Writer of the Week10-Ramz?-18/03/13 - Page 12

Originally posted by: CrAzYaRjUnIaN92

ramz...🤗 its super duper dhaasu OS... 👏
loved it..😃
can't stop laughing..🤣
OMG riya ne kya samajh liya..😉

or woh tomato and pencil k sath practice...too good 👏

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa

Haha...wo to hai...
actually tina di ka idea tha tomato use karne tha and the concept was also her...
i enjoed very much while writing😆
Thank u 😉

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

okay Rami...!!

My next challenge!!!

I want a Sarjun this time. Only difference want Arjun as father. Ayesha has gone out with Sam's wife for an entire day and she asked Arjun to take care of "Arisha" their baby...!!!

Sam also came to Arjun, and they made great plans of watching World Cup (Cricket) but then they realized what is to take deal with a child..

Arisha is only few months old... U have to give a scene where Sam comments that Arisha means peace, how could u both anyway term her as "Peace"...

I want full-tosh comedy...!! Like Heyy Baby movie!!!

Os : a Sunday

Two families and two best friends .

It was Sunday and Aisha and sam's wife went out for some shopping .

Sam and arjun was alone in house . Arjun was a father of a beautiful Princess Arisha .

Aisha give Arisha's responsibility to arjun coz may they can't be able to come home whole day .

Sam also came to arjun's house for spending the Sunday .

The've made Great planes of watching World cup live .

After Aisha leave arjun immediately open the window and sam came inside . as aisha warn arjun before going that she don't want any mess . but when 2 guys and specially 2 best friends become 1 nothing can be hidden .

Sam : kya hua aisha chali gayi ?

Arjun : haan sam wo to chali gayi

Sam : acha hua !

Later .

They arrange for some food , the order 2 Pizza parcels and some drinks ( Soft ) .

They on the tv and start watching the world cup match .

Arjun : dekho biwiun ke chakkar mein sachin ki entry hi miss kar di hum se .

Sam : it's fine arjun dekh dhoni aaraha hai abhi bajata hai sab ki band .

Suddenly the pizza and pepsi order came . they took the order and again start watching the match .

Arjun : come on dhoni '

Ek chaka to banta hai plz ek chakka .

Sam : just be cool yaar ye dekh pizza aagaya .

Both was half eating and half was falling down on floor .

Both was in full josh and junoon .

Arisha was a sleep but coz of Noise she woke up and start crying'

Arjun hold her and try to make her quite but shee didn't .

Sam hold her and try to make her quite but nothing changed .

Dhoni was about to do a six

Both arjun and sam finger cross and .

Both : plz plz plz six six'

Suddenly it Became Catch out'

Sam : arjun lagta hai yaha to kuch hone wala nahi hai . kam se kam apni arisha ka hi dhyaan rakh lete hain .

Arjun : haan sam you are right .

Arisha was only few months old...

Sam : Dekho arjun Aisha a peace of your little home ,

how could u both anyway term her as "Peace"...

Jo cheez bhi mile use itna chaho ke tumhari apni ban jaye'

Suddenly they hear a voice , arjun check her nappy and arjun make a funny face'

Sam : Kya hua ?

Aur ye badboo kesi thi ?

Arjun : issne poo kar diya'

Sam : kya ?
for a moment he laugh out laud .

Arjun : hasna band karo aur ye batao ab kya karein ?

Sam : mein kya kahun

Arjun : ek kaam karta hoon isski nappy change kar dete hain .

Sam : Haan ye thike rehega , Chal beta ab baap hone ka farz ada karne ka waqt aagya hai

They change her nappy and Put her to sleep in room .

Both come outside and realize that the hall was totally messy .

Both look at each other ,

Arjun : now what ?

Sam : what ?

Arjun : toh shuru ho jayein ?

Sam : He nods haan 'chalo

Both took jadu pocha and start the race and clean the whole house .

Later

After all the work it was 5.30pm now.

Both was tired and was sitting on sofa relaxing .

Aisha and sam's wife enter in the house .

Aisha call arjun but no response came from arjun .

They go ahead toward sofa and saw sam , arjun a sleep together .

Both was shocked watching then in that way .

Aisha wake up arjun ,

Both wake up and saw their sweet wife's in front of their eyes .

Arjun : aisha tum aagayi ?

Aisha : g haan...aur yeh sam bhai yaha kese ?

Sam : wo hum cricket ( Aisha cuts)

Aisha : acha...to e sab ho raha tha hamare peet peeche .

Sam : nnahi...aisha aisa nahi hai sach mein hum cricket hi dekh rahe the .

Aisha : any ways arisha kaha hai ?

Arjun : apne room mein . so rahi hai .

She bring arisha out and give her a kiss .

Sam : acha hum chalte hain .

Aisha : arre sam bhai ruko na aaj aap dono ki dinner kiye bina nahi jane denge hum

Kyun arjun ?

Arjun : haan sam aaj to tujhe dinner kar ke hi jana padega

Sam : okay fine..

Both jodies had a great dinner and evening together ...

PS : Mithuz I know it was not like heyy babyy but similar hi hai usse ..

Sry for any grammar error

Originally posted by: -lisana-

Hey ramiii the OS practice 2 was just Awesome !!!

Love the way you write it !!!

Riya ne dono ko kuch aur hi samajh liya haha...

funny but lovely tha 👏

Mindblowing work .

Originally posted by: -lisana-

OKay now coming to 2nd OS : A sunday

OMG that was hilarious and awesome loved it more then Heyy baby...lolxx

Cant stop my laugh 🤣

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa

Thank u so muchh...
love the concept of tina .
and enjoy writing 😉

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa

@sana::Be ready then gonna post 3rd os of today lol