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Viren, A hot and smashing sexy young man that is 24. He lives in san fran and is a great doctor. He was sitting at the dining room with his mom and brother, when suddenly her mom said that he looked a little tired and down. Viren replied" yeah mom i havent really had a vacation for a while now. Hoping to go somewhere and just relaxing." His mom looking at him saying of course son, go have some fun in life this is the time, then when you get old you will be built up with so many responsibilities that you wont have spare time.
Viren went to his room and booked his tickets to go to miami, he had a girlfriend her name was Naomi, who he was going to marry soon, she was very modern and wore mini skirts and shorts so people would think she is hot (another words a s**t,as i would put it). Her and viren were together for almost six months now, the longest relationship he has ever been in. They met eachother at a party, which viren and virat go to once in a while. Girls would drool over viren, as he is very dashing.
He informed Naomi and she said that she would want to come with, he did want her too as he wanted to spend time alone, but then again she was his girlfriends, so he told her she can go around. She was very clingy towards him and sometimes it would irritate him.
The next morning they reach miami, viren was very excited to go relax at the beaches and go partying al night.
The first night there viren felt a bit tired so he didnt join Naomi when she went to a party. Instead he decided to take a walk along the shoreline. As he was walking he bumped into a very beautiful young girl. They said sorry to eachother and moved on.
The next morning viren was walking out of his room when he realized thst the girl from last night was coming out of hers as well across the hall. He looked at her and said"hey you are the girl that i met yesterday." She gave him a nice smile and said yeah, hi im jeevika!
He couldnt stop looking at her until she snapped him out of it. He said oh hi nice to meet you im viren. Oh nice she said and saw the Naomi was walking out of the room. Naomi looked and said lets go baby im ready.
Jeevika looked at her and then looked at him gave a little smirk and walked away. Viren was confused with this look she gave him but, continued on.
Jeevika on the other hand was thinking" wpw he is one of those boys who go after the s**ts, ehh what do i care."
The whole day passed by and viren was thinking about jeevika and why had she given him that look after seeing naomi by him.
Later that night he walked out of his room and saw that jeevika was sitting in the lobby reading a magazine. He went up to her and asked her if she cares to go onna walk woth him. She didnt want to but she had nothing better to do. She got up and they began their walk.

As the wind was caressing her face and blowing her hair onto the sides and some of it touching his face, he couldnt stop looking at her, after awhile she looked at him and he said to himself, viren focus dude you like Naomi. In fact you barely know jeevike.
They talked to eachother during the walk and got to know eachother better, jeevika was walking as she realized Naomj was coming towards them so jeevika tried to excuse her self, but viren wouldnt let and said stay a little bit longer, he liked talking to her. She was shocked hearing this because they dont know eachother more than two days. Then naomi came and disturbed their convo giving a small hug to viren telling him that he looked veryy hott. Jeevika was stanidng there as a third wheel feeling very awkward. Jeevika saw how viren was smiling and thought that she was right, he is a big. And she excused her self as viren stopped her. He introduced her to Naomi.
"Jeevika, this is Naomi, my girlfriend"
" oh its nice to meet you naomi," jeevika said and walked off.

The whole night she was thinking about the walk and ow much she had talking to him and listening to his compliments and jokes. Although they were lame. Slowly she fell asleep.


The next few days viren and jeevika kept on meeting eachother places coincidentally. This time viren saw jeevika at a party very formal, that was held for the hotel residents. She walked in and all his attention was on her, she looked amazing her long brown hair and her juicy lips with pretty hazel eyes. He was totally mesmerized. As naomi went pArtying with her friend viren was the only one there, he looked over at jeevika and saw her alone. So he went up to her to ask her for a dance, she didnt refuse.

He put his hand on her waist and pulled her closee as she put her hand on his shoulders. They began dancing gazing into eachothers eyes, as the time flied by the they looked at eachother and came even closer then they were and eventually closer. Jeevika was feeling so uncomfortable being this clpse to him so she tried to move back, but he wouldnt let her go and pulled her even closer. Her breath was shaking as he felt her heart beat faster and faster. They came so close that their noses touched, but soon viren came into his senses and moved back in a flinch. Jeevika asked him what happen and he said nothing and walked out. As he was walking he said to himself, " focus viren focus you like naomi she is your girlfriend.

The next few days viren couldnt stop thinking about jeevika and her beauty and how close they were that one moment. nor cold jeevika stop pondering about why viren reacted the way he did. So she decided to go to his room to apologize to him and ask him if he is okay.

She walked into his room and realized that naomi wasnt there and viren was in the shower. He came out without a shirt and with shorts. He noticed jeevika was there so he quickly was about to pull on the shirt until jeevika unknowningly said to leave it he looks veryyy sexy. He smiled and went up to her, she snapped out of it.

"Yes jeevika did you need something?" He asked.
Jeevika was about to talk when viren suddenly came close to her, he couldnt help it her beauty and her character, he totally loves it.

Jeevika was trying to say something when viren sushed her up and moved even closer to her until hisforehead was touchinghers. She kept trying to tell him, but he just got closer and closer. Eventually thrir lips touched, and viren slowly started kissing her. He put his hand around her waist and another hand holding her face. She couldnt take it anymore so she responded with and equal desire.
They came out of the kiss to breath and viren realized what has he done.

THIS WAS PART ONE SECOND ONE WILL BE UP TMO NIGHT MAYBE, SORRY IT ISNT THE BEST, I WAS FALLING ASLEEP.


-chandni



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