same wavelength as the rest of the family
or even she can tell there is something off about them two
which in a way is true
especially regarding the snake right
so azi knows nk as well huh well things just got even more interesting
awww so khushi wants to spend as much time as she can before her six months are up to be with her friend nk
because after this she wont come in contact with any raizadas or their relatives which is only fair right
ahhh even you observed akash that arnie is jealous of azi getting so much attention from his wife
funny isnt it how he is jealous of anyone getting her attention and then goes and does what he did as in the six month wedding

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG😊 that was so hilarious!! azmih is such a tough cookie...totally loved this chapter..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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11: Chaddi Buddy

"Mere chaddi buddy!" Azmih shouted again. "What are you doing here?"

"This is my masi's house! What are you doing here?"

"She's our business associate and she will be here as long as the project lasts," Arnav interfered, thinking chaddi buddy? A girl just as rich and powerful as him was calling someone her chaddi buddy? Once that shock went away, he felt happy that NK and Jivvy knew each other; this way, they'd leave Khushi, his Khushi, alone for him.

"Hello hi bye bye! Hoch do youz knowz each other? Tells tells?"

"Masiji! She was my neighbor and I'd played with her for so long, and would never leave her alone after she was born."

"Oh, that's why you call each other chaddi buddies," Anjali said, giggling at the term.

"No no Di! We are actually chaddi buddies! We used to wear the same looking chaddis everywhere we went."

"Niku remember the grey chaddi?" Jivvy asked.

"Yes! You stole it from me." NK nodded and accused.

"It was my chaddi in the first place! I didn't steal it; I got it back from where you hid it!!! And then you got so angry that you ripped it apart."

"Hey, I sewed it back together as well."

"No, you sewed another grey chaddi with it as well."

"That was a brilliant idea okay Azi? This way, we wouldn't fight over which one was mine, and which one was yours."

"Yes, and we had to go to the pool connected by the hips!"

Naniji had heard more than enough about chaddis and decided to call "order" and lead everyone back to the dining table.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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really are you kidding me
are we really having this convo man
and arnie will you stop going my khushi
cause the way you have been she will be anything but your khushi
i cant believe he is now jealous of two people who gel with his wife
gosh what is wrong with him
remember this is just a six month contract after that no khushi yours mate
i wonder if he ever thought what would happen then doubt he has
gosh these two i tell ya worse than khushi
chaddi buddies haila that was good

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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
I love your sense of the ridiculous ,and I your apt use of terminology is perfect ,this story. Is one of a kind ,
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear where are you
waiting for your new updates please
do come back soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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12: The Japanese Clients

Arnav Singh Raizada was having a terrible day. When he woke up in the morning, Khushi was not on the bed and he couldn't see her peaceful face from the recliner. He had subtly tried to find her the entire morning, and even went to the kitchen by crafting a rather stupid excuse, but he still didn't see her. He would have screamed in frustration had it not been for the fact that the Khushi stealers, yes, that is what he mentally called Jivvy and NK, were on the table during breakfast discussing about random topics that he was not interested in. Then, he found out that the painters had come to renovate his office and Aman had forgotten to mention it in the schedule, meaning he had to go back home in the traffic, stuck behind Jivvy who had insisted on riding an over-filled open rickshaw instead of his car. When he got home, Akash told him about the Japanese clients that were coming for a meeting with the CEOs of AR and GBD to finalize their joint deal. So, one might ask, why was the ASR frustrated at having a meeting?

Well, it certainly wasn't because he had to work with Jivvy – in fact, he rather enjoyed it due to her attention to detail, punctuality, and ethics. It wasn't because it was at his home either – he never cared of anyone's opinions, and he wasn't ashamed to have his clients see a grandmother doting on a goat. It was rather because of whom he hadn't seen, and whom he didn't want to see – he hadn't seen his beloved wife, and that was a big trigger of his mood today; and he most certainly didn't want to see the Japanese clients who wasted too much time talking about unimportant things and never got down to business. Unfortunately, he heard the doorbell ring and went to greet the delegates with Jivvy following him.

* * *

Akash mentally laughed as he saw the looks on Jivvy and Bhai's face when the doorbell rang – the former was grinning with all her teeth showing while the later was frowning and trying hard to not clench his teeth.

"Hello" Bhai said as he put out his hands in front of the delegates. At the same time though, Jivvy had bowed down and said, "Konichiwa. Oh gain kee des kah?" (Hello. How are you doing?)

Instead of taking Bhai's hands, the Japanese team of four instead bowed to Jivvy and replied, "Konichiwa. You know Japanese?"

Jivvy replied, "Yes, but mada mada dane!" (Yes, but not at that level yet.)

Arnav interfered what he feared would be a long, unneeded conversation about where the girl learned Japanese from, and said, "Welcome. Let's go to the meeting room."

Akash followed the train of people – an angry Arnav, followed by a happy Jivvy, followed by the four Japanese delegates who were looking around the place. As they settled in the meeting room, he noticed that Jivvy nor the delegates had turned on their laptops.

"Your house is different. Houses in Japan have no tiles or meeting rooms," observed the younger Japanese man.

"Yes, I know! Japanese houses have wooden flooring and tearooms with small tables and mattresses on the floor instead of a meeting room." Who else could have replied other than Jivvy?

"You tasted special teas?" the oldest, and presumably the head of the team asked.

"No, I don't like tea – I only have green tea when I feel cold or am sick. But I do like the rice cakes!"

"Ah, rice cakes are too sweet for an old man like me. But tell me, do you like sushi or the green roll?"

"I have a sweet tooth, and I'm a vegetarian, so I haven't tasted it. But I'm sure Mr. Raizada might have some preferences, right?"

Jivvy turned to a fuming Arnav who opened his mouth to say, "Can we get started with the meeting please? I have other meetings to attend after this!" Akash noticed the change in the team's faces and began thinking of ways to do damage control.

"Don't mind him Mr. Kyoko!" Jivvy chirped in. "He recently got married and hasn't been able to go on his honeymoon due to all the work. He's trying to finish it as soon as possible and wants to go back to his lovely wife. So you know what his next meeting is, right?" Jivvy winked at the team, who glanced at Arnav and smiled at him. Instead of worrying about the deal, Akash now worried about Jivvy and how to save her from Bhai's wrath.

"Oh, so that is the case Mr. Raizada. No worries, we can start now." Saying that, Mr. Kyoko turned on his laptop. While waiting for it to start, he spoke up, "You know, when I was newly married, I used to make my wife sit next to me during meetings, and when she cooked, I used to sit at the kitchen counter and watch her. Ah, the bliss of marriage!" Turning from a shocked, and slightly blushing Arnav, he turned to Jivvy and told her, "You will also have your time! I am sure you'll find your Prince Charming one day."

Jivvy said, "I don't want to get married to a Prince Charming! In fact, I haven't even thought about marriage…so let's stay away from it."

12B: The Big Fight

Arnav was surprised at how Kyoko's team had worked – after the initial chatter, they had refrained from going off topic like they usually did in other meetings. But this in no doubt meant that he wasn't angry. So, as soon as they had left, after Jivvy, and surprisingly Akash, had reciprocated their bows, he turned to Jivvy and screamed at her.

"What the hell did you think you were doing?" NK, Mamaji, Mamiji, Nani, Anjali, Shyam, Payal, Akash, Laxmi, and even the Prakashs gathered around them. "First wasting time in endless chatter and then creating that story about my next meeting! You know I used to think of you as a professional person when it came to work, but today I've been wronged. You are nothing but a child, and a brat at that! I don't even know how you manage that business of yours, as you can't even seem to be focused and always act childlike. You're probably a stupid rich man's spoilt daughter wanting to play business on a whim!"

A ferocious Jivvy rose above her height to grab Arnav's collar so that he bended forward to face her angry face. "Shut up Mr. Raizada! I've had enough of your baseless anger at me!" Pulling at his tie, almost chocking him, she continued, "I wasn't wasting time talking with them – Japanese culture requires to form a personal relationship before going into a business deal…they don't start with a meeting right away. If you noticed, after that initial off topic discussion, all of us were focused on the project. Secondly, you don't need to know how I manage my business – it's my company and I don't want you talking anything about it! Third, just because you are always frowning doesn't mean that my happy behavior is childish! You earn money in order to have a good lifestyle; there's no point if you spend your life earning money, but I guess that is a concept you won't understand! And lastly, don't you dare say anything about my dad without knowing him, because trust me, if I hear you say anything about my parents, my company, or my employees, you would wish that you weren't alive." Letting go of the tie, she says, "I hope I've made myself clear, and that next time you think before speaking. Your family and even your amazing wife might be able to tolerate your anger, but I won't." Saying that, she marches up the stairs to the guest room before banging the door shut. The loud noise echoed through the extremely silent Shantivan.

* * *

Khushi was shocked when she entered the house to the sight of an angry Azmih holding on to her husband's collar, the height difference causing him to bend more than slightly. Azmih was shouting at Arnavji, who seemed too shocked, just like everyone else, to be able to speak anything. Khushi got back from her frozen state when she heard Azmih loudly closing the room door.

Dinner was a silent affair. Jivvy had refused to have dinner with them, and she had done so rather politely and made sure that her anger towards ASR did not affect the relation she had with the wonderful family. She had instead chosen to go out to some Punjabi restaurant with NK and Khushi who had wanted to come along. Arnav ordered Hari Prakash to send his dinner to the room, where he silently had it while glaring at the laptop – he still hadn't seen his wife. Akash and Payal had gone out on a date, but there presence wasn't missed as much – after all, they rarely contributed to any conversations. Shyam had made some excuse and left off to who-knows-where. So, the only ones remaining at the table were Mamaji, Mamiji, Naniji, and Anjali, and all of them were too shocked to say anything, and hence had dinner quietly.

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