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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

People would often joke that the girl whom he would marry would die of inferiority complex as he had all the qualities of a good bahu, as they saw in television serials.
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ohk i think it was typical girl wala story on boy.. but i loved it...

i loved that typical palat also.. it has become so natural in our love stories..

nice OS..

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crayon + sheesh = crayeesh
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Crayeesh?!! 🤣
That sounds sexier and cooler than maaneet now! šŸ˜Ž
Glad you liked it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: glassdoor



ā¤ļø Mere laal mere hare mere peele ... muah... I love you too...šŸ¤—
We will both massage each others charans... 🐷

I will edit this later...

I aldready doo-es that 🐷
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
loved it
like is not working...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sheesh does have some effect on u girl
Will wait for update if there is any
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one ... Its good to see Maan in a different shade . Dont know why but i loved the last line 🤣

I remember you writing an SS called Spread the wings ( esp , maan's Bike - Yezdi ) ... What happened to that ?? šŸ˜•
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Updated page 1 šŸ˜‰ ā¤ļø
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: glassdoor



ā¤ļø Mere laal mere hare mere peele ... muah... I love you too...šŸ¤—
We will both massage each others charans... 🐷

I will edit this later...

EDIT ~~~~ 😈

You know I was wondering what I did to inspire you to come with this awesome piece ā­ļø.
Then I came to a conclusion, absolutely nothing at all. I don't remember saying anything that makes me deserve the high praise. 😳 .

Phir bhi compliments Qubool Hai, Qubool Hai, Qubool Hai.

What can I say about this? I always say that comedy is one genre which is enjoyed most but appreciated the least. It is so true. People come, read jokes, smile, laugh and then they say 'whats there in the piece for it to be heralded so much?' They just narrate the joke/story to someone else. That is how it is enjoyed. People who laugh together over the same piece become friends.

You might probably be thinking why I am saying such intense things about a piece which sets out to be light hearted. It is because I believe that the most intense writing comes out in the form of comedy.

It is a beautiful piece Nammu. Iske naam pe ek poem ho jaaye...

Door se dekha tho

**wah...wah...wah...****

Door se dekha tho aisa laga ke joker ka pattha hai
Door se dekha tho aisa laga ke joker ka pattha hai..

paas me laane se pata chala ke wo tho ek aaina hai!!
comedy isiika naam hai, jeena isiika naam hai.

****Wah ...wah...wah...bows down*****

Door se dekha to laga ki aaina hai...
Door se dekha to laga ki aaina hai...
Jisme humne khoosbsurat aks dikha...

Paas aane pe pata chala...ki yeh to sheesh hai'
Jisne humein "Aap itne acche kyun hai jitna pyaar diya" 😳 ā¤ļø

P.S. I was worshipping your charan one morning and got heavily inspired by the pattern and that's how I ended up penning down this mind-numbing masterpiece! ā­ļø

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