THE UNKNOWN FOLLOWER, chap 3, pg 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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The unknown follower

Hi everyone. I am Andy. I have been a silent reader in this forum for some time now. I love all your stories

I write a story, in DEK forum, I love arshi as a pair so I thought of changing my story to suit arshi. I will continue if only you all feel so. This is a short precap about the story

It is a story filled with suspense .it is about a story where relations have no value, only money and power was valued. A young and beautiful heir of guptha industries, cheerful and bubbly, innocent and pure kushi kumari gupta was marked to die.

Unknown that her days were numbered she continued to enjoy her life and that is when she met him. He was everything she dreamt of, her prince charming he brought a smile on her face and lit her life. He was her soulmate, he was arnav singh raizada

But death and his agent looked upon her, waiting for a perfect time to take her away. The assassin was behind her following her, watching her and was like her second shadow, like an unknown follower

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"here is the advance 50 lakhs in cash, the remaining when the deal is done, the day she is pronounced dead. This is the photo. Make it look like an accident. How long will it take for the deal to happen?

"3 months"

"how will I contact you in these months.i have not seen your face , you're always masked "

"it doesn't matter if you didn't see me and don't worry ill contact you "

"atleast tell me your name:

"what is in a name or a face as long as you get results ok you can call me the shark"

"ok ,it's a deal mr shark"

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She gained conscious and weakly opened her eyes, her head was spinning and her vision was blurred. She looked around and found the door opening, she remembered what happened earlier

A man entered ,she saw him , her eyes widened with shock and then all went black

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CHARACTER SKETCH

Khushi kumari guptha: the heir of gupta industries ,a cute and a bubbly girl. She is very beautiful girl, smart. She is a good business woman. She has just discovered the meaning of love after meeting arnav. But her days are numbered.

Sandeep gupta: father of khushi, died when she was very small

Shashi gupta : khushi's stepfather ,loves her like her own daughter

garimaa: mother of khushi and payel. Loves both of them dearly

payal: khushi's step sister ,but loves her dearly

arnav singh raizada: a famous business man, who has a heart of gold . he is khushi's prince charming.

Rohan: is khushi's best friend but has his own private intentions

Mr shark: the blood thirsty masked , unknown assassin who is ruthless only his victims have seen his face but none have ever lived to tell about him

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So guys how is it ?

The story is totally different from the show, only the characters are same

Do you want me to continue or not?

Pls do comment even if the response is negative pls

If I get good response I will update chap 1 which is ready

if you all want pms please buddy me at andy.1, dont sent me rquest to my main account
i want to separate my 2 pm list that is why such a decision
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chap 1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/78567568
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is nice.. Continue soon
I really wish Arnav is ASR.. I always love to see angry ASR but with some romance in him 😳
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Originally posted by: ..Sugar_ArHi..

This is nice.. Continue soon
I really wish Arnav is ASR.. I always love to see angry ASR but with some romance in him 😳

thanks so much
here arnav is romantic charater Embarrassed, but he will be asr as the story progresses
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its a nice plot...plz can u PM me when update...
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Originally posted by: arnaushi

its a nice plot...plz can u PM me when update...

thanks dear😃
will pm you, send me a buddy request please
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Originally posted by: hira2050

Hey nice start..
Continue soon:)

thanks will post the chap 1 either todat or tmrw
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Chapter 1

It was a fine morning. As the rays of sun fell on a sleeping girl –khushi , she drew the blanket over her head and continued sleeping. Her face was like an angel, so white and very desirable pink lips. Her mobile didn't allow her to sleep as it beeped. Groaning she woke up and checked the message. 😳The name of the sender brought a smile on her lips-arnav.she remembered her date yesterday .it was the best night of her life

Khushi kumari gupta, heir to gupta industries would be considered by all as a girl born with a diamond spoon, she was the only daughter of sandeep gupta and garimaa , the daughter of a rich business tycoon . When khushi was about 6 months sandeep was killed in a car accident. garimaa being young and lonely then married her childhood best friend and sandeep's business partner shashi .they have a daughter payel, who was 1 year younger than khushi. Her father had made a will leaving his entire fortune in the name of his daughter, khushi, he left his wife as one of the trustees . khushi was very happy her stepdad was more loving than her own dad. Payal was like her own sister, no her own sister, who she could share anything. Theirs was a loving family, a dream family headed shashi gupta. As khushi was now 22 she took over the business empire from her stepdad and was the CEO of guptha industries

As she read her message she blushed.😳 It read

Dear princess,

I loved the last night when we spend together. I never thought that I would enjoy the company of a girl. I never knew we had so many like interests I don't know but I never felt like this ,I just couldn't sleep yesterday I just could remember your eyes ,your nose, your angelic voice I want to see you today please meet me at 12'0 clock at your office please accept and do reply

Love,

Arnav

Khushi got up and went for a shower. As she stood under the shower she recalled yesterdays evening. Arnav had come to pick her from her office. There was an awkward silence as they drove away. Khushi kept stealing glances of arnav. Who wouldn't do so? After all he was the hottest guy she ever met.

they had met at a business conference 2 weeks back. Rohan her best friend introduced them. Arnav singh raizada was a self made man .he single handedly made his empire. Today it had many industries, refineries and shopping complexes. It was not his wealth but his humble nature that attracted her to him. At first the conversation was purely business, then both felt something going between then, something that bound them together. He had called her today asking her to spend some time together. She happily agreed.

The car stopped in front of a restaurant

A: this is my favorite restaurant. Actually the food and the location is so good I keep coming over here am not sure whether you will like it or not😕

K: my!!😛 Even it is my favorite location. It's a strange coincidence no?😃

A: ya so come inside i am starving

They enjoyed their dinner. Even their favorite food was same. They had similar likes and dislikes.

The whole evening Arnav's eyes never left her face drinking her features, hearing her angelic sound, totally engrossed in her. She did feel embarrassed but still enjoyed his company

As he left her home he just patted her cheeks and told her goodnight

Usually she always saw lust in all eyes of men who looked her. Her she saw genuine love and a promise of lifelong happiness. She saw sweet arshi dreams and drifted to sleep

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Khushi joined her family for breakfast. her dad ,mom her best friend rohan and her sweet sister payal waited for her to join them

M: good morning every one.

They chatted happily about payal's new bf and their new business venture rohan was discussing about a property deal

Then khushi checked her watch and

K: oh my! Its getting late . I need to go there is a meeting with Sharma group of companies at 9 o' clock. Bye guys

Shashi\garima: bye beta, hope that you get the deal

payal: di iam also coming with you

k: ok come fast

p: di chill you're the MD and not any ordinary employee

Rohan: that is a point payal. I agree with you

k: but jai punctuality is needed at work no matter whether you're the employer or the employee

p: oh di ok lets go . we'll continue todays teaching class in the evening😆

Every one laughs hearing that comment

But someone was thinking "khushi laugh now you may not get much chances to laugh later.

Then all this would be mine, all wealth and all power will be mine. Your days are numbered. You are too innocent to find the wolf hiding under the sheep 's skin."

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The place was dark and stinking. Never in that person's life did he visit a place like this. But it was his need and he needed to get the deal done

The person in front of him was masked. The masked man spoke" it can be done"

The eerie voice sent a shiver in the spine of the person

Here he was talking face to face to a cold blooded assassin whose record was perfect. He never missed a single killing and till now nobody could frame him or even reveal his identity .it was so clean. The person drew courage and spoke

"here is the advance 50 lakhs in cash, the remaining when the deal is done, the day she is pronounced dead. this is the photo. Make it look like an accident. How long will it take for the deal to happen?

"3 months"

"how will I contact you in these months have not seen your face , you're always masked "

"it doesn't matter if you didn't see me and don't worry ill contact you "

"at least tell me your name . It's a huge sum I am giving you"

"What is in a name or a face as long as you get results ok you can call me the shark"

"ok ,it's a deal Mr. shark"

"one more thing I hate non believers. If you don't want to hire me you can please leave

"no mr shark I do believe you "

As the person left Mr Shark pinned the photo on the wall. The face was a known one. He had seen her name in the business section of the newspaper. She was cute and hot, too mouth watering, but now she was his prey and he was her predator

To create an accident was a simple task. But then he wanted to enjoy this killing. The sweet smile on the girl face was going to be wiped soon. He laughed like a maniac thinking this.

Operation khushi had began

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So this brings us to the end of chap 1

So, how was it?😕

Do you think I should continue it?

Please do tell me

Will wait for your response

andy.a thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No comments or likes.
Is it too boring?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i really liked it...its not at all boring...
i loved the arhi scene...plz add some more arhi scenes...
is this MR.SHARK by any chance SHYAM...
cont soon...and take it slow...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love it
beautifully written
So someone is in mission to kill her!!
But who?
Is it Rohan or Shashi?

Arnav is being romantic he already felt for her
n khushi is also hving feeling for her
looking forward for the next chapter..

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