----PuNir OS ----WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER

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Message to all ArVi fans- Please this is just a story so please if you dont wish to read this then you are free and i wont force anyone...See guys i am an ArVi fan too but i just wanted to write this one. I know after this many ArVi who reads my FFs and SSs will be disheartened but please a request dont take it personally and allow me to explore my views and idea please and dont get angry on me. Please i beg you all. This one just for PuNir die hard fans and i will not stop ArVi fans to read it. But read it at your own risk...


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-----PuNir OS // Will Love You Forever -----

The court drama was over and Onir was proved innocent. Everybody were happy and came back home. All were sitting in the hall of Karanjkar house and discussing about how and whatever happened and later thinking that lets forget everything and move forward.

Purvi was in her room changing her clothes and thinking about whatever happened in the last few weeks after their accident and how Onir struggled with himself and supported her without even questioning her once. Thoughts of Onir was running in her mind and heart. She was thinking, "Why is Onir doing this all for me. First he accepted me knowing that I was pregnant. For me he came to Mumbai leaving his house and everything in Kolkata. For me he slapped Arjun. For me he even got ready to treat Ovi and for me he even laid his Doctor's degree at stake and got convinced for exchanging the babies. Why he is doing all this. I know he is my husband but not all husbands support their wife in whichever things they say. Then why is he doing all this. Is he just fulfilling his duty for being my husband? But when I am not fulfilling my duty of being a wife then why is he still in this relationship and accepting all my tantrums. For me he even went to jail. Why?"

She was broken out of her thoughts when Onir entered their room.

Onir – Mishty what happened? Are you ok?

Purvi (setting the bed for sleep) – Yes…I am fine Onir….

Onir then closed the room's door and took out his carpet and pillow from beneath the bed and placed it on the floor for his sleep.

Purvi saw this and went near him and stood in front of him.

Onir (giving a confused look) – What happened Misthy? Are you ok?

Purvi – I need to talk to you.

Onir – Ya…Say na…

Purvi – Infact I need to ask you something…

Onir – Mishty is there any problem. What do you want to ask?

Purvi – Why are you doing this Onir?

Onir (giving a frowned expression) – What Mishty? I am just setting my bed.

Purvi – I am not asking about the bed Onir. I want to know why are you doing all this. First you married me knowing about my pregnancy and stating that you need a wife who can make you house feel like a home. I agreed to that. Then for me you left everything and came to Kolkata also. Then for me you treated Ovi and accepted my family as yours. For me you forgot everything and supported me in giving Pari to Arjun and Ovi and for me you also went in jail. Why Onir? Why are you doing all this? Why are you supporting me and handling all my tantrums and accepting all my deals? Answer me Onir ….What do you want….Why are you doing all this for me…We are just in a compromised relationship and we support each other just as friends but whatever you are doing is more than being a friend or husband. What is going on in your mind. What you want Onir. And a relationship is successful when is fulfilled from both sides but in our case you are only one who trying to amend this relationship. Then why are you still with me with such a person who cannot fulfill her duties being of a friend and also being a wife. Why Onir? I want my answers. Today.

Saying all this she just broke down and sat on the corner of the bed and started crying.

Onir after hearing all this had tears in his eyes too.

For the next few minutes there was a pin drop silence in the room. Purvi then handled herself and wiped her tears. She then got up disheartened and moved towards her bed to sleep.

Onir – I LOVE YOU MISHTY!!!!

Saying these words Onir felt relieved as if the biggest that he was carrying in his heart is out and now he felt a relief running down his mind and heart. For few seconds he didn't even glanced at Purvi to know her reaction. He was just enjoying this whole moment and was happy that finally he was able to confess his love to his Mishty. For an instance he didn't wanted to know how Purvi felt but then he gathered courage and looked at Purvi who was just staring at her without even blinking her eyes. She was still looking at him continuously still trying to accept what Onir just said.

Onir (continued) – Mishty the first time I saw with the kids and the first I heard your voice at that time only I fell in love with you. I didn't knew about you pregnancy and what all you went through. I just loved you as the way you are. I didn't did any compromises. I just loved you and just wanted you without any condition. I also knew that you will never accept me as your lover but I was happy in that I was able to make place in your heart as a husband. I always knew that you will not love me and I still don't expect that you love me. But I loved you and I still love and will love you forever even though you love me back or not I don't care till you are with me. You are my strength. You are my life and with you I can go to any extent of doing anything. And all those things that I did was for my love and not for a friend or wife. I did for my love Mishty.

While Onir was saying all this Purvi all the while had tears rolling down from her eyes and her mind quarrelling with her heart to accept all. She didn't knew that Onir felt all this for her. But today after whatever Onir said she was feeling at the top of the world. She wanted this moment to be stopped. She wanted to again fall in love. But her mind didn't allowed her to do that. Because still somewhere in her mind and heart she had some feeling left for Arjun. After much struggle she just stopped her mind to think and emptied all her feelings for Arjun and finally allowing her heart to accept Onir. After Onir confessed his feelings for her she too felt that somewhere in her heart has too fallen for him and now it was the time that she accepts it and forget everything whatever happened everything in the past and accepts Onir and moves forward with him. She always wanted such a husband who can not only accept her the way she is but also at one point of time he tries to control her and doesn't always accepts all her tantrums. Onir was the same person. At once Arjun accepted her tantrum of marrying Ovi but Onir didn't ever crossed his limit and always tried to explain her what is right and wrong.

After so quarrelling with her heart and mind she just gave in and rushed to Onir and hugged him tightly and said – I LOVE YOU TOO Onir….and from now I will love you forever….

Onir hearing these words got a big smile on his face but at the same time tears too rolled down from his eyes. He also hugged Purvi. And both were standing in the same position for few minutes just not thinking about anything and were just enjoying their moment after confessing their love….

Onir and Purvi then came out of their hug and wiped each other's tears and touched their forehead together and gave a brought a big smile on their face. Both can feel each other's happiness and hear each other's heart beats too. Slowly Onir moved his hand and cupped Purvi's face and kissed her on her forehead. Later he moved forward to kiss her right cheek and then her left cheek. Slowly he leaned forward too kiss her on her lips. Their heart beats were too flowing in the same rhythm. Slowly both gave into each other and their lips finally touched each other and they just entered into the heaven of kissing each other. Her lips parted slightly and he took her upper lips into his tasting it slowly and her hands entangled themselves in his hair caressing his hair gently. She felt his tongue enter her mouth.

"Onir" she moaned into his lips, her hands pulled him closer and her body arched towards him. The soft kiss slowly turned passionate, as he began to feel his control slipping. He had wanted her for so long, wanted to feel her against him, and wanted to hear her say his name in pleasure. After break this passionate kiss his hands wandered over her body, slowly caressed her bare waist and squeezed it to pull her closer to him. He holds her shoulder and moves slowly behind her. Onir moves all her hair on one side exposing her beautiful back and kisses her back. He slowly unpinned her saree paloo and let it fall to the floor while his lips played with her ear. Within a second Onir carried her in his strong arms and step toward the bedroom and placed her on the bed.

Purvi – Promise me Onir that you will never ever leave me and go just like he did. You will never ever fulfill my those desires which separates you from me.

Onir – I promise Mishty. I will never ever leave you and go. I promise.

These were his last words before he gave in to her, taking her lips into his and gently pushing her body down on the bed. Purvi can feel her blouse being opened from behind and his hand slightly touching her soft skin giving her an intimate sensation running down her spine. Her heartbeat quicken. She took a deep breath and closed her eyes. As they continued to kiss Onir brought his one hand underneath her saree and felt her soft stomach. He brought his hot hand across her cool belly. The soft touch of his love made her moaning in pleasure. Her hands moved to opening the buttons on his shirt while he did the same with her. He covered her body with his and kissed her, both of them unleashing the suppressed desires, getting rid of all the pain in this one instant. He starts kissing on her neck while his one hand starts playing with her belly. His touch made her moaning his name again and again.

"Onir" she gasped when his lips bit her neck gently. She holds him tight. He finally felt alive after so long, his skin coming to life wherever it touched hers. Her fingers wound themselves in his hair and his hands desperately felt all over her body massaging her soft skin with his fingers. He brings his hands down reaches her hands and slowly slides his fingers into her fingers and holds her tight. Then he again goes closer to her neck and starts kissing starting from her neck and slowly moves down all towards her belly and brushes his moist lips on her giving her love bite all over on her body. Her skin burnt with pleasure when his lips moved over her. His lips caressed hers stifling her cries of pleasure within him.

Onir going back to her lips not being able to bear the distance any longer. He spoke amidst the kisses he planted on her face, "I always thought that I would never ever get your love that I always longed for….."

she didn't let him finish his sentence and pulled his lips to hers again.

At the end of this passionate kiss Purvi holds his face in her hands and says "I love Onir and will love you forever". Onir closes his eyes as tears stream down and Purvi places a gentle kiss on his forehead.

When he entered her, there was only pleasure. Fireworks exploded in both their bodies. The unleashed desperate desire didn't give leave any room for any other feeling but love and pleasure. "Onir " she moaned.

Onir bit into the soft flesh of her shoulder, moving his hands over her body taking her into their world of pleasure. He kept teasing her by nipping and biting at her face and earlobes.

Purvi smiled and then moaned his name when she felt him. She screamed out his name once more and left sharp red nail marks on his back as she tried to hold onto him.

They took in deep breath as Onir laid his head on Purvi's Shoulder. He removed herself out of her and laid down beside her. They lay on the bed hugging each other. He covered them with a blanket. She listened to his heart beat, resting her head on his chest, her hand entwined with his. Their heart beats become one and spoke of their unconditional love, the burning souls spoke of their unbearable pain. They fell asleep holding each other tightly.

FROM THAT DAY THEIR LOVE FOR EACH OTHER WAS AND REMAINED FOREVER...




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ShaktifanSwati thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its ossom... ❤️❤️❤️PUNIR❤️❤️❤️
thanx 4 this special OS on PUNIR...i knlw in future track we see dis love passanate between onir purvi...after reading dis OS i've so immpatient dis track...i want come soon in pr dis track love conffesion btw onir puvi& & dey start der life fresh...without any hesitation, without any guilt...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Once again biggg thanx pkarvi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mind blowing post.. l only want purvi and onir together.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh beautiful OS.
You are so talented writer.
please do more like this.
i love it very much. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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you are great! as you wrote , I could imagine the scenes in my head. Please become a CV I am sure you will do a better job than them. I loved the OS ;D
It's great ..
i wish it happens!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice... loved it. want purvi to realise her love for onir...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for this wonderful post pkarvi!

This is how Onir and Purvi's lovestory should end.
Arjun and Ovi's marriage should also have a happy ending too.

"What GOD has joined together, let no man separate them" And I strongly believe in this.
Marriage is not like a boyfriend-girlfriend relationship that anytime we can break up with our partner.
Edited by miadelrosario - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: miadelrosario

Thanks for this wonderful post pkarvi!

This is how Onir and Purvi lovestory should end.
Arjun and Ovi marriage should also have a happy ending.

"What GOD has joined together, let no man separate them" And I strongly believe in this.
Marriage is not like a boyfriend-girlfriend relationship that anytime we can break up with our partner.




exactly! even if Ovi forced Arjun into marrying her ..it's a scared bond ( pavitra rishta) and breaking it will be apavtira
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ilovedhanjanird



exactly! even if Ovi forced Arjun into marrying her ..it's a scared bond ( pavitra rishta) and breaking it will be apavtira



True ilovedjanhanird!

Ovi reformed and now a good wife to Arjun.
Onir gives full support and unconditional love to Purvi.
They're all doing a great job as husbands and wife (except Purvi)
I want to see them move on with their lives and make their marriage work.

Edited by miadelrosario - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful OS Pari. Keep going, may your writing go from strength to strength. ARVI Or PuNir as long as Purvi is happy, I'm happy.

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