Taarey FF: Learning to Breathe ~Complete~ - Page 75

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww... Sweety ur updating with a fractured wrist!! That is not very SAFE!! 😡 plz don't hurt ur self... U're more important than the updates!!! ❤️

But since u've gone into the trouble to write it... It was amazing!!! I luved it alot... And the dance sequence was so well put together, as u said flawless!! Just purely amazing!!!

A bit upset this FF is ending, cause this is one of my fav's but... All good thing's cum to an end (don't know why they do)... but i'll always remember this FF... Promise!!

Luv u loads!! ❤️ and it's gud ur fiance is watching u like a hawk! Atleast their's someone to tell u off.. When ur typing with a fractured wrist!! 😡
Edited by Shanae_Diamonds - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sanju, u wrote with that fractured wrist, girl , dnt know what to say now just angry at u for hurting ur fractured wrist bt at the same time a lot of hugs to u , coz u did it just for us, love u yar muahh ... Hope u get well at the earliest..
Sanju lovd the update start tr seq "v r already winners as v r 2gthr" that brought a smile on my face.. The dance part was superb,lovd it ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome udpate dear.
taarey and gang are just mindblowing.
thanks for the pm . take care of your health ... dear...
agar update dare se milega to koi problem nahi hai... but health comes first...

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Posted: 12 years ago
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
awesome update di hats off

wow in the way u combine the steps with the song i think u have knowledge about dance and too about singing plz answer m ques
coming to the post it was awesome

di one req
plz start another ff like tis on tarey i love ur ffs plz plz start
ok bye

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow Sanju. Awesome. And don't stress haan. I hope u r okay. We can wait. The update was amazing and keep PMing me haan. Just don't stop Pming me. And loved the dance off. And the quote and the songs. Amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear!!!
Thanx for the PM...😊
Plz do take care of urself first...
We'll wait until u recover... So plz don't stress urself and prioritize ur health...😳
As usual update was awesome...👏

GOD bless U...
Take care...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear... loved it to the core.. that performance omg u represented it very well.. loved it so much.. :) n take care dear.. get well soon.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally u updates sanju it wz osmm lovd d update itz jus amazing👏👍🏼 n hop u get well soon😊
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanayaluvzya

SANJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I WAS SPEECHLESS YAAR <3
IT WAS JUST FAB..
THE SONGS WERE PERFECT!!
YOU ARE AN AWMAZANGGG WRITTER!
I CANT EVEN...EXPRESS MY WORDSS <3
AND FIANCE HUH?
SO MERI EK JIJU BHI HAIN HUH?
I WANNA KNOW ABOUT MY JIJU (POUTING) 😳
LOL.
BACK TO THE UPDATE!!
IT WAS FAAABB! AGAIN <3
AND YEAH, PLEASE UPFDATE SOON AS POSSIBLE...BUT ONLY WHEN YOU
FEEL BETTER... <3
I SERIOUSLY LOVED THE UPDATE CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATEE <3
AND DON'T FORGET TO READ MY FF, ITS UPDATED <3 LOL.
HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER SOON <3



😳😳 yeah have a fiance
and dnt wry once my wrist is better and i can be more active i'll tell u everything
i've read all the updats more than once 😳😳 its just b/c of my wrist i'm not being able to comment on ur ff 😭 really sorry! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Quote: If you want to live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day so I never have to live without you.


Hey guys this is the official last chapter of LTB. There will be one more update which is the epilogue. I really hope you like this last chapter as much as I loved writing it. Thank you guys so much for sticking to this FF and making it what it is and for always supporting it. This one is dedicated to everyone who has commented and stuck by LTB. This song is from Glee and although I don't watch it my little sister does and she showed me this cover and I fell in love with it.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m0xg8_VvFFI

Chapter 14: Let Me Love You

Two Years Later:

The gang was at Taani's house distracting Taani from Rey as Rey was planning a surprise for her. It was the Rey's idea to have the entire gang there on his special day. He knew that Taani was a simple girl with filmy dreams and he knew that on this day she would want her closest family, her friends there with them.

"Sab hoga hai." Rey said to himself as he glanced over the gazebo in Taani's the garden. Because of Taani's demand for the music department two years ago, the gang was fortunate include to call many musicians into their close group of friends and Vicky had gotten talented instrument players to join them, and they were on their respective instruments. Sid had promised to play the piano and Rey saw his chair, where he was going to sing his heart out to Taani. They had gone through so much together, and this was the only way he knew to express his feelings.

Rey quickly called Swayam to ask if everything was okay and Swayam had said that they were a few minutes away from Taani's favorite garden. Rey smiled closing his eyes anticipating Taani's arrival.

"No Taani we're not here yet and no you cannot take off your blindfold." Aashi said for the tenth time as the gang got annoyed at Taani's constant questioning.

"Well geez maybe you wouldn't be annoyed if you just tell me where we are going and why I had to spend two hours with all of you girls fighting over my hair, makeup, and outfit." Taani said sarcastically making the guys laugh.

"Alright we are here." Swayam said as the gang got out of the car.

Rey came up to them and said, "Thanks guys for distracting her I owe you one." And Taani tried to turn to the direction she heard his voice, but it sounded like it was far away.

She felt Aashi move next to her and hold her arm gently, "Come on Taani, it's time for you to see what we were hiding." Walking a few steps Taani felt Aashi halt and untie the blindfold. Blinking slightly she gasped at what she saw. They were in her favorite garden, the one filled with different kinds of flowers. The gazebo was decorated in lilacs, Taani's favorite flower. She followed her gaze to see her friend Akansha sitting with a violin while Payal and Kajal were on the cello. She saw Sid sitting at the piano and she felt her heart skip a beat as she saw Rey standing by a chair on the gazebo that was across other chairs that were placed neatly. She saw that Rey was wearing white, just like her dress and instantly knew that her friends had planned that on purpose.

"Rey?" She asked not trusting herself with any other words. The gang smiled as they all sat as Rey pulled Taani lightly by her arm.

"I love you." Rey said first. "We both have been through so much together in the past few years and I honestly couldn't have gone through everything and become that man I am proud to call myself today without you. I know I'm not good at expressing my feelings so I want to do this for you." He said grabbing Taani's hand sitting her in between Swayam and Aashi. Swayam and Sharon were holding hands as Taani looked at them and then looked at Aashi trying to figure out what was going on.

Rey gave Taani one last look before he nodded to Sid who started playing the piano. He took a deep breath in and started singing.

Rey started singing remembering when he first met Taani, the hatred they both felt towards each other along with their undeniable attract towards each other. He remembered seeing Taani cry from heart break and seeing her upset because of her disgrace of a father and feeling like he had to do something in order to get his angel of love to smile.

Much as you blame yourself, you can't be blamed for the way that you feel
Had no example of a love, that was even remotely real
How can you understand something that you never had
If you let me, I can help you out with all of that

Rey looked right into Taani's eyes and saw the glint of awe in them. He saw poignant love for him in her eyes and he saw her eyes glistening as she sang on. He sang to express how much he loved her and how he wanted to be the one to keep her happy even when she was sad.

Let me love you
And I will love you
Until you learn to love yourself
Let me love you
And all your trouble
Don't be afraid, oh I can help
Let me love you
And I will love you
Until you learn to love yourself
Let me love you
A heart of numbness, gets brought to life
I'll take you there

Rey remembered Taani learning about her father, he remembered her standing in view with her father's gun. He remembered the pain she felt when she realized that she was right about her father, that he was a cruel man. He remembered the look on her face and remembered the promise in his heart to make all of her pain go away.

I can see the pain behind your eyes
It's been there for quite a while
I just wanna be the one to remind you what it is to smile
I would like to show you what true love can really do

Along with Sid, Akansha, Payal, and Kajal started playing adding the beauty to Rey's singing. Rey sang louder, as if he was pouring out the love he felt for her. He wanted her to feel that he loved her not only for her, but he loved her for loving him and shaping him into who he has become.

Let me love you
And I will love you
Until you learn to love yourself
Let me love you
And all your trouble
Don't be afraid, oh I can help
Let me love you
And I will love you
Until you learn to love yourself
Let me love you
A heart of numbness, is brought to life
I'll take you there

Rey was finishing his song and was walking towards Taani who had tears in her eyes. Kneeling he finished singing the last part.

Let me love you
And I will love you
Until you learn to love yourself
Let me love you
And all your trouble
Don't be afraid, oh I can help


Taani's eyes were filled with tears as Rey kneeled in front of her and pulled out a box. A stray tear fell as Rey started speaking. "I promise to love you everyday of forever. Just you and me together, that's what I'm proposing. I'm asking you to look past all of my flaws and all of my mistakes and accept me for me. I'm asking you to love me despite my drawbacks. I'm asking you to be mine forever, I'm asking you to make me complete. Taani will you marry me?"

Taani looked into Rey's eyes and couldn't believe how lucky she was. Not being able to say anything she attacked him into a hug as he stood up hugging her back tightly. "You and me Rey till the end." Taani whispered as Rey pulled back smiling as if he was the luckiest man on earth. Taking out the beautiful diamond ring, he slipped it onto her finger and kissed her hand.

"She said yes!" he yelled happily as the gang cheered and Rey pulled Taani into a beautiful, passionate, soulful, love filled kiss that secured the promise of their future and their love that would never, ever die.

Taani smiled into the kiss never wanting to let go, her life was finally perfect. She had a true family and a brother who would die to protect her, her friends that had been through so much together that they were her family now, and a fianc she knew that would always keep her happy. Everything was perfect.


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Hey guys just wanna say thank you for all the wishes for my wrist, and yes guys i will take care of it, as of right now I'm not typing the update, my roommate is typing what I dictate to her so I'm not straining my wrist at all esp since my fiance is literally sitting next to me making sure i don't 😆 There will be one last update that I will probably upload by tomorrow or maybe even later tonight. Thank you guys for all the comments and wishes and to all my fellow FF writers I promise to comment on all updates once my wrist is better.

Edited by desigirl_taarey - 12 years ago

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