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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the OS:You are My Love.
Unique confession.
Well written,Rami.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zebbie

Loved the OS:You are My Love.
Unique confession.
Well written,Rami.


really was it nice ?
never thought before about these type confession just do as a challenge even i was easy for me to write so what ever came in my mind i just type up .
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all thanks dear for the replies. to all the people try to sneak in some questions related to fan fictions, their stories. as we should not this is a writer of the week. so take full profit of this opportunity.

Ok now i have an another think for WOTW. a task. One shot on the spot.

Arjun and Riya has a fight and Arjun has to apologize as he is at fault how would he do it ;). It must be an OS. U can add more scenes before ir after this concept given, but while respecting it.

Enjoy!
Luv u<333
Kashish
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey ramz, the OS you are my love is awesome..šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
Os : My love is not lie

Life is very short , we should live it with full of fun '

its nice..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Sanu diii:::thank u soo much...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa

@Sanu diii:::thank u soo much...



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa



ye aap sab ka hi karam hai aisa phasaya hai nikalna mushkil ho gaya hai aane do arjun ko scomplaint karti hoon sabki 🤣

kardo wo b mera side lega..lol
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: haruhi26

well continue from this, Rahore teaches Arjun how to propose, and thus Arjun is practising with Rathore, and Riya sees this and her reactions...šŸ˜‰



Note : Okay , actually when I give my challenge os to tina , she give me her next os challenge to continue …

So here I go …

OS : Practice 2 ( Continue )

ETF officer

Arjun wake up early in the morning and come to Headquarters early then all .

It was 9am of morning and everyone come to ETF headquarters . everyone was shocked watching arjun so early coz he always come after them .

Rathore : Rawte tum itn…

Arjun put finger on his lips and stop him

Both look at others and rathore giggle.

Riya notice their sign conversation and was confused .

After a little while

All leave the conference room while rathore and arjun was there .

Arjun immediately come to rathore

Arjun : to mr. Rowdy rathore shuru karein ?

Rathore : kya …!

Arjun : kya ?

Rathore : wohi to mein puch raha hoon kya ???

Arjun : dekh tang mat kar plz , aur practice shuru kar…

Rathore : acha thike hai sorry ….

Rathore : tu suno…

Step number 1

Go to her and start your conversation .

Arjun : but kya ? I mean kese start karun ?

Rathore : suno na , kuch bhi kese bhi karke pehle baat shuru karo…

Be confident and …

Arjun : and…( He said while imagining riya )

Rathore : wait na…and then look at her kam se kam uske saamne Sharmana mat !!!

Arjun : ok nahi shamraunga ( He said and was feeling shy )

Rathore : abe tu toh yehin Sharma raha hai

Acha aage sun…

Step 2

Slowly sit on your knees in front of her with a ring in your hands

Arjun sit on his kheels and he get up and hold to tomanto and ask to rathore :

Arjun : abhi ke liye ring to nahi hai par kya ye tamater ( tomato ) chale ga ?

Rathore : arrghh….chalega but filhal concentrate on me…

Arjun : ok (He start staring at him ) he again sit on his knees and say "chalo ab bolo"

Rathore : tu mujhe kyun ghur raha hai ??

Arjun : abhi to tune bola concentrate on me to wohi kar raha hoon..

Rathore : dammit !!!

Mera matlab hai meri baton par concentrate karo…

Arjun : oh…acha sorry

Step 3

Put rose between your teeth .

Arjun : Ek min plz

He get up and take a pencil and but between his teeth ,

Yes aage …

Rathore : Huh !!!

Then Hand her the rose first and say the 3 magical words.

Arjun : wait….

Rathore : ab kya hai ?

Arjun : ye 3 magical words kon se hote hain ?

Rathore : Ufff….tu khud pagal hai hi mujhe bhi kar ke hi chode ga .

3 magical words meins I love you samjha ?

Arjun : haan samajh gaya phir ?

Last Step 4

Hold her hand romantically and wo thora shamrayegi then Kiss on her hand

Arjun was concentrating on his words while rathore was speaking he hold rathore's hand and kiss on his hand .

Rathore : abe..tu

He stop inbetween when they hear riya's voice she just came to give a file to rathore,

Riya was just shocked watching arjun on floor and holding rathore's hand , her mouth was opened !!!

On the other side rathore and arjun was also shocked !!!

Finally they look at riya and saw her , she put her hand on her mouth , rathore and arjun look at eachother with same shockey face , Arjun immediately Leave rathore's hand and get up .

Rathore : umm…r…riya tum yaha ?

Kuch kaam tha…

Riya quickly leave …

Rathore try to stop her but he can't .

Arjun : issk kya ho gaya ?

Rathore : Ufff…..( He was getting angry on Arjun )Ab kya hoga ?( He said worriedly)

Arjun : kya hoga ?

Rathore : arre usse galat hemi ho gayi hogi .

Arjun : kese galat fehmi RR

Rathore : RR ???

Arjun : Rowdy rathore , wo movie dekhi hai na RR ki badi Hit movie hai

Rathore : tujhe movie ki padi hai aur yaha hamari izzat dau kar lag gayi hai .

Arjun : wo kese ?

Rathore : yaar tu sawal bohat puchta hai . Dekh hum dono practice kar rahe the , aur riya ne hume dekh liya….

Riya : to kya….( When he understand ) He Shockley Yells kya ?

Isska matlab usne humien wo samajh liya ?

Rathore : haan…

Arjun : Ab kya hoga ?

Rathore : ab kya ho sakta hai , dekh sirf tu hi use samjha sakta hai .

Arjun : m…mein ? nahi nahi…..mujh se nahi hoga ..!!!

Rathore : tu nahi karega ?

Arjun : nahi !

Rathore : nahi karega ?

Arjun : kaha na nahi !

Rathore : ( Angrily ) Nahi karega ????

Arjun : k…karunge

Rathore : shabbash….

After a little while

Riya was sitting alone .

Rathore : wo dekho wo betha hai shikar …

Jaa…aur use bata ke hum wo nahi hain jo wo samajh bethi hai…

Arjun : nahi..mein nahi jaunge , mujhe dar lag raha hai

Rathore : arre jaa na…

He push him , arjun confidently go ahead and sit with riya…

Arjun : Yeh Kya ho raha hai ?

Riya : ( Giggle ) Nahi sir kuch bhi toh nahi…

Arjun : Ahem…ahem….Wo…wo…mujhe wo…Tumse kuch kehna tha

Riya : yes sir kahiye …

Arjun : wo..actually kuch der pehle tumne dekha wo sab…

Riya : rehne dein sir aakhir aaj mujhe aap dono ki asliyat ka pata chal hi gaya !!!

Arjun : Nahi..wohi to mein tumhe samjhana chahta hoon ke jo tumne dekha waisa kuch nahi hai sach…

Riya : mene aap se koi excuses toh nahi mange na sir…

Mujhe pata hai sab yehi kehte hain .

Aur phir aap wo sab kar kyun rahe the ?

Arjun : aumm..wo...

Rathore was listening everything hiddenly .

Arjun look at him and ask now what ?

rathore also got confused ..

Riya : haan sir boliye kyun ?

Arjun : wo...actually umm...

Rathore immediately come out and say Bcoz He Love's You !!!

Arjun make an Angry face like Shit !

Riya was shocked !

Riya : Kya ???

Arjun : umm...nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai yeh jhoot bol raha hai

Rathore : nahi ye jhoot bol raha hai sach mein hum to practice kar rahe the i mean ye kar raha tha .

Arjun : Nahi ye bol raha hai

Riya : Hold on , Hold on …

Arjun Sir I love you too…

Arjun was Shocked!!!

Both smile and look into each other's ayes

Rathore was staring at both , he smile and leave them alone…


PS : sorry tina di don't know how it was ?

But still I will say Enjoy and ignore Spelling mistakes .


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Posted: 12 years ago
ramz...šŸ¤— its super duper dhaasu OS... šŸ‘
loved it..😃
can't stop laughing..🤣
OMG riya ne kya samajh liya..šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜‰

or woh tomato and pencil k sath practice...too good šŸ‘

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