Fanfic: Ek Hi Bhool updated pg17

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Fanfic: Ek Hi Bhool

Chapter 1: Jurm

The prisoner stood straight, facing the world and his accusers squarely. His poise remained unaffected amidst the constant murmurs and photoflashes.
At the first glance, he looked arrogant and snobbish and that mostly, was the first impression he chose to give people. Only a few knew that behind that facade of
extreme aloofness he cultivated, he was an immensely warm and loyal person. And self assured. Which at times came across as haughtiness.

As he looked around, he saw his family clustered together sitting in the front. All of them had varying measures of anxiety and anguish on their faces.
He gave a small smile, knowing that his family was here as one to support him, irrespective of what they believed behind closed doors. His gaze travelled a little further,
oft scorning the eager faces of the scribes who'd want to convert this trial into headlines. He saw his friends, his near and dear ones and met all their eyes unflichingly.
And then his eyes travelled to a remote corner of the courtroom and he averted them.

The owner of the pair of eyes which had caused the above mentioned action continued to stare at his profile with open animosity and only looked away when the bailiff
announced that the court proceedings were about to start.

"Mr. Shivdutt Kapoor, you stand here accused for the death of Mr. Shashank Agarwal. Do you want to say anything in your defence?"



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I know I started out being theatrical but please do let me know if I should continue...I've taken some liberties with the character names so please bear with me....

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Concluding Part 16

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mirchy thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Nice jaan but 1st epi was soooooooooooo sad!!!! 😭
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Wow such a great first epi! 👏 👏 👏 Please continue soon!
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cool
but y is shiv in jail 😭
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great concept 👏 plz continue soon
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a fanfic is a story a dat a person wirtes based on any character e.g. shiv and gauri. 😊

anyway gr8 ff, continue continue 😃😃😃

luv metoubearscrazy😊

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Chapter 2: Saat Saal Pehle

It is said that when a person is about to die, his/her whole life flashes in front, just as if life mocks you, See... I had all that to offer you and more,
You did not take it. Shiv felt it more acutely than the rest. He closed his eyes, became oblivious to the courtroom proceedings and travelled back in time...

It felt good to be home and near people who loved and cared for you. That's what Shiv thought luxuriating in the business class seat of the jet.
That did not take away the fact that he had enjoyed his time in the States.He'd made full use of it. Along with getting a Master's degree in Business administration and work experience with a top notch management firm, he'd partied,
flirted and all in all, lived his life on the wild side.

Sitting in the aircraft, Shiv thought about his mom, his grandmother, his sister, his aunts, his grandfather, his cousins, his uncles, Shashank and finally
Gauri. He, Shashank and Gauri had grown up together. All his summer vacations before his 17th birthday were spent at their family house in Calcutta.
He remembered playing hide-n-seek amongst the woods near their house, playing doctor - doctor with Gauri's father's accessories.....

He remembered Shashank, the adopted son of their father's friend, a year older than him, whom he loved as a dear brother. And he remembered the dimpled,demure
face of the love of his life - Gauri.

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Shall I go on?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow nice!Polzzzzzzzz cont!really ur ff is mind-blowin now!!! 👏
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great fan-fic 👏 👏
continue soon
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It was awesome!!!!!!
Please go on soon!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

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