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VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146- Page 77

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Posted: 13 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: kgoyal
Update update update plz i m waiting

M so sorry m late, but I'll update soon..sorry..

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plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update yaar waiting...

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Waiting for tht moment 😊
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Lovely update. .

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plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update yaar waiting...

Will update 2morrow, pakka...sorry m late..

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Hello guyz...m bck, Thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments n lyks...really appreciate it, I actually reached 100 pgs, n dis is an SS..hve extended it way 2 much...I wanted 2 end dis, but some of u guyz want me 2 continue, so plz suggest sum ideas, m really out of it..nw here we go, EnJoY...

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 24...

~Recap~

Maanvi: I Hate nahi...I Love You Chep.

VirIka looked shocked, Inder Chachu and Kadambari Chachi looked at each other, with a smile, while Viraat looked at Maanvi with a smirk.

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~VirIka's Room~

Viren: Jeevika, kya tumne bhi wahi notice kiya jo maine kiya?

Viren was lazily lying on the bed, while Jeevika was removing her earring, standing in front of the mirror.

Jeevika: (turns to face him) Kis baare mein Viren JI?
Viren: (smiles) Viraat aur Maanvi ke baare mein..Actually khas kar Maanvi ke baare mein.
Jeevika: (confused) Kya?

Viren looked at his Wife and sat up on the bed.

Viren: Seriously Jeevika, tumne kuch notice nahi kiya?
Jeevika: Nahi. Aisa kya notice karliya aapne Viren Ji?
Viren: Haye Jeevika, tumne sachi mein notice nahi kiya. Arey jab hum game khel rahe the, end mein Maanvi ko jo chit mila tha...usme kya likha tha?
Jeevika: I LOVE YOU...
Viren: (smirks) Haye, I Love You Too.
Jeevika: (blushes) Viren JI.
Viren: Haan toh, Maanvi ke paas pura time tha fir bhi, usne bina soche, gusse mein woh keh diya, woh bhi tab jab Viraat ne I Hate kaha tha.
Jeevika: (confused)Toh?
Viren: (looking up) Hey Bhagwaan, kya karun main isska. (looking at Jeevika) Jeevika, let me make this nice and simple. Maanvi is in love with Viraat.
Jeevika: Haan toh?

Viren looked at Jeevika amusedly and shocked.

Viren: Toh? Main tumhe yahan dhamake daar news suna raha hun, aur tum ek chota sa 'toh' keh rahi ho?
Jeevika: (smiles) Viren Ji, news toh dhamake daar hai, par aap bahut late ho yeh news sunane mein.
Viren: (confused) Matlab?
Jeevika: Matlab ki..(walking towards the bed) mujhe pata hai.
Viren: Kaise?
Jeevika: Viren ji, Maanvi meri Bahen hai, (sits on the bed) usse pehle main uski feelings, uski mann ki baat samjh leti hun. Mujhe yeh baat teen din pehle hi pata chal gayi thi.
Viren: Wah Madam ji, aap toh kamaal ki ho, mujhe batana zaruri nahi samjha apne.
Jeevika: Lawyer ho khud nahi samjh sakhte the.
Viren: (smiles) Haan yeh bhi hai. (pulls her in his arms) Chalo, usse ehsas toh hua, bas izhaar bhi ho jaiye.
Jeevika: Hmm...(smiles)

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Maanvi was sitting on the bed, hugging a pillow, while looking at Viraat poutingly. Viraat, who was sitting on the sofa, with his laptop, smiled looking at Maanvi from the corner of his eye.

Maanvi: (to herself) Saare plan par paani pher diya iss Chep ne. Ek 'I Love You' nahi keh sakhta hai apni hi Biwi ko, Chep Bandar kahin ka. Hadh hai, pyaar hai par izhaar hi nahi karta, Ullu.
Viraat: (smirks/eyes still glued on the screen) Mujhe gaaliyaan dena band karo Maanvi, aur so jao.

Maanvi looked at Viraat with wide open eyes.

Maanvi: Kya?
Viraat: Kya? Kya? So jao.
Maanvi: Tumhe kaise pata?
Viraat: (looks up at her) Kya? Sone ki baat. Raat ko sab sote hai Ullu ko chodh kar.
Maanvi: (fumes) Main Ullu hun?
Viraat: (pretending to be shocked) Kisne kaha?
Maanvi: Tumne indirectly kaha.
Viraat: Lo, maine toh bas yahi kaha ki raat ko Ullu nahi sote, maine tumhe Ullu thodi kaha.
Maanvi: Main jaag rahi hun toh mujhe hi keh rahe ho na.
Viraat: (smirks) Jaag toh main bhi raha hun.
Maanvi: Ha..haan toh...fir bhi..
Viraat: (smiles at her) Just go to sleep Maanvi, tum shart har gayi.

Maanvi looked at him angerily and stood up from the bed. Viraat looked up at Maanvi confusedly.

Viraat: Kya hua?

Without saying a word, Maanvi smiled and started walking towards the sofa, where Viraat was sitting. Viraat was looking at her questioningly, he moved back as Maanvi reached where he was sitting. She took his laptop and moved it away from his lap. Viraat looked at his laptop, then at his Wife, Maanvi, who after placing his laptop on the table, sat on his lap. He gulped as Maanvi's fingers moved across his face.

Maanvi: (huskily) Tum shart ki baat kar rahe ho? Main toh khud ko haar gayi hun tumse.

Viraat closed his eyes as Maanvi leaned towards his lips, his senses were going out of control. Maanvi looked at Viraat, him being so close to her, was actually melting her, all her sense was going out of her control as well.

Maanvi: (to herself) Mannu, tu bahek nahi sakhti. Tujhe shart jeetna hai na, sirf do ghante bache hai baara(12) bajne mein. Concentrate.

Maanvi leaned towards his neck and blew on it seductively. Her lips moved towards his earlob, she placed a soft kiss after biting on it. Viraat's hands were slowly making its way towards her waist. Their hearts were beating at a uncontrollable rate, and their breath hitched at their closeness. Maanvi was finding it really difficult to control herself in front of Viraat, who is so damn close to her.

Maanvi: (to herself) Mannu bas thodi der aur..

She moved her lips towards his neck, while Viraat's hands moved up to her back, caressing her bare back with his rough hands. She slightly brushed her lips on his neck, making Viraat lose all of his senses. Without realizing what was happening, Viraat pulled Maanvi more closer to him, and rolled on top of her, pinning her down on the sofa. He moved his lips near hers and brushed it with his. He then moved down to her neck, and started nuzzling his nose on it, making Maanvi lose all her sense.

Maanvi: (pulling him close/eyes closed) I LOVE YOU VIRAAT.
Viraat: (pulling her even more close to him) I LOVE YOU MAANVI.

Maanvi opened her eyes and smiled.

Maanvi: I Love You Too Viraat.

It was then, when Viraat realized what he had just said. He moved back and saw Maanvi smiling.

Viraat: (shocked) KYA?
Maanvi: (smirks) I LOVE YOU...MAANVI, tumne abhi kaha.
Viraat: (worried) Keh diya?
Maanvi: (smiles) Haan keh diya, (happily) aur main shart jeet gayi.
Viraat: (getting up) Yeh cheating thi. Tumne cheating ki hai.
Maanvi: (pretending to be inoccent/stands up) Lo maine kaunsi cheating ki hai?
Viraat: Toh kya kar rahi thi yeh?
Maanvi: (smirks) Kyun pasand nahi aaya?
Viraat: (looking for words) Maanvi..tum...tum, tum cheater ho.

Viraat turned around poutingly to leave, but Maanvi held his hand, preventing him from leaving.

Be-Intehaan (plz listen 2 dis song while reading)

Maanvi: Ah suno na...Kahe kya suno na...(other hand on her chest) Dil mera suno na...(tilts her head, looking at Viraat) sunlo zara.

Viraat smiled when Maanvi hugged him from behind, clutching onto his shirt tightly, while singing.

Maanvi: (eyes closed) Teri Bahon mein, mujhe rehna hai raat bhar, (pulls apart) teri baahon mein (walks in front of him) hogi subha.
Viraat: (wraps his hands around her waist/pulls her towards him) Be-intehaan...
Maanvi: (looking at him lovingly/smiles) Be-intehaan...
Viraat: (smiles at her) Be-intehaan...
Maanvi: (tilts her head sideways) Hm mmm...
Viraat: (turns her around, her back touching his chest) Yun pyaar kar...
Maanvi: (eyes closed) Yun pyaar kar...
Viraat: (moving her hair from one shoulder) Be-intehaan...
Maanvi: (clutching onto her saree) Huhhaa Aahhh...
Viraat: (moving his fingers, from her face, to her neck) Dekha karun...(moving down to her shoulder) Saari umar...
Maanvi: (breathing heavily) Saari umar...
Viraat: (turns her around with a spin) Tere nishaan...
Maanvi: (opens her eyes) Huh Ahhaa...
Viraat: (smiles) Be-intehaan...
Maanvi: (smiles back) Hmm mmm...
Viraat: (helds her hand in his) Koi kasaar na rahe, (nodding negatively, while looking at her) meri khabar na rahe, (places her hand on his chest) chhule mujhe iss kadar, Be-intehaan...(starts nuzzling his face in her hair) Jab saanson mein teri saansein ghuli toh, fir sulagne lage. (pulls back) Ehsaas mere, mujhse kehne lage. (carries her up in his arms) Haan, Baahon mein teri, aake jahan do, yun simmatne lage, (walking towards their bed) sahelab jaise koi behne lage. (places her down/moving close to her) Khoya hun main aa ghosh mein. (Maanvi wraps her hands around his neck/pulling him close) Tu bhi kahan ab hosh mein...(pulls her close, by her waist) Makhmali, raat ki, hona subha...(looking at her) Be-intehaan...

BE-INTEHAAN...(kisses her forehead)

Viraat: (moving to her left cheek) Be-intehaan...

BE-INTEHAAN...(kisses her left cheek)

Viraat: (moving to her right cheek) Yun pyaar kar...

YUN PYAAR KAR...(kisses her right cheek)

Viraat: (moves his lips towards her nose) Be-intehaan..

BE-INTEHAAN...(kisses the tip of her nose)

Viraat: Oh ooo...(moving her hair away from her neck/shoulder) Hmmm hmmm hmmm...

Viraat leaned towards her shoulder and started kissing her fiercely. Maanvi grabbed his shirt into her fist, pulling him even closer towards her. Viraat moved towards her neck, leaving marks, and placing soft kisses to soothe the pain. His hand moved towards the dori of her blouse, while her hands moved towards his shirt.

Maanvi: (pulling him more closer) Gustakhiyaan...kuch tum karo...kuch hum kare, (smirks, while buttoning his shirt) iss taraahhh..
Viraat: (smirks) Hmm mmm..
VirMan: (leaning close to each others face) Sharma ke do...saaye hai jo...(Maanvi turned her face away, blushingly) muh pherle humse yahan...
Viraat: (turns her face to face him) Haan chhu toh liya hai yeh jism tune, (looking at her lips) rooh bhi chhumle, (rubbing his thumb over her lips) alfaaz bheege, bheege kyun hai mere. (rolls her on top of him) Haan yun chhur hoke majboor hoke, (moving her hair behind) katra katra kahe, (pulling her close) ehsaas bheege, bheege kyun hai mere. (moving his hands on her bare back) Toh bekhabar bheege badan, ho besabar, bheege badan. (rolls on top of her again) Le rahe, raat bhar, angdaiyaa..(nuzzling his nose on her neck) Be-intehaan.
Maanvi: (fingers running through his hair/eyes closed) Be-intehaan.
Viraat: (hands roaming around her back) Be-intehaan
Maanvi: (pulling him close) Be-intehaan
Viraat: (caressing her waist) Yun pyaar kar
Maanvi: (smiles through her tears) Yun pyaar kar...
Viraat: (moving her saree's pallu away from her shoulder) Be-intehaan
Maanvi: (opens her eyes/ hand on his hand, stopping him) Ahh huhhhaa...
Viraat: (looking at her passionately) Dekha karun..
Maanvi: (nodding negatively) Dekha karun..
Viraat: (smiles) Saari umar..
Maanvi: (smiles) Saari umar
Viraat: (moves some strands of hair behind her ears) Tere nishaan...
Maanvi: (eyes closed) Aahhh...
Viraat: (smiles, looking at her angelic face) Be-intehaan...
Maanvi: (eyes still closed/smiles) Hmmm..mmm...
Viraat: (cups her cheek in his palm) Koi kasar na rahe, (looking at her lovingly) meri khabar na rahe...(hugs her, close to his heart) chhule mujhe iss kadar...(eyes closed) Be-intehaan.

Both fell asleep in each others arms. After so many day, Maanvi slept peacefully in her Husband's arms. And after so many months, Viraat slept peacefully, with his Wife, in his arms.

Ok dats it...4give me 4 ne mistakes I made..plz leave ur comments, gud or bad, wateva I need em..thnks...tc..Luv Aartii...

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