OS: Ignorance*COMPLETE*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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As Riya finished her work,she took an auto and told the autowala to take her to Juhu Beach.

After 15minutes,she reached Juhu Beach.She paid the autowala and went towards the beach.

She sat for a while on the dry sand,clutching her knees.Silent tears were falling from her eyes.She wanted someone to hear her pleas out,but,alas,there was no one.
She wiped away her tears and folded up her denims till her knees.She kept her sandals in her bag and started walking towards the water.

As she was walking in the ankle deep water,the cold breeze sent shrills through her spine.She was feeling cold.She took out her little shawl and wrapped herself up to get warmth.

How she wished to be in the warm and loving embrace of her love,ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte.

How she wished to be in his life,protecting him from all the bad things of life.

But,alas,she was ignored.
Yes,her love was Ignored.
For the first time in her life,she loved someone,that too,the supercop,truly,from her heart.
But,the supercop managed to ignore and stop Riya from coming near him and his heart.

As she wrapped herself in that shawl,she felt the warmth that was needed at that time.

After walking in the water,she wore her sandals,and went to sit in the dry sand.
She sat there for a while,and,unfolded her denims.

She didnt know what to do.

After this ignorance,will she be able to move on in her life?

After this ignorance,will she be able to erase the memories,be it,bitter or sweet,spent with him?

After this ignorance,will she be able to love someone else?

May be Yes,or,May Be No.

She opened her bag and took out a small photo frame,which had the photo of the whole ETF team.

She smiled faintly at it.

Tear drops fell from her doe-shaped eyes.

Finally,she spoke up to herself,to her surroundings.

"Main jiske liye bhi kuch accha karne ki sochti hu,toh,woh sab mujhe ignore karte hai.Pehle,mere kam karne ke tareeke se problem,phir,mujhse problem? Agar aisa hi thha,toh,mujhe iss duniya mein kyun bheja,Bhagwaan ji?
Socha na thha,ki,ek din aisa bhi ayega,ki,jisse main pyaar karne lagi hu,woh hi mujhe ignore karenge?
Khair... Jo bhi ho.Mere naseeb mein sirf aur sirf dukh hi likha thha...
Shayad,yeh meri yahan pe aakhri raat ho.
Main kab yahaan pe aao agli baar,pata nahi,kyunki,kya pata,"Kal Ho Na Ho".

The End.
Hope you all liked it.
Edited by zebbie0504 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohhh dr u mad me cry..
its so nice..
riya pov is realy painfulll..
she hug herself..
she wanted his warmth hug..
n complaing or god..
realy heart tuching dr..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Piyarani

Ohhh dr u mad me cry..
its so nice..
riya pov is realy painfulll..
she hug herself..
she wanted his warmth hug..
n complaing or god..
realy heart tuching dr..


thnks a lot,Piya di.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zebbie yaar!!
Tu ne phirse rula diya!!!

Riya was so sad!!! Iwanted to go there and give her a biiiggg cuuudddlllyy huuuggg!!!!!🤗
🤗

It was very well written!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zebbie


thnks a lot,Piya di.


No dr even i say thank..
its realy nice yr..
poor ri i can feel her pain..
thanks dr...for such a nice awesome os...
i feel u hv to right more..
but ..its so beautiful
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kitna sad tha😭
this is the reality of everyone who has ever had a one-sided love story😭
Very beautiful😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmmm...zebbie darling, emotional piece of work.

I liked it very much. Even I tried to improve my writing in the emotional stuff...but, I'm not as good as you dear!

Very nice OS yaar!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very emotional os yr...!!!
awsum...!!!
riya's pain is described well...!!! could feel her pain in the lines...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh anika di
aap ne toh rula diya...
I knw aap aaj riya ko bahaut miss kar rahe ho na...

Bt riya ko ignore kyun kar rahe hain...

Sayad riya ne ETF chod diya...
;( ;( ;( ;(

u hav expressed her emotion and her pain of heart very well...

Love ur signature sign kal ho na ho
its my fav film.

And kuch people attention seeker issliye hote hai kyun ki wo kabhi na kabhi ignore hue the...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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zebbi main toh abhi 😭 is halat main ho...!
kya describe kiya hai riye ke feelings ko...
loved it...!
for u 👏
😭😭 seriously touched my heart...i had tears wen i was reading she hugged herself...to find comfort...!
for u again👏
a bow to u from me!

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