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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Loved the update so much

It was damn cute

Aww Zaaine couldn't decide what to get

Viren and Jeevika teasing Zaaine it was so cute

It was so cute the way Jeevika said to Zaaine he's mine loved it

Congratulations on another thread

Thanks for the pm please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
AHAHHH WHAT AN UPDATE JUST LOVED IT YAAR AWEE JUST LOVE ZAANIE LIKE ANYTHING ...N THANKS FR THE PM PLS UPDATE SOON

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Posted: 12 years ago
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6 more likes and we reach 70
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I haven't commented in a while. Reallyyy sorry for that.
This was a superb updae. Probably the cutesst and sweetest of all :) jeevika and zaaine both being virens babies was so adorable. I had this huuggeee smile plastered on my face throughout the lovely read. Thanks for the good time i had reading this chapter.
(We're getting to the 70likes target quite fast ;D are you ready?)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woohoo! 70 likes! When are throwing in the update then? ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First update after dazzling 🤣 Enjoy it!

chapter 21

Jeevika also got up from his lap and held Viren's hand.

v - "Zaaine why don't you go downstairs and open your puzzle. We are coming down in 10 minutes"

z - "But Daa me puzzle in room"

v - "Uhm okay go downstairs and play on the iPad. I will come in 5 minutes and give you your cookie and milk"

z - "Okay daa" he said going outside the room like the perfect little son.

Viren got up from the bed and kissed Jeevika's hand. She just smiled at him, feeling much more comforted know. They were both ready to see if they were going to be parents again. They were actually excited, the both of them. They felt happy and content in their places right now, even though they were young and could achieve much more success. Their success was their love. And their love resulted in Zaaine. And know who knew maybe another baby as well. Both of them walked into the bathroom again to see the tests, anxious and nervous at the same time. They both smiled as they looked at the two tests laying on the paper towel. All they wanted to do was laugh and thats exactly what they did! How strange life was being at the particular moment. It was just like the time in San Francisco when Jeevika thought she was pregnant. One test positive and the other negative.


v - "So should we take this as a sign that it is positive"

j - "I don't know. It would be funny if it is true. And we should go with the odds"

v - "Well then do you want to go to the hospital and find out right now or maybe run to the pharmacy and pick up a few more of these tests?"

j - "What about Zaaine. He needs to go to bed"

v - "So then you want to go tomorrow?"

j - "I guess we don't have another option do we?"

v - "I don't know if I can wait that long to find out" he said holding her

j - "Well then I guess someone is going to get learn a lesson on how to be patient tonight..." she said sarcastically

v - "Oh Really?"

j - "Actually I don't even think I can wait. Should we call Virat and Manvi and ask if they can stay home for an hour or two with Zaaine?"

v - "Let's go"


The both of them went outside to call Virat and Manvi. Jeevika was calling them as Zaaine yelled out for his parents so Viren went downstairs. Both of them weren't picking the phone up so she gave up and went downstairs to tell Viren. She was a little sad because she really wanted to know now if she was pregnant. She could just think about holding a little baby again, holding a little baby with Zaaine and Viren. The complete family. But she had to wait.


v - "whatsup? they pick up?" he sad as he was sitting next to Zaaine on the dining table, who was having his cookie finally

j - "Nope"

v - "What should we do now"

j - "Wait till we drop Zaaine off tomorrow" she said sighing

Viren made a sad face while Jeevika just laughed seeing him so desperate to find out as well.

z - "Daa me done with cookie"

v - "I can see that. Now finish your milk"
z - "No daa no more"
v - "Zaaine if you do that, we both get you cookies again. Or even coffee. Come on finish up" he said holding his little cup and making him drink it.

Zaaine finished drinking his milk with Viren's help.


z - "Done now daa"
v - "Thank You!

Okay go brush your teeth upstairs now"



z - "Okay daa" he said as Viren put him down from his chair. Zaaine walked away from his parents smiling and started climbing upstairs. He started singing his songs as he held onto the railing going upstairs. Jeevika and Viren just watched him so happy and laughed.

v - "I want more of this. He's so cute. I know its hard work, but it feels worth it' Don't you think?"

j - "Yeah. He's the best thing that happened to us Viren. I mean I think our love is stronger because of him" she said looking as Zaaine went into his room.


Viren walked over to Jeevika and picked her up taking her by surprise and taking her upstairs. She was blushing, yet enjoying this moment. The feeling of being in her husbands arms and being loved was probably the best anyone could ask for. Especially if you had a sexy husband like Viren. It just made everything better.


j - "What in the world are you doing?" she said pretending to be a little upset.

v - "Carrying my wifey upstairs! Am I not allowed to?"

j - "You're so weird" she said hiding her face in his chest.

v - "Tell me something I don't know hottie" he said trying to make Jeevika blush in return. And he was successful. She was red like a tomato.


Viren carried Jeevika inside their bedroom placing her on her side of the bed. He then got on top of her trying to get a kiss out of her, but little did he know Zaaine followed him inside their room wondering and curious to know what was happening. Why was his daa carrying his mommy inside?


z - "Daa why you carry mommy"

v - "Ohh where did you come from" he said getting off Jeevika. Both of them got a little embarrassed.

z - "Bathroom. Me brush teeth and change also. Why you carry mommy, daa?" he asked curiously

v - "Remember when Zaaine was being a baby the other day and you asked me to carry you around. Well today its mommy's turn so I carried her upstairs. She's very bad Zaaine"

Jeevika was shocked and hit Viren on his shoulder. Zaaine moved towards Jeevika who picked him up onto the bed. Zaaine hugged his mommy and cuddled with her.

z - "Mommy no bad daa"


Jeevika hugged Zaaine tighter smiling really bright and kissing him. Zaaine started giggling as she placed kisses all over his face. There was nothing better than being in the arms of his parents.


v - "Zaaine who do you love more? Mommy or me?"

Zaaine pondered for a while, thinking'

z - "Daa me no choose. Me love mommy and daa both sooo much" he said showing with his hands how much he loved his parents.

j - "We love you the most Zaaine"

Zaaine was so happy to hear that he just hugged his mother more tighter.

z - "Mommy me sleep in your lap please. Me sleep better when you hug me. Please mommy"

j - "Okay my baby. Viren can you please dim the lights"

v - "Sure" he said giving a kiss to Jeevika and then Zaaine who was laying his head on Jeevika's chest.

Viren got up from the bed and dimmed the lights. He went into the bathroom and changed while Jeevika put Zaaine to asleep. She was patting his back as his eyes slowly shut. Viren sat in front of Jeevika on the bed watching her put him to sleep. He couldn't feel happier at the moment. He was praying to God and hoped Jeevika really was pregnant so they could hold another baby, just like Zaaine. He wanted to change diapers again, and he wanted to spoil Jeevika rotten. He would change so many things than the first time. He could never have enough time with Jeevika back then because he was studying and she had clinicals, but now after her final surgical exam he wouldn't let her work for a while. Even if that meant him working more and she resting at home, he would happily do it. Plus he wanted to take care of Zaaine so she wouldn't be stressed. Just everything seemed to be falling place. As Jeevika patted Zaaine's back, Viren softly strolled his hands through his hair. He was so cute and so loving. Jeevika kissed Zaaine on his cheek making Viren smile. Viren took Zaaine from Jeevika's lap and took him to his room. He tucked him in bed covering him up with his favorite blanket. He switched on the small night light near the door so Zaaine wouldn't be scared. He needed that on otherwise he would often cry.


Viren walked back into his room and didn't see Jeevika. He went inside the bathroom and saw her looking at the tests again. Viren sneaked upon her back kissing her side cheek.

v - "You okay my love?"

j - "Yeah. Viren how do you think Zaaine will react? I mean if I am. Like maybe this isn't the best time. He's been craving for our attention together. Its either just me with him or just you. We don't spend a lot of time as a family. And if we have a baby he will feel hurt"

v - "Zaaine and hurt? If anything I think he will be excited. He will have a little partner to play with and take care of. I mean he's such an intelligent boy and he's respectful. Even though he gets hurt he keeps things to himself"

j - "Exactly Viren, he keeps it to himself and I don't like that. He's a little boy not a teenager. What if he feels bad and doesn't tell us. And then he starts throwing tantrums?"

v - "I don't think so. He will understand. I mean I know we should spend more time with him and give him that attention. Plus we will prepare him too. Don't worry he'll love his sister"

j - "Ohhh so you want a girl this time?"

v - "Of course I do. She will be the most beautiful angel ever! Mark my words. Jeevs how about after your surgical exam we take a trip? You'll have a month off and I can get off from work too. Plus Zaaine will enjoy it.

j - "Where should we go and when?"

v - "How about New York for our 4th anniversary?" he said then gave her a kiss right on the lips.

Jeevika was enjoying the kiss and went it for more. She placed her arms around his neck making him come closer. She broke the kiss when she felt the need to and then placed her head on his chest with her arms wrapped around his waist.

j - "I love you"


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Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
What a cute update. It was just awww. Only god knows how much i'm in love with zaaine. His cuteness,politeness and everything is just amazing. And this update was freaking awesome like how can you write such a cute update HOW??

You always leave me speechless like i need to think what shall i write :P enough of my bakk bakk.

Zaaine ILY more than beta :D
Edited by Dhoxi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Awww super duper updates loved the way how cutely zainee asked the questions frm his parents and virika wants to be parents again awww
Edited by Sabapari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this part as always was outstanding...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
their nervousness, anxiety, happiness about the result was brilliantly described...😊

virika are soo desperate to know...😃 😃

their desperation was clearly shown through their emotions n words...

fantastically written...

needless to say anything about zaaine's cuteness...❤️ ❤️

he started singing while going upstairs awww...so adorable..


He then got on top of her trying to get a kiss out of her, but little did he know Zaaine followed him inside their room wondering and curious to know what was happening. Why was his daa carrying his mommy inside? 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

so embarassing situation for virika but viren is soo smart that he come up with an amazing excuse

mother-son bond is so magical...they are sooo cute...

z - "Mommy no bad daa" 😊 😊

He was praying to God and hoped Jeevika really was pregnant so they could hold another baby, just like Zaaine. He wanted to change diapers again, and he wanted to spoil Jeevika rotten. viren wanted to change diapers lol...mindblowing...

virika convo was tooo cute...

kays, you write every single detail beautifully n you've proved again n again that you are a brilliant writer...

terrific update as a whole...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Edited by sweetdollashita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Superlike! Simply awesome……adorable?!
Zaaine is bcomin cuter day by day!
n virika………<3 <3 dey r d best! Osmmm...adorable! Beafutiful! Lovely!
U r d best kays! I luv u loads n loads …
Update soon… <3 <3

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