kriyaansh-Holi Hai!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys! This is my very first story in India Forum fan fiction. I hope you will like it. (Please, do comment)

Holi Hai!!!

Holi is the festival of colors .but for Rey and Kria it is the festival of love. Why? Well...you will come to know after reading this story of love , friendship , fun , excitement, mauj-masti , dhamaka and the festival Holi.

Character sketch

Kria- Tomboy.Is free spirited and is different(totally hatke) from other girls.

Rey-soft spoken , charming and a good-looking guy.Likes Kria although knowing the fact that she's a bit sulky at times and isn't interested.

Taani- is Kria's best friend. Is very sweet,dreamy and bubbly. Sajna-savarna and chatting is her favorite pass-time.

Swayam- is Taani's brother,Rey's best friend and Kria's favorite. Is very sensible and mature in comparison to others.

All the other characters except Sharon are also included. But Sharon fans dont get upset because she will be coming in the last 2 parts of the story proving to be a big dhamaka in Kria's life but that you'll come to know later. I'll be updating the parts as soon as possible.Pls do not hesitate to comment because based on your feedbacks i'll be updating.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing concept n awesome CS
Kria is a tomboy n taani is her best friend😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept...
update soon n plz pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1

Taani: Kria, tumhare hisaabh se mujhe holi mein kya pehna chahiye

Kria: Obviously……… purane kapde

Taani:purane kapde! Paagal ho gayi ho! Holi ke jashn mein kitne saare log ayenge especially ladke. Aur kise pata….unhi ladkon mein se mera sapno ka rajkumar bhi wahan maujood ho aur tum bole rahi ho iss grand mauke ke liye main purane kapde pehnoon.No ways! Main na soch rahi hoon ki koyi expensive designer white colour ki chudidhar pehnoon jisme silver lining bhi ho. Tumhara kya khayaal hai?

Kria: come on Taani! Grow up! Holi ke liye almost 1hafta baaki hai aur tum abhi se shuru hogayi.Sach mein! Bachpane ki bhi koyi hadh hoti hai

Taani: Arre. Kria you're unbelievable. Holi aa raha hai aur tum aise behave kar rahi ho jaise tumhe koi faraq nahi padta. Yeh kaisa attitude hai.Meri maano tho…iss boring kria ko dhoor bagao aur apne andar excitement lao. And can't u see, sirf 1 hafta bacha hai holi ke liye and I don't know what 2 wear

Kria: I feel you are just over-reacting and can't understand why r v fighting

Taani: Kria tumhara tho pata nahi par mere liye it's a big deal cause holi saal mein ek hi baar atha hai aur iss baar holi ko extra-special aur yaadhgaar banana bahut zaroori hai kyun ki iss baar hum festival ko humaare saare college friends ke saath manaa rahe hain.

Kria: yeah right…..wo rinni,simmi,ashi,neha and all……..jinhe sajne-savarna,Rajkumari and pariyon ki tarah behave karna, boys ke peeche bhaagna aur shaadi ke sapne dekne ke ilava aur kuch nahi aatha

Taani: problem un mein nahi tum mein hai. Sometimes I feel ur actions r really abnormal.Tumhe tho sirf gaali ke gunde mile apne best friend oh sorry……tumhare language mein kahoon tho………

Kria:jigri dost

Taani: yeah right. Jigri dost banaane ke liye. U know what Kria, mujhe lagta hai tumhari sirf ek friend hai jo ek ladki hai……………Taani Shekawat.

Kria: usme problem kya hai

Taani: Problem nahi hota agar tumhaare friends reyaansh ya bhai hote. Par nahi tumhe tho sirf wo tapori Amar,Bharat,Vicky aur Nilesh mile jinke saath tum pura time offbeat ganpathi style dance karti rehti ho.

Kria: waise meri Swayam, Neha aur Ashi ke saath bhi kaafi banthi hai

Taani: Unka patience , bholapan aur acchai hai jo tumhe jelteh hain.

Kria: well that's how I am. Agar tumhe bura lagah toh Im sorry. Waise tumhare dreams tho bade aur royal hain. Par tum ek expensive churidhar holi par kyun kareedna chahti ho? Agar usme rang lag gaya tho anyways fekna padega. Tho kareedne ka kya fayda. Meri maano……..expensive kapde apni shaadi ke liye bachaake rakho.

Taani: nahi babes….meri shaadi mein tho main ek grand laal rang ka lehenga pehnoongi jisme flower patterns hogi golden border ke saath jiska cost 10 lakh se bhi upar hoga.

Kria: whoa! Sach mein taani! Kaafi bade hain tumhare sapne!

Taani: yeh tho kuch bhi nahi hai. Meri maano agar tum bhi sajne savarne lagi tho tum bhi buri nahi lagogi

Kria: sach mein

Taani: trust me……ladke tumhare peeche bhaagne lagenge. Ek baar mere saath shopping tho chalo

Kria: waise tho mujhe yeh sab pasandh nahi par agar tum keh rahi ho tho……….ek baar try karne mein kya jaata hai.

Taani: tho chalo shopping!

Kria: teek hai……….chalo

(after shopping the whole day , in the evening)

Taani: aaj ka din kitna tiring tha par mazedaar bhi.

Kria: sham ho gaya hai aur itna zyaada shopping karne ke baad mera kamar dukne laga hai. Can't believe ke yeh sab main holi par pehne waali hoon. Itna tho main ne diwali par bhi nahi pehna.

Taani: par chor bazaar se colors, water balloons aur water guns lane mein bhi time gaya na. waise bhi yeh sab chodoh. I think tumhe ghar jaana chahiye

Kria: Aur tum?

Taani: nahi, actually pass mein hi ek building hai jahan par main dance kuch dino se seekh rahi hoon. Tho its 7 o'clock and I think kuch time mein class start ho jayegi and it is very near isliye main chalke chali jaungi. So……..practice ke liye jaana padega.

Kria: what?practice? dance? Tumhe kabse dance seekne ki jaldi pad gayi?

Taani:actually main aur baaki girls aane wale festival ke liye dance karne waale hain. Holi ke din humara performance hai jo hum sabke saamne present karenge. Tho uske liye practice karna hai. I think tumhe pehle se in sab mein interest nahi tha isliye tumhe nahi pata .

Kria: dance performance……….holi ke liye!( she starts laughing loudly)Taani………..tum bhi na. Sach mein! Tumhara jawabh nahi. Ek festival ke liye kuch zyaada nahi ho raha

(just then Kria saw the tensed look on Taani's face)

Kria: oye! Ab kya hua? Phirse kuch galat keh diya kya?

Taani: Nahi yaar. Actually iss road mein taxi ka bahut problem hai. Aur 6 baje ke aage tho taxi milne ka koi chance hi nahi samjho.

Kria: hai rabba ! matlab jabtak tera class khatm hoga tabtak tho 9 bajh jayenge aur bahut andhera bhi ho jayega and I guess tab road bhi bahut sunsaan rahega. Itne andhere mein tu ghar kaise jayegi.

Taani: arre mera koi problem nahi hai. Main yahan pehle bhi aachuki hoon. 9 baje bhai hamesha mujhe pick up karne aathe hain. Problem yeh hai ki tu kaise jayegi. Naahi humare paas mobile hai. Naahi mujhe koi taxi dikhayi de rahi hai.Naahi tujhe humare saath dance karne mein ya humara dance dekhne mein interest hai aur main tujhe aise akhele chodh bhi nai sakti. After all tu meri best friend hai yaar

Kria: tho yeh problem hai…kya yaar! Tu mujhe apni best friend kehti hai aur tujhe abhi tak yeh nahi pata ki kria ke dictionary mein impossible naam ki koyi cheez nahi .

Taani: chal- chal. Tere liye yeh sab bahut aasaan hoga kehne ke liye par mujhe tumhari fikar hai. Main tujhe aise kisi sadak mein akele nahi chodne wali.

(just then Taani saw something that bought a smile on her face!)

Guys I know it was a bit boring but I promise…the next update will have romance. Pls pls pls do give ur precious comments and pls forgive the errors/mistakes if made any.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing...
kria n tn preparing for holi..loved it...
i guess tn saw rey.may b just a guess...
update soon n thanks for pm...
Edited by kriyansh_Alisha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yar there r still many kr fans waiting for new kr stories as these ff,ss,os r the only source of happiness left for us...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept...👏👏
update soon n plz pm me...
Chapter 1 was niccee...👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing concept
Chrctr sketch was just awesome
Plzz continue soon

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