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Posted: 12 years ago
Yes,jeenia plz bring back AsYa...I can't take this anymore.It's too much😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm upset Ayaan and Zoya are married but I'm happy Zoya saw the pain in Asad :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was actually pree good! It's like revenge for Asad ...cause of the way he's treating her in the show. 😈 xD Thanks for the PM :))))
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suchishah

Good...


But I have a strong request as I m very much glued to this one...plzzz update the other two parts in on day (u can take ur time to compile it but pls post both parts in one day ) as I can't see much of ayan and Zoya for two whole days...pls




Pls send pm if possible


Hey i will try to updat eboth the parts today as i am always busy with family on weekend so will try to make it today itself so that from monday ASYA part may start
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey all. thanks for beautiful response... i myself am not going well with this Ayaan-Zoya part... i will try to write both the parts today and finish this twist soon so that i can go to the main ASYA part...
really overwhelmed with such beautiful response now.Can't reply to all individually as writing next chapter... so thanks a lot to all...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey all... thnaks for liking previous chapter, i wa snot expecting response on that as i myself was disappointed while writing ,so here is the next one and i kept it brief, so that i can finish this part of sory as soon as possible... one more thing i avoided to add intimacy of Zoya and Ayaan to keep myself as well as other happy...lol... just kidding but last part was bit depressing, this is not...

Part-11

Ayaan's mamu had left the city on the day of their marriage for 15 days, zoya was just wishing to see him and confront him but she had to control her emotions till their plan was successful'.

Two days had passed when Ayaan's family had planned Dawat to announce Zoya and Ayaan's wedding while they both were in search of CD and that doll but were still doubting Razia must have destroyed those'.. when Nikhat came'.

Bhabhi kya dhund rhin hain aap yhan?

Wo main to ghar dekh rhi thi, kya aap mujhe dikha dengi? asked zoya'.

Ya, why not sure'.

and nikhat showed zoya the complete house'.. zoya wanted to check where that doll and cd can be hidden, while looking ta the rooms, they reached to Razia's room'.

Bhabhi ye Mumani ka room hai, rehne diziye'

kyon?

wo infect'..

ok nikhat I can understand, she doesn't like me'. lets go'..

they moved to go back when razia called her'. zoya hmara room nahi dekhogi? Nikhat, tumhari bhabhi ko main apna room dikhat hun, tum jao aur hamare liye chai le kar ayo'

she took zoya into her room and locked the door from inside'. zoya was mentally prepared for action'..

To ab tum yhan aane ka asli maskad batogi? asked Razia'.

who to apko bhi pta hai aur mujhe bhi'.. behtar yahi hai, you give me the doll'.

razia laughed on listening, do you think I am a fool, tum wo mangogi aur main de dungi? agar aisa hi karna tha to main churati kyon'. aur tumahri salamati isi mein hai ke tum is majre se bahar raho'.

Agar na jaun to? asked Zoya'

Razia held zoya's hand and twisted her arm'to tum jeena bhool jayogi..

in turn, zoya turned back and instead of zoya, Razia's arm was twisted''.

No no, aap bhool rhi hain ap zoya farukhi'oops sorry Zoya ayaan ahmed kahn se baat kar rhi hain kisi kamjor, nazuk si ladki se nahi'.. main ap ko kehti hun, apki salamati isi mein hai ke wo proofs mujhe de kar apne gunah maan jayiye'otherwise I am strong enough to find those proofs..' and she left raiza's hand as well as the room'.

zoya ran to her room but her heart was beating fast'.Ayaan was waiting for her in the room'. Zoya khan thi aap?

Zoya told him everything'.

no zoya, its not right, she is very strong'. we need some strong action against her'.

but we need chance to check her room, I am sure the proofs should be inside her room only'.

We need some time for that don't get so hurry'

Zoya was still thinking'

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There at Asad's home, Asad was in his room when Tanveer came with black coffee for her'

Kya baat hai Asad aapka mood kuch off lag rha hai?

Nahi to , Lets sit tanveer kaisi ho tum, I could not talk to you properly till you have come'. how is your life going on?

its going ok dear, my designing work is going well, I am planning to open a branch here in bhopal too'

that will be good' by the way you had your khala here in bhopal na? where does she live now?

Tanveer had a little shock on her face'

sh' she has shifted too'.

she was very close to you na?

yes, she was' even she is very close to me now too'.anyways leave it, you tell me, what going on in your life'. have you planned for your future?

no, I have left everything on ammi' by the way you are going back today na? you wanted to see the city na? we may go today and also if you want to see locations for your boutique' I can show you places'

Ok, Tanveer smiled, wait for half an hour , I will be ready'

k' Asad gave a fade smile, infect Asad had lost smile since the marriage of Zoya'. while Dilshad was looking at them.

Asad went with Tanveer to various places of city , it worked as a catalyst for Asad to to revive his mood' then they both went to various locations for boutique of Tanveer from which Tanveer chose two places , those were very costly but Asad assured her she don't need to worry about investments' as he is there, Tanveer was really impressed with the success of Asad while leaving bhopal and she left with the promise to come back soon'.

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One week had passed but Zoya and Ayaan could not get any chance to find the proofs as Razia was not giving them ay chance but zoya was just able to know that Razia has some link in that home who gave her Cd and doll but she could not find who it was'. and was even shocked who that may be ?may be some servant'.

meanwhile zoya had made a good bond with all at home with her sweet nature and as she had changed her dressing style too after wedding, she looked beautiful in anaarkali suits, nikhat had brought for her' she had been very friendly with both nikhat and nuzrat while humaria kept a distance from her'. she had seen a pain in humaira's eyes and was able to figure out that it was linked to Ayaan'..

Zoya , we may get chance ' said ayaan coming to the room'

but how?

next week in the daawat at home, as all will be in the hall'

but you are forgetting' we will also be there and we will be center of attraction, how will we leave the hall'..

yes, we can't but we can take help of some one'. ummm''' asad bhai jaan' Ayaan shouted with excitement'

do you think he will help us?

yes, he will definitely help us' I am sure about that'. he dialed asad's number and asked him to come to lake side'.

then he asked zoya , let's go'.

me too? zoya's heart skipped on question of meeting asad'

yes, how will we make a plan without you?

Zoya turned her face and went away suddenly hiding her tears'.

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Same day...

As asad reached his home form office on call from dilshad, he saw Tanveer's parents had come' he was surprised to see them'

Dilshad informed that she had invited them as she wanted Asad and Tanveer to get engaged'

Asad was surprised on listening when dilshad came ot him'

Asad, you had said na, you need a partner like Tanveer but not like zoya, then why are you hesitant now?

Ammi, infect'''I don't love her'..

Is it someone else in your life?

no ammi, no one is there in my life now' asad said with heavy voice full with pain' but yes you are right, I may not love her but I respect her a lot and she may be a good life partner for me'.

Finally dilshad was very happy as well as nazma'

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Asad got a call from Ayaan to meet at the same place'

As he reached there, he saw Ayaan laughing with Zoya, who wa swearing a beautiful yellow Anaarkali suit, Asad was surprised to see her in Indian Attire and she was looking beautiful.. as she saw her, she looked on the other side in order to avoid him'. while ayaan hugged his brother'.

ayaan told him everything happened to zoya and told him about the Daawat next week which may be the only chance to get the proofs'.

First Asad said no as he didn't want to enter in that home but later on he agreed to come for the same. zoya didn't respond until ayaan was not involving her in further plan but without talking to Asad'while Asad was also avoiding to talk to zoya as she was his brother's wife now... Finally they had decided their next line of action '

they were about to leave when Asad said to ayaan, I have a news for you'

yes bhai?

I am getting engaged tomorrow'

what? Ayaan was very happy' to whom?

Tanveer' he said while looking towards zoya'.

congrats bhai..Ayaan hugged him again'.

congrats Mr. Khan, said zoya'. when he gave her a smile'.and zoya went away into the car where she remembered all the moments she had passed with asad and wept to her heart while Ayaan was still talking to his brother'.

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Next day Asad and Tanveer got engaged, Tanveer was happy while Asad gifted her the shop purchased on her name to open the boutique'.

Precap:-Razia's truth out'.



Edited by jeenia123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Grrr!!! 😡 Stupid Asad and Zoya are making rash decisions ...but I mean hopefully at the end all will work out just fine! I can't wait for next chapter!!! Thanks for the PM 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: irock321

Grrr!!! 😡 Stupid Asad and Zoya are making rash decisions ...but I mean hopefully at the end all will work out just fine! I can't wait for next chapter!!! Thanks for the PM 😃


thanks dear... it is said we value something when we lose it... same is here ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part. Its good that you are moving this track soon. Already waiting for the next part.

Can you please pm me for your updates. Sending you buddy request please accept.

Thanjs

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