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As now in our favourite show taraak mehta ka oolta chashma we have witnessed what all indian women have gone through by the character of bharti. Inspired from those fabulos series i have written this poem which i want to dedicate to all my sisters not only on this forum but in the entire world

a poem to all women


when will all this come to an end
when will we get a world where women can live in peace
talk to men with ease
a world where they will never be deceived

when will this come to an end
that India is progressing
how long can we pretend

neither in homes nor on streets
can Indian women live in peace
they are unsafe everywhere
and nobody seems to care

being a girl I can feel
the difficulties that these women feel
a whole life ahead
destroyed within a second

they are humans blood and flesh
with feelings just like men
unfortunately after such incidents
they can't start their life again fresh

everyday I pray
for a new world
where all women happily will say
"I am proud to be here today"

but never will this be possible
not until we will be responsible
to understand the pain of women and give them space
who are considered equal to men


give them respect
let them live
because one little incident
and they will repent
"o why am I woman?"

Neither today nor tomorrow
nor ever
until we give them respect
with fear they will shiver
whenever they are alone

rivers of Ganga, Yamuna all are considered feminine
so is mother earth and this country of mine
but yet we forget to respect
those who give us the wonderful gift of life😊

-poorvisinghcd(srishti)

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rishabgosavi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Srishti you are good poet and i liked your poem its good and welcome to our forum
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rishabgosavi

Srishti you are good poet and i liked your poem its good and welcome to our forum



THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!!!
GLAD YOU LIKED IT
WHENEVER I READ POEMS IN MY SCHOOLBOOKS I ALWAYS FEEL LIKE WRITING MY OWN AND AFTER SEEING SUCH A PAINFULL TRUTH IN MY FAV TV SHOW I HAD TO POST THIS😊

thanks for the welcomee
😊

and please call me poo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very good and interesting poem i like it too much ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tapugada1997

very good and interesting poem i like it too much ...


thanks a lot😊😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: poorvisinghcd

As now in our favourite show taraak mehta ka oolta chashma we have witnessed what all indian women have gone through by the character of bharti. Inspired from those fabulos series i have written this poem which i want to dedicate to all my sisters not only on this forum but in the entire world

a poem to all women


when will all this come to an end
when will we get a world where women can live in peace
talk to men with ease
a world where they will never be deceived

when will this come to an end
that India is progressing
how long can we pretend

neither in homes nor on streets
can Indian women live in peace
they are unsafe everywhere
and nobody seems to care

being a girl I can feel
the difficulties that these women feel
a whole life ahead
destroyed within a second

they are humans blood and flesh
with feelings just like men
unfortunately after such incidents
they can't start their life again fresh

everyday I pray
for a new world
where all women happily will say
"I am proud to be here today"

but never will this be possible
not until we will be responsible
to understand the pain of women and give them space
who are considered equal to men


give them respect
let them live
because one little incident
and they will repent
"o why am I woman?"

Neither today nor tomorrow
nor ever
until we give them respect
with fear they will shiver
whenever they are alone

rivers of Ganga, Yamuna all are considered feminine
so is mother earth and this country of mine
but yet we forget to respect
those who give us the wonderful gift of life😊

-poorvisinghcd(srishti)



u made me blush 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jeanniejuju1111



u made me blush 😳





thank you😊😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a standing ovation for u and 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 4 u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jeanniejuju1111

a standing ovation for u and 👏 4 u



awww i am honoured😳

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