VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146

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Posted: 12 years ago

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plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz artii update waiting waiting...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: cutiepie2244
Ufff after so long m commenting really it feels great...😊😊
This is the awesome story dear.. every part becomes more n more interesting.. my words got finished but the interest of this story remain the same...😊😊 4 which clap clap...👏👏 Hey Anjali, thnks a lot..dats really vry sweet of u..😊

Now cuming back to the update.. it was as usuall speechless.. superb update.. loved it from the bottom of my heart..😊😊.. Wish i would b there at maanvi's place😆😆... Awww loved the concern of virat as always... just loved this dialogue so mucchhh (Bhabhi, (looking down) maine usse blackmail kiya tha, ki agar woh mujhse shadi nahi karegi toh main aapko uski bemari ke baare mein...(looking at jeevika) Par yakeen maaniye Bhabhi, maine yeh sab sirf aur sirf Maanvi ki bhaliye ke liye kiya tha. Main janta hun ki usse mujhse pyaar nahi hai, par main...main usse bahut pyaar karta hun. Maine pyaar ka matlab ussi se sikha hai, jabse pyaar ko mehsus kiya hai, sirf Maanvi ko apne saath, apne paas paya hai. Main usse khud se dur, akele tadapte huye nahi dekh sakta tha, isiliye maine usse shadi ki. Mera yakeen kijiye Bhabhi.)...Hehe😆...m glad u lykd it...thnks a ton

Loved the trust of jeevika towards virat.. they r the best bhabhi-dewar in the world... Awww here i felt bad 4 virat😭😭 ( Chalo, tumhe itna toh yaad hai ki humari shadi ke baad tumhara mere kamre par utna hi haq banta hai jitna ki mera. Kash tum yeh bhi samjh paati ki shadi ke baad Pati aur Patni ka ek dusre ki zindagi par bhi utna hi haq banta hai.) Thnk u...dey r indeed best devar-bhabhi in da world..😊

Awww again loved ur this dialogue of virat.. ufff i m just fida on virat in ur this story (TUM MUJHE CHODH KAR CHALI GAYI THI MAANVI. Akele, beech raha mein. Tumne yeh bhi nahi socha ki tumhare jaane ke baad mera kya hota? Main kya karta? Tumhari Di kaise jeeti tumhare bagair? Main kaise reh paata tumhare bina?)
( Tumne apna vada tod diya tha Maanvi, tum mujhe bilkul akela chodh kar chali gayi thi. ) Really, wow dats gr8, glad u lykd da Viraat in my story..😊

The love of virat towards maanvi is so pure... ur story is that amazing that if a preson will keenly read this story from heart he will go deep inside the story... n he will never care of the surroundings.. seriously dear.. Bow down to u..👏👏 Aww thnk u so much Anjali, dats so sweet of u..😊

Yuuupppiiieee yyyuuuppiiieee finally she confessed.. really very happy i m... N dear thanxx 4 the pm n continue soon...😊😊 It has been 6 days u didn't update.. plz i want update.. i want update.. plz tommorrow pleeejjj😭 Ur most wc..n thnks...wow u've been counting..😃 sorry m late..n m updating 2day, hope u lyk it..😊thnks once again Anjali..😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: zaira_virman
Plz dear...cont soon...waiting dear...

sorry i made u wait 4 so long...m updating in few mins..😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: manvilover18
plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz artii update waiting waiting...

sorry i made u wait 4 so long...m updating in few mins...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#715

Yay pls make it soon just cant wait

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Posted: 12 years ago

#716

u said u will update but u didnt and u also.are not answering mt pms so plez update soon cant wait

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey guyz m bck wid a new update, m extremely sorry 4 da delay...thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments guyz, n 4 da lyks..hope u'll lyk dis part as well..EnJoY...

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 22...

~Recap~

Viraat was shocked, he was just looking at her with widen eyes,

Maanvi: I...Love...You...Viraat!!!!

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Viraat was beyond shocked. He was not expecting this, Maanvi, his wife is in love with him.

Viraat: (shocked/smiles) Kya?
Maanvi: (shouts) I LOVE YOU...I LOVE YOU...I LOVE YOU...
Viraat: (smirks) Kyun?
Maanvi: (pouts cutely) Kya kyun? Pyaar karti hun, bas karti hun.
Viraat: Kyun karti ho?
Maanvi: (irritated) Hadh hai, jab nahi karti thi tab problem tha tumhe, ab jab karti hun tabhi bhi problem hai tumhe.
Viraat: (teasingly) Nahi, problem nahi hai, par tumhe mujhse pyaar kyun hai?
Maanvi: Kyun ki tumhe mujhse pyaar hai.
Viraat: Acha aur agar mujhe tumse pyaar nahi nafrat hota, toh tum bhi mujhse nafrat karti?
Maanvi: Na..Nahi...
Viraat: (smirks) Acha? Waise tumhe kisne kaha ki main tumse pyaar karta hun?
Maanvi: Mujhe pata hai.
Viraat: (turns his back towards her) Tumhe kuch nahi pata, main toh tumse pyaar karta hi nahi. Tum toh sirf meri dost ho, meri Partner.
Maanvi: (ran in front of him) Jhut kyun bol rahe ho, mujhe pata hai ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho.
Viraat: Thik hai toh prove kar ke dikhao.
Maanvi: (confused) Matlab?
Viraat: (smirks) Agar tumhe yakeen hai ki main tumse pyaar karta hun, toh tumhe mere muh se bulwana hoga. Kisi bhi tarah, bolo manzur hai. Aur agar tum nahi kar payi toh tum maan logi ki tum galat ho, main tumse pyaar nahi karta.
Maanvi: (hands on her hips) Aur agar maine tumhare muh se woh 3 magical words bulwa liya toh?
Viraat: Um Then...(smiles at her) will see. Batao (hand extended in front of her) Deal?
Maanvi: Thik hai, (shakes his hand with hers) Done Deal.

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VirMan, VirIka, Kadambari Chachi, and Inder Chach were sitting in the garden.

Maanvi: (smiles) Di, ek game khele?
Viren: (smiles) Kaunsa game?
Maanvi: (looking at Viraat/smilingly) Dumb charades.

Viraat understood why Maanvi suggested this idea, he smirked at her and rolled his eyes.

Jeevika: Nahi Mannu, mujhe nahi khelna.
Maanvi: (frowns) Di please na, khelte hai, waise bhi yahan vele baithe hain.
Kadambari Chachi: Haye ni Jeevika, Maanvi sahi keh rahi hai, khelte hai na.
Viren: Haan khelte hai.
Jeevika: (smiles a little) Thik hai.
Maanvi: Ok then, chalo partners pick karte hai, main chits likhti hun.
Viren: Arey partners kyun pick karna, (looking at Jeevika) humare saath toh already life partners hai.
Inder Chachu: Haan sahi hai, sab apne apne life partners ke saath raheinge.
Kadambari Chachi: Haan..
Viraat: (to himself) Iss Bandariya ke dimaag mein akhir chal kya raha hai?

Maanvi smiled at Viraat and started making chits, writing movies name on it.

Maanvi: (to herself/smiles) Bacchu, tumse aaj woh teen shabd na khela diya, toh mera naam bhi Maanvi Vadhera nahi.
Jeevika: Mannu ho gaya.

Maanvi immediately turned around, while hiding her hand behind her back. Viraat looked at her suspiciously.

Maanvi: Huh..(smiles) Haan Di..aayi.

She walked towards them with a bowl in one of her hand, while the other was still hiding behind her back.

Maanvi: Yeh rahi chits. (places the bowl on the table)
Viren: Ok then lets start. (looking at everyone) Kaun jaye ga pehle?
Kadambari Chachi: (excitedly) Hum...(looking at Inder Chachu) Jaiye aap.

Inder Chachu went towards the table, where the bowl was placed and picked a chit out of it. He opened the chit and looked at everyone and then back at the chit. The name that was written on it was Ghajini(Bollywood movie).

Inder Chachu: (to himself) Yeh kis bala ka naam hai?
Maanvi: Aapka time shuru hota hai ab Chahu.
Inder Chachu: Huh? (small smile) Haan...
Kadambari Chachi: Aap baat nahi kar sakhte, ishare kijiye.

Inder Chahu nodded and looked back and forth. He was actually confused, he had never seen this movie, therefore it was difficult for him to act it out.

Inder Chachu: (to himself) Ghajini..lagta hai isska matlab ganjaa(bald) hai.

Inder Chachu raised his hands up and held his hair in his fist, pretending to pull it away like a mad person. Kadambari Chachi looked at him weirdly, while VirMan and VirIka started giggling silently.

Kadambari Chachi: Yeh baal kyun kheeinch(pulling) rahe ho aap?

Inder Chachu looked at Kadambari Chachi and pointed towards his hair.

Kadambari Chachi: (confused) Baal?

Inder Chachu smiled and nodded. He pretended as if he was holding a shaver in his hand, close to his head and shaving his hair. Kadambari Chachi looked at him questioningly, while VirMan and VirIka were controlling their giggles.

Kadambari Chachi: (totally confused) Baal..?? Baal kya?

Inder Chachu looked at her irritatedly.

Inder Chachu: (to himself) Ek bhi filmein dekhna chodhti nahi hai, fir bhi guess nahi kar paa rahi.
Maanvi: Chachu, 5..4..3..2..1..(claps) times up.
Kadambari Chachi: (angerily) Haye ni, kar kya rahe the aap?

Inder Chachu: Koi bhi movies miss nahi karti, par jab guess karne ka waqt aata hai toh dimaag ghaas charne jaata hai na tumhara.
Kadambari Chachi: (hands on her hips) Acha ji, aapke actions dekh kar toh koi pagal bhi na guess kar paaye toh main kya chiz hun.
Viraat: Waise likha kya tha?
Inder Chachu: Ghajini.

Everyone looked at each other and then at Inder Chachu, who was looking at them confusedly. They burst out laughing, holding their stomach.

Inder Chachu: (looking at everyone confusedly) Kya hua? Has kyun rahe ho?
Viren: (laughingly) Chachu, aap kaise kaise actions kar rahe the?
Inder Chachu: Arey mujhe jo samjh aaya maine wahi kar diya.
Kadambari Chachi: (stops laughing) Oye teri aapko laga Ghajini kisi ganje ka naam hai..(started laughing again) ahahahaha...Ghajni ek villan hota hai, aur woh ganjaa toh bilkul bhi nahi hota. Hahahaha..
Maanvi: (laughingly) God Chachu, aap kitne funny ho.
Inder Chachu: (embarrassed) Haan, toh mujhe nahi pata tha. Chalo ab kis ki baari hai?
Kadambari Chachi: (controlling her laughter) Chal Jeevika ab teri baari.
Jeevika: Main..?
Maanvi: (smiles) Haan Di, com'on.
Jeevika: Ok.

Jeevika stands up and walks towards the table. She smiles at Viren, picks a chit, and opens it. Viren smiled as Jeevika started doing gestures, her hands on her chest.

Viren: Main?

Jeevika nodded negatively.

Viren: Hum?

Jeevika smiled at nodded possitively. She moved her hands and pointed at Viren.

Viren: Tum?

Jeevika clapped happily, and Viren smiled at her cuteness.

Viren: (smiles lovingly) Hum Tum.
Jeevika: (blushes) Hum Tum.
Inder Chachu: Jaa Viraat teri baari.

Maanvi smiles as Viraat turned towards her. He gave her a small smile and walked towards the table. He opened the chit as he picked it out of the bowl and looked at Maanvi suspiciously.

Viraat: (to himself) Yeh tha iska surprise? Kya Maanvi, Bandariya hi rahogi, isme toh waisa kuch likha bhi nahi hai.

Viren: Viraat mere Bhai, pura din nahi hai humare paas, chal shuru ho jaa.

Viraat smiled at Viren and turned towards Maanvi. She smirked as she saw him doing actions with his hands. Viraat looked at Maanvi and gave a side smile while placing his hand on his chest.

Maanvi: Dil?

Viraat smirked and nodded negatively.

Maanvi: Main?

Again he nodded negatively. Maanvi frowns and started thinking. Viraat pointed at her, then at himself, and then held his hands together.

Maanvi: Hum?

Viraat raised his eyebrow and gave her a side smile. He pointed at Maanvi, who was looking at him confusedly.

Maanvi: Tum?

He nodded negatively, this time little irritated.

Maanvi: (to herself) Maine hi likha hai aur main khud bhul gayi...(to Viraat) Um..aap?

He smiled and gestured her as if asking her 'who?/why'

Maanvi: (confused) Kyun?

Viraat rolled his eyes at her.

Maanvi: Hum aap kyun..Nahi...(looking at Viraat) Kaun?

Viraat smiled and nodded possitively.

Kadambari Chachi: 10 seconds more...10...9...8...
Maanvi: (thinking hard) Hum aap kaun? Hum aap kaun..Hum aapke..
Viren: 5..4...3..
Maanvi: (smiles) Hum aapke hain kaun?

Viraat smiled and walked towards her.

Viraat: (winks) Hum aapke hain kaun?

Maanvi blushed and looked down.

Viraat: (whisperes) Yahi idea tha tumhara Bandariya?

Maanvi was just about to answer, but stopped as she heard Kadambari Chachi's excited voice.

Kadambari Chachi: (excitedly) Haye ni meri baari. (at Inder Chachu, threatingly) Main acting kar rahi hun, agar aapne thik se guess nahi kiya na toh dekhna main kya karti hun.

She walked towards the table, leaving a scared Chachu behind.

Inder Chachu: (looking up) Hey Bhagwaan bacha lena.

VirIka and VirMan laughed at Inder Chachu, while Kadambari Chachi opened up the chit.

Kadambari Chachi: (happily) Haye rabba.
Jeevika: Chachi aap bol nahi sakhti.
Kadambari Chachi: Sorry ji sorry.

She smiled and made a heart shape with her hands/fingers.

Inder Chachu: (laughs a little) Arey yeh toh bahut hi simple hai. Dil.

Kadambari Chachi nodded and started running around like a mad women. VirIka and VirMan started laughing their hearts out yet again.

Inder Chachu: (looking at her weirdly) Yeh kya kar rahi ho? Pagal ho gayi ho kya?

Kadambari Chachi smiled and pointed at him while nodding.

Inder Chachu: (confused) Kya?

Kadambari Chachi gesturing him to repeat.

Inder Chachu: Kya? Pagal?

She pointed at him and nodded with a wide smile.

Inder Chachu: Dil pagal...Dil pagal...(wide smile) Arey Dil toh pagal hai.
Kadambari Chachi: (proudly smiles) Haye ni, kitni achi acting kar leti hun na main.
Inder Chachu: Tumhari acting nahi meri guessing kaam aayi hai. Pata nahi kya paglon ke jaise kar rahi thi.
Kadambari Chachi: Aapki tarah apne baal toh nahi kheeinch rahi thi.
Viren: Acha, ab meri bari.

Viren walked towards the table and picked up the chit. He smiled at Jeevika, as he opened the chit. He looked at the chit and then at Jeevika, confusedly.

Viren: Yeh kaise karun?
Viraat: Bhai baatein karna allowed nahi hai, jo bhi aata hai kardo.
Viren: Thik hai.

Viren pretended as if he was holding a guitar in his hands, and started playing it like a crazy person.

Jeevikac: (looking at him onfusedly) Viren ji aap kya kar rahe ho? Kuch samjh nahi aa raha.

Viren looked at jeevika poutingly and pretended holding a rock in his hand.

Jeevika: Ball?

Viren nodded negatively.

Jeevika: Pathar?

Viren nodded and showed her thumbs up.

Jeevika: English mein?...Rock?

Viren nodded and pointed towards the celing.

Jeevika: (looking up) Roof? (looking back at him) Celing?

Viren nodded negatively and starts drawing a star in the air.

Jeevika: Star?

Viren smiled and nodded happily.

Jeevika: (wide smile) Rockstar.

Jeevika walked back towards her seat. Viraat looked at Maanvi and smirks.

Viraat: Maanvi ji, aapki baari.

Maanvi smiled at him, gets up and walks towards the table. She looked around and saw VirIka, and Kadambari Chachi talking, while Viraat and Inder Chachu were looking at them. Viraat turned to look at Maanvi and saw her looking at everyone while extending her hand towards the bowl.

Viraat: (to himself) Yeh aise sabko kyun dekh rahi hai?

She entered her hand in the bowl, but didn't picked any chit. Once again she turned to look at everyone, after pulling her hand back. She smiled as everyone turned their face towards her. She opened the chit and smiled as wide as she could, which confused Viraat even more. She looked up at Viraat and smiled mischeviously.

Viren: Saali Saiba, ab shuru bhi karo.

She showed Viraat thumbs up with a smirk.

Viraat: English.

Maanvi smiled and placed her index finger on her chest, pointing at herself. She looked at a confused Viraat with a smirk and raised her eyebrow.

Viraat: I?

Maanvi gave him a side smile and nodded possitively. She crossed her hands across her chest.

Viraat: I..

Viraat looked up at Maanvi and saw a mischevious smile, playing on her lips. He understood what was written on the chit. His Bandariya is really unbelievable, he thought.

Viraat: (pretending to be confused) I kya Maanvi? Kuch samjh nahi aa raha.

Maanvi frowns and looked at Viraat angrily. She pointed at herself, then crossed her hands across her chest, and finally pointed at Viraat. She smiled at Viraat as he smiled looking at her.

Viraat: I and you?

Maanvi looked at him with a angry glare. She rolled her eyes and again did the same gesture as she did before.

Viraat: (smirks) I,,,Hate?

That was enough for Maanvi, she, without giving a second thought, shouted at the top of her lungs at Viraat.

Maanvi: I Hate nahi...I Love You Chep.

VirIka looked shocked, Inder Chachu and Kadambari Chachi looked at each other, with a smile, while Viraat looked at Maanvi with a smirk.

Ok dats it, I knw, its not really interesting, but plz bare wid me, I was really busy, had difficulties writting dis update, really sorry 4 da delay...please leave ur comments 4 me, n do suggest me sum idea's guyz...I actually need em..thnks a lots, Luv Aartii..

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Edited by Artii159 - 12 years ago

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

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yipiiieee am first finally
wooowww awesomeee update arti ...👏
it was full of fun and enjoyment ...😊
manvi ka plan to bahot acha tha bt asusual apne plans mein woh khud hi phas jati hai 😛
bt i wish virat woh bol deta
coz yu knw we dnt like manvi losing with virat 😊

kadambari chachu and inder chachi were hilarious😆
virika were perfect asusual 😊

Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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wow wonderful update!!!!! finally manvi confessed aur virat ne baazi palat di... nd da ways in which manvi was trying 2 make him tll ilu was so cute... chachu's acting part was funny😆 nd da ending wen manvi said

" I hate nahi.. I love u chep"

it was superb!!!😉 da update was so nice... plzzz cont soon nd agar mujhe koi ideas aaye toh bataungi... thnx fr da pm😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#720

Originally posted by: myvirman
u said u will update but u didnt and u also.are not answering mt pms so plez update soon cant wait

M so sorry, actually was busy updating...dats y didn't replied, really very sorry bout dat,,,n I updated it..u can read it n tell me hw was it..? Sorry once again..

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