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"Tumhe apna beta kehne mein mujhe sharam aati hai." He scoffed and walked away.

"Maars.." Before Avantika could continue her sentence i walked off.

Another fight with dad. So what i have no interest in his stupid business, i wanna do something on my own.

Whenever we talk about it, we end up fighting.

I walked into my favorite coffee shop, "Cafe Coffee Day". It was empty, i checked the time it was 11 oclock, explains why it's empty.

"What can i get you?" The waitress asked me.

I looked up, "A black coffee" And the waitress walked away.

I took out my phone and looked at the wallpaper and smiled a little. It was of Avantika and Me, she was making goofy faces.

"She's pretty." Someone said.

I looked up and saw the waitress, "Uh, thanks."

"So whats the matter?" She asked me as she took a seat opposite to me.

"Nothing, can't i just have a peaceful time while drinking coffee?!!" I asked her, a little louder than it was suppose to.

She jumped a little, "Fine, i'm sorry." She got up.

I sighed, "I had a fight with my dad, happy?"

"Not really, so wanna tell me the whole thing ya phir mein bhaag jaun?" She joked pretending to be scared.

"No, sit. I have changed my mind. I wanna talk about it." She smiled at my reply.

She smiled wide, showing her perfect white teeths. Her brown hair were tied in a pony. She was about 5'3.

"Toh.."

"Well, he wants me to work in his company but i wanna do something on my own and we keep fighting over that." I told her as i took a sip of my coffee.

"He doesn't want you to struggle." She bit her lip.

"What do you mean?"

"You haven't seen the outside world, it's too much struggle. You are rich, life is all easy for you. But once you step out of your AC rooms, you realize how cruel life is." She replied, "He just wants the best for you and you need to understand that."

"You are right..." I sighed.

"They are your parents they always want the best for you..." She smiled sadly.

"True."

"Here, take this." She gave me a paper, "Read this when ever you feel lonely and that no one loves you. It's my last day here, i'm moving to Dehradun." She stood on her toes and kissed my cheeks and walked away.

I touched my cheeks, her one touch gave me tingles. What with me..?!

When i entered the house i realized, what was her name? Oh shit, i should've seen her name tag.

~~

Another night when Avi had a fight with his dad.

I slammed the door of my room and my eyes fell on the letter, the one that the girl gave me.

I opened it,

"Hii!!

Okay, i might look like a stalker but mujhe maaf karo. It's just that i'm so obsessed with you like the other girls.

I think you never noticed me in the Cafe before. I would stare and day dream about you. I know everything about you.

Name : Avijeet Roy.
Family : Dad, Mom, one sister.
Mobile number : (Insert mobile number :P )
Collage : Imperial Collage, second year.
Nick name : Avi. ;)

I never had the guts to talk to you, but that day was my last day working there. So somehow i gathered my guts and spoke to you.

I'll miss you. Hope you remember me.

And remember, there are your parents, they only care about you! They want the best for you, so loosen those walls around you and let them in.

Bye,
Take Care.
-The Mystery Girl. ;)




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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow, dis is d 1st written story of Season 1😊
Awesome OS👏😊
Seems like u picked a lot 4m Avi's CS😃
Is dat mystery girl Rukmini?😳
Avi getn a kiss
😉
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Res 😉

Unres 😃

That was just fabulous Alia. I really loved it.. 👍🏼
The first OS on season 2 and it was just dhinchak..👏
I just wanted to read more about this but you stopped it there.
But it's really awesome and the ending was just ❤️
You better write more 😃


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wow SS. . short n perfect!!
I loved it. .. I freakin Loved it<3
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I was waiting for sum1 to write on Season 2 characters n u did it😊. Actually. u were d one cuz of whom I was d 1st to write on Samar-Juhi wen u became d 1st to write on Piddhi-Bobby😃.
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This was so good!!!! Loved the ending<3. Aww...Mystery Girl totally crushed on him & when he noticed her she had to leave. Mera Avi:-(
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aali (i hope u dnt mind me callin u that...
i luved this OS...
so sweety...1st OS on the season 2 characters
i must say you nailed it sweety...
i luved every part of it...
esp the way you maintained the thing abt Avi havin probs with his dad...
hands off girl..
Mistery Girl...hummm...nyc yaar..!
do write more...as i would luv to read it!!
love
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Ally 🤗 Lovely OS!!! First OS on season 2 characters it was soo damn good 😳 It was short though i wanted to read more 😛
Keep writing more 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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alia🤗
awesome os yaar
congo for writing 1st evr os on s2👏
it was amazing ,
it was short and perfect!!!
ps:i hope u write on kisha soon😊
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Wow, dis is d 1st written story of Season 1😊
Awesome OS👏😊
Seems like u picked a lot 4m Avi's CS😃
Is dat mystery girl Rukmini?😳
Avi getn a kiss
😉



Thanks alot Juhi!! Aren't you gonna write any OS? 🥺
Avi is paired with Rukmini? 😳 I didn't know.

*Idea* *Runs to write a story on AvNi* 😆😆😆 😉

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