YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2) *thread2*ch.34 page.141

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Back again with a new thread! WOHOO 🥳This story is the most special to me, and I love writing this one the most!!! Thank you everyone who spammed and continuously commented making a thread 2 possible!

Okay well new thread so a few new rules that I will be enforcing now onwards...
  • Firstly if you would like a PM as to when I update, add me on your buddy list... HOWEVER only if you will be commenting&liking will I send you a PM. If at anytime I check and see that after a few days you have not commented & liked and have opened my PM I will unbuddy you. No harsh feelings, but if you don't have time, neither do I.
  • Do not give one line comments saying "great update" or "update soon"! This makes any writer more upset as you are not appreciating their work. I will take longer to update if I see this
  • I try to update all my stories as frequently as possible, so understand if sometimes I am on a tight schedule. Also from now onwards if I do not get the required number of likes and comments I will not continue on like I've always done before... Even now I am creating this new thread without the 70 likes I requested for.
  • Please do not copy or post my updates or any of my work on any other website, group, etc... Please ask me before doing so
  • Reserve a spot to comment, only if you will come back and unreserve it! I hate seeing res all over my posts
  • make sure to press like on this RULES POST otherwise you will be deleted; editing my list one last time!!!

I seriously love all of you guys and please don't think I want to be rude. I love writing this story, but more than that I love seeing your guys's reactions. I want to know that my hard work is worth it so please don't let me down. Any and all suggestions are welcome on my index! Kays94 Index!!!!!


HEARTBEAT(1) = 71109836
HEARTBEAT(2) *thread 1* = 72719922


HEARTBEAT Index

chapter 20 - page 1
chapter 21 - page 8
chapter 22 - page 31
chapter 23 - page 40
chapter 24 - page 47
chapter 25 - page 56
chapter 26 - page 67
chapter 27 - page 72
chapter 28 - page 101
chapter 29 - page 112
chapter 30 - page 117
chapter 31 - page 122
chapter 32 - page 127
chapter 33 - page 135
chapter 34 - page 141
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please read the ALL of the notes above!!!

chapter 20

v - "Studying for what?"

j - "Final general sugery exam"

v - "So you decided for sure then?"

j - "Yeah I mean I had to"

v - "Had to? What do you mean?"

j - "Uhm I think"

v - "What?"

j - "Nothing"

v - "Jeevs tell me?"

j - "I think I maybe"

v - "Maybe what?"

v - "Jeevika spill it already"

j - "Its nothing" she said looking out her window

Viren stopped the car as they reached the plaza.

v - "Now tell me whats wrong will you? Did something happen at the hospital?"

j - "My feet are swollen and my back has been hurting way more than usual recently"

v - "What do you mean? I mean isn't that because of stress?"

j - "That's what I thought. But it could be something else"

v - "You mean"

j - "I don't know"

v - "Why haven't you taken a test then?

j - "I was scared" she said tearing up

Viren placed his hand behind her head

v - "Why are you scared Jeevs. Don't worry. We'll do it first thing we get home okay?"

Jeevika nodded yes as she wiped her tears away.

The three of them got out of the car and started walking inside. Viren held Jeevika's hand tightly as they followed Zaaine around. He knew this store way to well. Target was his favorite because he could get all his toys, books, backpacks, everything here. It was like a treat for him and his parents brought him here. Within no time he had found his backpack of his liking. He then roamed around finding and looking at other things from toys to puzzles. He couldn't decide what he wanted.

z - "Daa me don't know what to get"

v - "How about that book? Then next time you can get a puzzle"

z - "But me like puzzle also"

v - "Well you have to choose one"

z - "no daa me want both"

v - "Fine then you can't get the backpack"

z - NOOO. okay me choose puzzle"

v - "Okay let's go pay for it then"

They walked to the cashier and Viren payed for the stuff. They got back into the car to go home. Jeevika was a little panicked, more than usual.

z - "daa cookie please"

v - "Zaaine I told you before bed okay"

z - "Okay daa"

v - "Are you hungry? Let's pick up something to eat"

j - "No, I'm not in the mood to"

v - "Because you're scared"

j - "I don't know"

v - "I think you're just getting overly worried. And even if it is, then what's the big deal?"

j - "It just never goes according to our plan Viren. We're never prepared. Or at least I'm not and thats why I can't give my best at it"

v - "Who said that?"

Jeevika was just quiet. Viren drove home as quickly as he could. Zaaine went upstairs to his room taking his new stuff. Atleast he was occupied now for sometime giving Viren and Jeevika sometime for themselves. They both walked upstairs hand in hand and went straight into their room, closing the door half-way. Jeevika sat on the bed and Viren sat right behind her and hugging her. He placed his arms over her chest bringing her closer to him so she was on his chest.

v - "You know you get stressed out too easily"

j - "I'm just nervous. I don't think I have it in me to do it right now"

v - "Come on, you not taking the test will just make you more nervous. And you don't think I'm nervous?"

j - "No, because you're much stronger than me"

v - "I like to show you that I am" he said smiling and kissing her cheek.

j - "Well you're pretty good at showing off"

v - "Now go take the test please"

j - "okay fine" she said getting up from the bed.

They both walked inside the bathroom and Jeevika got two tests out from below the counter sink. She went inside while Viren went back outside to their bedroom waiting for her. All those flashbacks started coming. From them going to San Francisco to Jeevika being admitted in the hospital. He started remembering the day Zaaine was born and how beautiful their life had become even though it was tough. Jeevika came back to the room and sat on Viren's lap.

j - "Are you happy nervous or scared nervous"

v - "Obviously happy nervous dumbo"

Jeevika smiled. Just then Zaaine peeped in from the half-open door and saw his parents. He went inside and climbed on top sitting on top of Jeevika.

v - "Gosh the two of you are so heavy. I'm dying over here"

Zaaine and Jeevika started laughing and gave each other a high-five.

z -"Daa cookie now please?"

v - "Okay, go get your night suit out, I'm coming"

z - "Daa me take it out already"

v - "Wow Zaaine is so responsible. Zaaine you need to go to sleep on time today because tomorrow is your first day of school"

z - "Okay da, me sleep on time" he said climbing down from Jeevika's lap.

z - "Daa let's go" he said holding Viren's hand.

v - "Jeevs" he said initiating her to get up from his lap.

Instead of getting up she lay her head on his shoulder and hugged him smiling

v - "Zaaine, mommy is being a baby" he said smiling

z - "Why is mommy sick"

v - "No she just wants attention" he said looking at Jeevika who was also smiling.

z - "Mommy leave daa please"

j - "Why Zaaine? I want to sit in his lap" she said being a little girl and crossing her arms around his neck

Viren and Jeevika were having fun messing around with Zaaine.

z - "Noo da need to help me. Please mommy"

j - "Noo Zaaine, I'm sitting on his lap right now. He will help you later"

z - "Noo, he my daa. Leave him" he said trying to make her move

j - "No he's mine" she said hugging Viren

Zaaine got back on top of Jeevika and started hugging Viren also. Viren was enjoying seeing Jeevika and Zaaine fighting and laughing sooo much. He couldn't stop smiling seeing his world in front of his eyes. Both Zaaine and Jeevika kept bickering with each other and laughing like never before.

v - "You silly goose"

z - "No mommy silly"

j - "No Zaine silly"

v - "Okay, you guys are seriously going to kill me now"

z - "Sorry daa" he said giving him a kiss and getting off Jeevika's lap.

Jeevika also got up from his lap and held Viren's hand.

v - "Zaaine why don't you go downstairs and open your puzzle. We are coming down in 10 minutes"

z - "Okay daa" he said going outside the room.

Viren got up from the bed and kissed Jeevika's hand. Both of them walked into the bathroom again to see the tests.

❤️REMEMBER TO PRESS LIKE&COMMENT IF YOU WANT ME TO CONTINUE! NEXT UPDATE AFTER 70 LIKES ❤️

Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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resss

unresss

wohooo im FIRST

Aweee Karina this is my most most favourite update! haha the cutest, adobalest, and priceless update...i had this huge smile on my face the whole time till i finished reading it even right now i still have my smile on 😃😃😃😃

Finally u changed ur mind and didnt wait until those 5 lazy ppl to like ur last update LOL and u gave us this cutesy update!! a BIG BIG BIG wala THANK YOU and a BIG BIG wala HUGGIE🤗 to Karina from Marziah and Zaaine LOLOL

The update is really great like always...Zaaine is the cutest!!! i sooo wish he was real so i could pull his cute cheeks hahah. My fav part was when Jeevs and Zaaine got on Virens lap. loved their cute argument about Viren...my most fav lines:

z - "Daa me don't know what to get"

v - "How about that book? Then next time you can get a puzzle"

z - "But me like puzzle also"

v - "Well you have to choose one"

z - "no daa me want both"

v - "Fine then you can't get the backpack"

z - NOOO. okay me choose book"

v - "Okay let's go pay for it then"

awee Zaaine doesnt know what to choose, cuz he want all of them...loved when he saaid Nooo, okay me choose book...sho cute!!!

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z - "Okay da, me sleep on time" he said climbing down from Jeevika's lap.

z - "Daa let's go" he said holding Viren's hand.

v - "Jeevs" he said initiating her to get up from his lap.

Instead of getting up she lay her head on his shoulder and hugged him smiling

v - "Zaaine, mommy is being a baby" he said smiling

z - "Why is mommy sick"

v - "No she just wants attention" he said looking at Jeevika who was also smiling.

z - "Mommy leave daa please"

j - "Why Zaaine? I want to sit in his lap" she said being a little girl and crossing her arms around his neck

Viren and Jeevika were having fun messing around with Zaaine.

z - "Noo da need to help me. Please mommy"

j - "Noo Zaaine, I'm sitting on his lap right now. He will help you later"

z - "Noo, he my daa. Leave him" he said trying to make her move

j - "No he's mine" she said hugging Viren

how lucky all three of them are to have eachother hehe a super cute FAMILY!!

I am 100% sure that the results aree positive, and this time Zaaine should have a baby sister, im sure he will be the Best Big Brother...aweee that actually sounds so adorable heheh...

I respect your rules Karina...You deserve so much more Likes and Comments as what your getting right now...I dont understand how people have time to read the update but wont have 1 second to Like it and another minute to throw a comment..you work so hard for us and give us so many updates and u started writing OS's, Picture Stories...People should understand by now!!! and Im glad you listed to what I told u about Pming 😆 people who dont comment or like regularly deserve that!! way to go Karinaaa, thanks again for updating!!
OH OH ALMOST FORGOT HAHA...CONGRATULATIONS AGAIN FOR THE SECOND THREAD..🥳HOPE YOU WILL CONTINUE THIS STORY UNTIL YOU REACH THREAD 100000000000!!! (in my dreams😆)
Edited by jeevi7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally got a time to comment 😆

v - "You silly goose"
z - "No mommy silly"
j - "No Zaine silly"
v - "Okay, you guys are seriously going to kill me now"
z - "Sorry daa" he said giving him a kiss and getting off Jeevika's lap.

Loved this part so much .. I mean seriously it was just so cute ... 😊

z - "Noo da need to help me. Please mommy"
j - "Noo Zaaine, I'm sitting on his lap right now. He will help you later"
z - "Noo, he my daa. Leave him" he said trying to make her move
j - "No he's mine" she said hugging Viren

🤣Jeevika seriously 😆 couldnt stop laughing when i read this 😆
awww loved all the parts so much and yet again it was just hats off update ... Thank you so much


AND

congratulation for the second thread 🥳
Edited by Dhoxi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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My favorite story finds a new thread, wohoo 🥳🤪

How happy am , may this story be on so many threads and finally get published into a novel,haa, am so waiting for that day!

Coming to the update ! No, i don't have anything to speak to you,am so sorry already 🤢 you always manage to leave m astounded and confused that do i know english? because i don't find words for this beautiful writing here on the forum!

basically, I want Zaaine to be taken home along with Viren and then Jeevika will follow too,, so i can imagine the whole story again, the story is so flawlessly written..love it ❤️

and how Viren hushes Zaaine to walk over to washroom with his love, that was so cute.. zaaine is such an innocent baby in the house..

the too cute scenes you add are making me drool over! omg, can't you update it already?? i am so dying to read this story and We found love alrady!!

have read this part like a 50 times now

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Edited by little.angel56 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res! LUVED IT! Plz do continue soon! and pm me when u have the chance!







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KRYAN IS DA BEST!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so finally u made ur mind to give us the update 😛
its DAMN AWESOME 👏
aww jeevs is scared if ever she is pregnant n viren is happy wala nervous, wow zaaine is too goo he knows the store pretty well got confuse choosing between book n puzzle, again he asked for his cookies 😊
virika waiting for the result impatiently, just imagining how jeevs would look like when acting like a baby girl n sitting on viren's lap n having fun messing with poor zaaine... 😆

z - "Noo, he my daa. Leave him" he said trying to make her move

j - "No he's mine" she said hugging Viren

VIREN BELONGS TO BOTH OF THEM!!! 😊

Jeevs n zaaine r his world n he would happily accept the another baby (if there is any!) 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update!! Just awesome !!!! Lovely !!!!!! Loved it...
How cute zaaine is awieee ❤️

U ro so so so great !! I cant tell u...
Ur way f writing is just mindblowing!
Muahhh...!!!!
Big round f aplause

Virika u ro sooo adorable!
M flying on clouds now being speechless !!!!
Please update soon...!!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first,congrats for new thread🥳

back to the update...super duper, fantastic update👏👏...loved it ❤️
aww...jeevika was so scared if she is pregnant or not...n loved hw viren said he was happy nervous.
zaaine my little cutipie...love him to core...such a sweetheart he is
aww..zaaine on jeevika n jeevika on viren's lap...such a cute, happy family moment
zaaine n jeevika fighting for viren was so sweet..seeing them have amazing time n laughing...made me go aww.
love hw neither zaaine nor jeevika wanted to share viren..poor viren saying they weigh so much😆
can't wait to know the pregnancy result
thanx for pm..continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hayeee !!!!!!!!!!
maar dala yaar !!😳
loved the update girl !
seriously the serial should appoint you as their script writer !!!!!! you will give such awesome twists and turns to the show!!!!👏👏👏
😆
great job !!!!!!!
totally loved it!
PS- zaine is the cutest thing ever .. silly goose awww😃

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