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Posted: 12 years ago


hey dear... dad came. esliye jaana pada...
hw r u yaar?
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey kk net was dead uski barsi karni hai muje
gosh me net stupid
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanku for those whoread even without pm. i vl pm the prev part along with ds update.

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Edited by Remya_Pillai - 12 years ago
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Part 15

I dint wait to hear how she came to noe abt the little secret. I dashed into washroom quickly did all my usual stuffs and got ready in simple white tank top and blue jeans. In the mean time I made sure to look hot, afterall I m going to meet my boyfriend. Ya I noe its too much in ds pathetic situation, but hey its not my problem. Girls always want to good look, especially after that steamy confession. I grabbed one apple on the way.. oh come on I m a human being.. also I need energy to fight for my love, rt? anyways on my way I saw gautam reading newspaper. Who bhi aaram se. I snatched and shoved it aside.
Hey..
Not now… u r coming with me..
But y? tumhari pyaar hain.. u go and fight.. I don't want to die from the hands of my love.
Come on Aryan. Only u can cool her.
Geet beta. If u don't like me then batao.. mein chup chap chala jaunga. Tumhe ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi.. k?
I ignored his filmy comments and dragged him to our car. It took me whole 1 hour to reach his house due to heavy traffic. Aaj traffic bhi meri dushman ban gayi thi. Aryan was whistling as if we were going for a picnic. He is just like maan. Sighing loudly I Parked the car and dashed into elevator . when we were nearing the floor I heard loud music. Maa dint come? We stepped outside the elevator and took long strides to kitchen seeing no one in hall. And the sight welcomed was OH MY GOD!!
Maan and mom was cooking together in kitchen wearing apron over their dresses and in between they r dancing to the song
are gore gore mukhde (be my love), chand ke tukde (be my love)
kalee kalee julfe (be my love), nilee nilee aankhe (be my love)
khwab dikha de, rah bhula de, hosh uda de sab ke
chain mita de, tan sulga de, mann me de mastee ghol
rock and roll soniye, dole yeh mann tere liye
rock and roll soniye, kabhee too bhee toh mere sang dol
Maan was on his knees as if proposing her and MY MOM happily gave her hand placing the other one in her heart.
Barbie… did u c wat I m seeing?
Ya.
Hum kahin galat jagah toh nahi aa gaya na..
No..
U remember geet when I took ur mom for a party and insisted her for dance? She not only got angry but 2 whole days I had to sleep on couch. Par toh yahaan!!!
Hmm…
Y r u giving answers in monosyllables? Who uska haat kyun pakada?
Stop it Aryan. Mujhe kya pata.
Of course. I m telling u Barbie he is trying to snatch gayu from me. now I understand y the whole world says even an old woman can't escape from his charms.
He was whining like a cute child.
U r jealous Mr. A
Ofcourse. Dekha who kaisi teri hitler mom ko bhi pata di.. oh my poor innocent gayu..
He is such a dramebaaz. But he is right. They haven't even acknowledged our presence. I switched off the stereo and looked at them raising my eyebrow as if wats going on?
They straightened themselves from their dancing positions and mom was giving us a nervous smile. Maan was grinning ear to ear.
Care to explain wats happening?
Haan. And gayatri, tum yahaan dance karne aayi thi?
Oh no!! Aryan is so angry. That's y he called mom by her full name.
Wo.. can we sit sumwhere and talk?
U r right senorita.
And he grabbed my mom's hand and gave a teasing smirk and wink to Aryan. Ye maan bhi na. he is doing all these purposefully.
So we sat in hall, mom and maan on one side and Aryan and I on the other. Aryan was literally fuming all the while.
So when I came here I saw maan talking to his mom in phone about u. he was saying that he wasnted to cook for u and that too all ur fav Indian dishes. I heard him explain y he did all this contract thing. When I witnessed his undying love for u, then hw can I be angry at him. and I must say he has the charms to make any woman fall for him. he is a nice guy geet. And the most thing I he loves u a lot. so I thot to make ur breakfast date perfect.
I gave an admiring smile to maan and hugged my mom instantly.
Thanx mom.
I turned back and saw Aryan sulking.
Kya hua A?
Tum uske saat dance kyun ki?
He asked pouting.
Son's wishes should be mom's command, rt?
Oh wow!! Mom accepted him as son. All thanks to his undying charms.
Aur would be husband ki wishes?
Husbands ka kya.. ek jaatha hain toh doosra aatha hain..
My mom teased controlling his laughter. Aryan gave a shocked look and dashed outside murmuring.
Oh no! janaab gussa ho gaya. I vl pacify him. u go and enjoy ur breakfast date, k? bye.
She hugged both of us together and followed Aryan to pacify him.
Hmm.. I m impressed Mr. Khurrana. Meri mom ko bhi mana li.
Actually wo aasaan thi. b/c she is just like u.

He said Kissing my cheek. Next second my eyes were blindfolded.
Maan what r u doing?
Ssh.. u talk a lot. if u want I have another cloth to tie ur mouth too.
I thot he will shut my mouth thru other romantic ways.. Unromantic khurrana.
By the way u look beautiful..
I blushed a bit. But his next set of word erased all that blushy feelings.
But ur mom looks more beautiful.
I can feel his arrogant smirk and so decided to ignore that comment. All the while he was leading me sumwhere.
After sometime he took off my blindfold and we were standing in terrace. Actually, there was a beautiful garden with lots of flowers and at the centre, there was a table for two. I took small steps and saw my fav Indian dishes served.
Wow! That's quite thotful.
The rest of the dinner continued with small talk of various things in our lives. He told me about his family and I too told abt my mom and aryan's love story.
So hw was the date Ms. Handa?
I must say quite boring.
Y?
U r such an unromantic khurrana. Tumhe khaana ke alawa koi aur soochtha hain kya? I thot u will try to make our date more hatke and makes me confess those 3 words. u did all these with the help of my mom.
I said smirking. I won't let him get his way after all these teasings.
Who said this was the real date? Ye toh bas ek trailor thi. Picture toh abhi baaki hain meri geetipie.



Note: Hey guys...i dunno hw this part turned to be. i felt like i lost the touch after the whole week's ficaso. Thanku tich for the lovely comment and welcome dear. anyways i hav opened a new thread comprising all my works. Here is the link and u can find it in my siggy also. Next part is wholly dedicated to laks for turning to Rockerz. I noe its late, but kya karun *sigh*. vl try to update ds week itself. And ds update is dedicated to all who prayed for me for the lappy incident and for the waiting tags. Spamming is a blessing..😃



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lovesia thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome udpate
maan ne toh geet ki mom ko bhi pata liya
with his charm
aww poor aryan was feeling J seeing his love dancing with another person
love maan's surprise
agar ye sirf trailer tha
then i want to see full movie soon
update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...loved the update drlng...
hehe mom n maan...hehe
mr.A is jealous...
haha...
waiting for more parts
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Posted: 12 years ago


I luved the update 😳😳😳 & welcum back Remya🤗🤗

unromantic Khurana🤣

Aryan was j😆😆. He shud take tips frm Maan🤣


Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update
loved maans surprise
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update

Aayan jealous seeing his would be dancing with Maan

Geet mom accept Maan as her son in law

Awww poor Aayan sulking
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a very nice update...
And it was like expect the unexpected!! Ofcourse its MSK and his charm cant fail 😉
I loved the jealous part of Aryan... and ofcourse maaneet were just awesome...
Am glad that u got back ur lappy and thanks for the update

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