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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa

@payal di:::thnx kesa request nai challenge tha


Aww made me super happy
tightly hugs re...!
awesum wrk!!
happy tears...
love u!!
tc..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
@payal di...:::great u r happy enough for me...3rd vm check ki ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa

@payal di...:::great u r happy enough for me...3rd vm check ki ?


yup literally crying
pls gimme a direct link wrk here fr mobile too..
i want to dwnld it
u gime direct link
me dwnld myself pls..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Direct link is here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=40gRvYJHa5c

waise itni achi lagi kya yaarian ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa

Direct link is here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=40gRvYJHa5c

waise itni achi lagi kya yaarian ?


Yup yariyan is best dear
literaly tears welled up..
chalo kr phir milte h lol
love u
gng to dwnld
n
special hug fr before time..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Lovely vm's rami and wow ariya os was fab !!!
but mera kab aayega ?😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: -lisana-

Lovely vm's rami and wow ariya os was fab !!!

but mera kab aayega ?😕



thank u and sahi time pe aayi hoon ur os is coming soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa



thank u and sahi time pe aayi hoon ur os is coming soon

really
can't wait ok my waiting😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: -lisana-

Oh my god...

Tina ka challenge ache se nibhaya tumne rami...Well done !!!
proud on my BF
waise mein kya challenge dun ?
no idea boss...
chal phir bhi 1 challenge

as u know a'm also Arisha fan
so...ek os toh banta hai

Arjun and aisha same quite etf members . both have feelings in their heart for eachother now both are trying to confess means dono pehal karna chahte hain but always koi na koi gadbad ho jaati hai . finally both ek lift mein fas jaate hain coz light chali jaati hai ,
and jab guard ko pata chalta hai ke koi lift mein fas gaya hai woh electration ko bulata hai and kuch bhi kar ke electration kehta hai pata nahi kitna time lagega wohi inside the lift Arisha ka confession and lift bhi thike ho jaati hai 🤣
funny but emotional banana
All the best...



Your os is here...

Os: you are my love

This story is about Arjun & Aisha are quite ETF members , as Days are passing and time does not know itself same like that how the time pass no one know but time always leave some memories to everyone . arjun and aisha was also falling deeply in love day by day'

They know about their feelings but never understand or can say never want to accept. But as oldest persons say " chahe jo bhi ho aakhir jeet to pyaar ki hi hoti hai " . they was coming to listen their hearts now'

It was a sweet evening both arjun and aisha was in their home , trying to sleep but there was something which was not letting them sleep and it was'.

Arjun's pov :

Bs'bohat ho gaya , aaj to usse apne dil ki baat bata kar hi rahun ga . agar aaj na kaha to shayed phir kabhi nahi keh paunga

Aisha's pov :

Kya karun ? bata dun ? nahi'agar wo bura maan gye toh ?, no'way he should be first'., but if he want me to be first ? ( Arghhh'.totally confused )

Next morning ETF office

Both was confused and happy , aisha enter in conference room where all others was present except arjun..

Aisha : shree'arjun sir nahi aaye ?

Shree : nahi shayed'

Rathore : team ek naya murder case aaya hai ek society ke 3rd tower par humein waha jaana hoga let's go'

Aisha : sir arjun dikhayi nahi de rahe ?

Rathore : wo humein crime location par milega

They reach in the society where chottu and arjun was investigating the flat .

Rathore : murder kaha hua hai rawte ?

Arjun : murder flat mein hi hua hai but dead body mein paayi gayi hai

Rathore : thike hai toh mein aur aisha lift check karte hain ..

Arjun : nahi'

Rathore : nahi matlab ?

Arjun : matlab'.umm'.mein check karta hoon lift aisha ke saath

Rathore : thike hai'

Aisha already leave for checking lift while arjun also went inside the lift'

Both start investing

Arjun : ek baat kahun ?

Aisha : mein bhi ek baat kahun ?

Arjun : kaho'

Aisha : pehle aap

Arjun : aha'.tum

Arjun move back and hidden push the button and lift get started .

Aisha : sir aap ne lift kyu

Arjun immediately put his hand on her mouth

Arjun : dheere se'ab bolo

Aisha : kya ?

Arjun : wohi jo dil mein hai par zuban pe nahi ?

Aisha shy and say " agar aisi baat hai to khud kyun nahi kehe aap ?"

Suddenly the Light off and lift stop between .

Arjun : dekha'.ab to bhagwan bhi yehi chahta hai

Aisha : nahi,'mujh se nahi hoga'

Arjun : come on aisha now say it !!!

Aisha : aha'( with a smile )

And move away'

Arjun : to thike hai ek kaam karte hain

Aisha : kya ?

Arjun : saath mein kehte hain

Aisha : nahi..sir..plz

Arjun : mere liye bhi nahi nahi

Aisha : thike hai mein koshish karti hoon'

Arjun : to chalo say " I

Aisha say " I "

Arjun move to her " Love "

Aisha move back " Love "

Arjun move ahead " You "

Arjun wasn't able to move more back and she didn't say You

Arjun : Come on say it !

Aisha : Y'suddenly the light came and the door open

Both immediately move away .

Rathore : rawte , aisha tum dono thike to ho na ?

Aisha : yes sir I am fine'

Arjun : par hum kese thike ho sakte hain ( he said in a very low voice to him self )

Rathore : rawte tumne kuch kaha ?

Arjun : n'nahi toh !!!

The day was passing and ETF was doing their work'

Arjun was Watch aisha for the answer but no response was coming back to him .

Aisha look at him , he was quietly doing the investigation she go to him and give him a piece of paper hiddenly in his hand and move...

Arjun open the piece of paper and there was written " YOU "

Arjun look at her and she also give him a look , both smile while seeing eachother...



PS : sorry sana i haven't write like you say but have add mirchi massala from my side hehe...

Hope you will like it !!!



Edited by saba-ramisa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90


Sure😉

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