FF: Bewafa- Madhu's Version note PG14 - Page 5

Originally posted by: vaani21

😭 It was painful reading this FF.

Thanks Dona.

Originally posted by: iiDona

I am glad, thank you

ur welcome!😳

losing the sand clasped tightly between your fists. Her affection was giving, she never received her fair share.

that is the reason i like ur FF. the description of the condition with some examples surely helps to understand the situation more, which is not that much possible by just describing it.

the bed is a symbol of marital unity. his act is made all the more disgusting by breaking the sanctity.

yes, i agree with it.

she is doubting her love much in the same way.

that is the worst thing, yes it occurs whenever a man cheats his wife, the women firstly blames herself and consider that they had not given so much love and care, that's why their relationship is facing this thing, but it surely not occur if a wife will cheat her husband, there is least possibility that he will blame himself before her.

The two different versions try to convince to either hate or not hate RK. the decision is yours. I, as the writer, am in a tug of war.

u r the writer, u can't be partial with one character. i will make my decision soon.

reading RK's version part 2 currently, will read every chapter soon.

Originally posted by: adeeba21

part 2-yes i am getting addicted to ur writing. ur writing style stole my heart.i had read only 1 writer other than u who writes in this style, a little bit similar.

its really impressive!!

Thank you. Now I want to know who my competition is😆 JK.

madhu started living in other house, yes it is really hard to remove a person essence, i liked how once she was saying "bleach his essence" and other moment thinking to bleach the bathroom.

For a reserved and private person like her, it is difficult to even confess to herself what she is feeling.

"Not one woman, more than one, cause he had taught me: one was never enough."

all these words of madhu are just reflectiong how much she is crying from inside but still trying to be strong.

liked that "strong" one a lot. can't describe its correct meaning right now.

good, you are contemplating. just what i wanted. I want to rid you (readers in general) of dichotomous thinking. nothing is as simple as "right or wrong, us or them, hate or love". there is an entire spectrum in between, countless shades of all imaginable colours.

yes rishab is trying but sorry is not enough, a sorry can't bring her trust back or her happiness. try to prove ur love if u really care.

proof is relative too. only Madhu knows the criteria for revival of this marriage.

"I know, I say out loud. But, that is all you are: sorry. Ashamed, regretful, pathetic, sore and sorry. Bitter, that is all I am. Devastated, insane, miserable, yours and bitter."

described too well.

acid rishab, rishab acid but both r corrosive, i liked the metaphor a lot

thank you. thank you. *takes a bow*

yes madhu is strong, still trying to save some left over dignity of their relationship, how can she say to anyone that her husband cheated her.

trying to move ahead, buying her studio again, nice decision!

I think she is protecting him as much as she protecting herself. The love is only partially overshadowed by hurt. It will surface on many occasions. She should not have given up her dream. I am glad she is going back to all that was once familiar.

Originally posted by: iiDona

Thank you. Now I want to know who my competition is😆 JK.

i can tell u, i had started reading a blog, the writer is really impressive, i read only 5 chapters till now and i liked it a lot, it's an Arhi FF, just say that only character's name matches and story is all different just as u write, only character name matches.

if u want i can give u the link.

For a reserved and private person like her, it is difficult to even confess to herself what she is feeling.

understand her situation.

good, you are contemplating. just what i wanted. I want to rid you (readers in general) of dichotomous thinking. nothing is as simple as "right or wrong, us or them, hate or love". there is an entire spectrum in between, countless shades of all imaginable colours.

yes i agree, i am struck to ur words "nothing is white or black" just perspective of everyone are different. every coin has two faces, we can't ignore one of them.

i had made a decision i can't hate rishab. its my decision.

thank you. thank you. *takes a bow*

😳😳

I think she is protecting him as much as she protecting herself. The love is only partially overshadowed by hurt. It will surface on many occasions. She should not have given up her dream. I am glad she is going back to all that was once familiar.

yes its nice that she is going back to her dreams. atleast their love is still alive, i was just afraid if rishab really love her or not, but now think yes he do, i am thinking it, and don't u dare to a bring a twist and prove me wrong.

Originally posted by: adeeba21

i can tell u, i had started reading a blog, the writer is really impressive, i read only 5 chapters till now and i liked it a lot, it's an Arhi FF, just say that only character's name matches and story is all different just as u write, only character name matches.

if u want i can give u the link.

go for it

understand her situation.

yes i agree, i am struck to ur words "nothing is white or black" just perspective of everyone are different. every coin has two faces, we can't ignore one of them.

i had made a decision i can't hate rishab. its my decision.

glad I made an impact😳

yes its nice that she is going back to her dreams. atleast their love is still alive, i was just afraid if rishab really love her or not, but now think yes he do, i am thinking it, and don't u dare to a bring a twist and prove me wrong.

I am not uber dramatic or ekta kapoor. I enjoy pulling a leg or two but that is the boundary I set for myself. DW too much😉