DIVINE LOVE MG SS Epilouge Page 161 27/6/2013 - Page 45

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmi.vaish68

awesome

Geet is also missing him
how will she react now



wo to nxt me hi pata chalega [;D]
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Richu...
So Geet knew it was Maan who had attacked her..
Finally Maan is out of his guilt..
But Maaneet r restless without seeing each other..
Hhhaaayyyee..Maan came to see Geet & Geet ne bhi Maan ki khushboo ko pehchaan liya..
Waiting for Maaneet confrontation..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiyariya

geet pata tha ki maan aya us rat😲😲</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">geet ne mana kar dia maan ko
awee both missing each other madly😛finally our manju went meet his laila😉😳😳



😆majnu hota hai sweety na ki manju 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was mind-blowing update... hope geet will realizes her feelings
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear so geet knows who attacked her and maan is so happy when his burden was lightened and bpth maaneet are missing each other so much lovely update shona continue soon🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww geet knew the truth and maan was shocked to know

but geet also knew maan is a good guy thats he took her to hospital

both parted and missing now

waiting for more

thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum part
precap is so scary hope maan geet ke saath kuch ghalait na kare
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanx god maan ne geet ke sath kuch nhi liya
geet is blind😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting part feeling bad for geet
hope maan geet ka sath de
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART - 8

GEET cant see him,but it doesnt meant he can play hide and seek with her. She can sence him,feel him. His vibes sent msg to her sences. Geet came down. Her fussy breath and pace is enough to told how much she miss him but denied.

''Daima kon aaya hai? Maan aaye hai kya?'',She asked quickly to confirm her doubts.

Daima is about to revealed the truth but Maan signled her and she lied.''nai to beta koi nai hai par tujhe aisa kyu laga ki koi hai?''

Her lied made her face turn pale and sad. Her heart still thumping fast,she knew he was here,he was near around her.''jhoot mat boliye daima,mujhe pata hai Maan aaye hai.''

''nai beta main jhoot nai bol rai.'',she again lied.

''to firr ye roses kon laya?boliye?'',she was sure that her heart is not liyng. Seeing her reastless he also get impatient but an unknown chuckle came on his face. Theway she enquiring impressed him more.

''achha to tu in fulo ki baat kr rai hai?(Geet nodded)ye to main lai hu wo b apne garden area se. Samjhi? Par tujhe kyu laga Maan laya hai?'',Daima trying to analyise her action and read her mind.

''nai bas aise hi.''she said dispirtedly.

''wo aayega b kaise tune hi to mana kar rakha hai na use yaha aane se'',she blamed her.

''wo theek hai Daima. Maan achhe insaan hai or koi unpe zhoothe ilzam lagye ye mujhe pasand nahi hai'',she confessed in a meak voice.

Maan get closer to her and clenched her arm tightly. A shiver ran throug her spine.''log kya sochte hai tume unki parwah hai. Lekin humari feelings kuch mayne nai rakhti hai na?'',he said recent and frustration mixed tone.

''aap?(she wriggle to free herself)kyu aaye hai aap yaha?And leave me pls.'',Geet trying to pretend rude so may he leave her.

''chalo mere sath? Daima main Geet ko apne sath le ja raha hu,'',he told he his decision commandingly instead of ans her que. Her ignorance irritates him more.

''Maan u hurting me? Kaha le ja rae ho mujhe'',she winceing in pain as his grip get more firm on her wrist.

''bahut shuk tha na tumhe Shreya se milne ka?usi se milwane le ja raha hu.'',he told her while dragging her inside his car. In few mins they were in front of his home. Maan clenched her wrist again and dragged her inside and freed her infront of a pic of Shreya hanging on wall with graland around.

''Maan shreya kaha hai?'',she que.to him doubtfuly.

He held her soft hand and placed on her pic. Geet's heart beat raised. She dont want to accept the truth.''Maan ye kaisa mazak hai?where is Shreya?''

''yai Shreya hai Geet,bas ab isi roop me wo mere sath hai.'',his voice flattred and lips droodle. Geet roamed her hand and silent tear escaped from her eyes. She wet near Maan and asked about her. Maan's eyes again trun furious red becz of anger he had on Viraj. He told her the truth which made her bleeds. She knows how her brother is of a kind but she nvr imagined in her dreams that he stoop so low and bcm a reason of killing an innocent life.her soft heart wincing in pain and guilt. Her soul treambled dreadfuly.

''to isiliye aap us dinn...(she cant completes. Her eyes shut and tear escaped from them)apne jo b kia usme apki koi galti nai hai.koi b bhai shyad aise hi react krta.i m sorry Maan. Bcoz of Viraj You and Shreya suffred this much.'',she is regretting on her brothers deed.

Maan falls on his knees,broken completely. Geet also bend and cupped his face

Maan's insecured and lifeless eyes shedding tears non stop. Geet felt them as her hands turn wet with them. His tears and pain needled her dreadfuly.

''Maan pls dont cry.apko aise dekh k Shreya ko dhuk pahunchega,Kya aap use dukhi krna chahte hai?'',she consoling him in a whimpring voice as she herself start crying with him.

Maan was in a broken state and anticipatedly he hugged her,as he trust her only know after Shreya to open himself. Geet to resiprocate the hug,coz she knows he needs her. She stroke his back in a soothing manner.

''Geet meri Shreya ka kasoor tha jo uske sath ye hua?why she leave me alone? Is i m so bad that everyone wants to escape from me?'',he mumbbling in a broken voice,which is not bearable by Geet. She dont know the reason but his pain hurting her endlessly.

''Maan pls aap shant ho jaiye.'',she wants to sooth his pain but dont know how. Maan stay in her embrace for so long until her warmth made him composed again.

''i m sorry'',he apolozised when he broked the hug. Maan stood up and went near window.''Geet ibrought u here coz i want u to know about this truth and the reason behind my brut...'',before he completes Geet shut his mouth by placing her palm ao his mouth.

''apko sfai dene ki koi zarurat nai hai.maine to apse pehle bhi kaha tha ki mujhe apse koi shikayat nai hai.main to apko kab ka maaf kar chuki hu.'',she know he still blaming himself.

''to firr kyu durr jana chahti hu mujhse?i was turn dead after Shreya left me.sevrl times i want to kill my self even. But before i act i came to know about this truth that Viraj is the one who spoiled my sister's life.''

''us raat tumse badla lena chahta tha...(he stopped)par tumse milne k baad i was to feel live live again. Seeing ur courage forced me to fight with my pain and sorrows.'',he added. Maan turned to her and grasped her from both arms.''or ab jab main firr se jeene laga hu,muskurae laga hu wo bhi sirf tumhari wajhse to kyu mujhe khudse durr kar dena chahti hu? Bolo Geet bolo? Agar tumne mujhe maaf kar dia hai firr kyu? Geet logo ki parwah maine na to kabi ki hai or na karunga. I dont care damn it.'',he almost shout on her.

Geet removed his hands on hers.''pls Maan,i dont have any ans of ur any que.bas itna samjh leejiye ki humara sath yahi tak hi tha.'',she turned to avoid him.

Maan's heart wrenched but Geet's more.''I m sorry Maan,but i dont want gave any false hopes to me. What would i do if one day you also left me like others. Maan is baar main khud ko sambhal nai paungi.'',her thoughts banging her heads. The stroam of thoughts made her weak in steping ahead.

Maan felt annoyed with her attitude. He stop arguing with her any more and took back to her home. When they reached some vagabond boys passed teasing comments on both's closeness. Maan glared but Geet held his wrist. Maan wants to teach all now but controled. They still making mock of both. Maan leave her inside first and come outside. They still taunting but unaware what he will gonna do with them.

''speak again'',he glared furiously.

''ha to bolunga kya kar lega,''one of them showing attitude and all other laugh. Maan clenched his fist and hit his nose with full, force.

''or kisi ko kuchh bolna hai.''he is fuming and glaring all. But they dont learn their lesson so attacked him together. Maan is an army officer. His action are planned. And well said by some one. Dogs never able to overpowerd Lion,sply wounded Lion. Maan's punches broke their bones and courage both. All start coming from their houses hearing the wincing sounds of that boys. Some of elders came forward to intrupt their fight. Geet also came out with Daima. She wants to go near him,so Daima took her near him.

''Maan pls stop.agar apke dil me mere liye thodi si b respect hai to pls inhe chhod deejiye.'',Geet pleads for his sake only as she was aware of the consequences of this fight. He may also get imprisionment.

Maan boiled furiosly,but Geet's plead made him stop instantly. He jerkly threw the boy on road.''agli baar agar Geet k liye ek b galt shbd nikala to jaan le lunga.'',he warned all of them. All r scared badly and whimpering in sore.

''kis kis ki jaan loge beta? Tum jo kar rae wo sai nai hai.bina kisi rishte k agar ek akeli ladki se mel jol badaoge to bate to banegi hi.''one old man raised que,showing their cheap thoughts.

''wah sir aaj ap bade himayti bann rae hai us waqt kaha the aap log jab Geet k sir pe ye chot lagi thi?kaha the ap log jab wo akeli is ghar me chote kha rai thi. Wo hospital me admitt thi ye yaha kisi ko pata nahi hai. Lekin main usse uska haal puchhne aata hu wo sabko dikhta hai. Chaliye main to anjan ho par Geet ko to ap sab jante hai.kya wo apko aisi ladki lagti hai?''Maan rudly ans his que.

''aajkal kon kab kya kr de kya bharosa.'',another lady remarked.

''iska jwab zrur deta,sirf apki umar or aurat hone ka lihaz kr ra hu.'',he glared furiously and made her shut her mouth.

''Maan aap pls yaha se jaiye.isi baat k liye main apko rokti thi.yaha koi nai samjhega.'',Geet asked him for back up as all having low thinking there.

''to tum dono samjh do,kya rishta hai tum dono ka?'',one more from the mob taunts and this made his anger towered to cloud nine,when mob laugh on both.

''u r all cheap and i dont want to clear any thing to u.'',Maan confirmed shortly.

'you kept silence when u r wrong only.',one more blamed and this time is edge of his patience.

'humara rishta hai astha ka,Vishwas ka, smman ka or py'...suddnly he stopped himself.'lekin ap log ye kabi nahi samjhenge. To aaj main apne or Geet k rishte ko naam deta hu.'he rubbed his thumb n his wound and rubbed on his oozing blood and filled her head's partion with his blood.'aaj se main ise aap sabke samne apni patni sweekar karta hu. Ab or koi swal puchhna hai kisi ko?',he roared and leave all in stunned and shocked.

Geet too touched her head,feeling his blood and dont know how to react. Wheather she felt happiness of getting married or cried what happened with her so sudden,when she aint ready for it. Moreover she felt bad for Maan more.

Maan entwined her fingers in front of all.'now she is my wife and any of u said single wrong word,i will kill that one,and that is my last warning.chalo Geet.',he glared the mob and dragged her along with him...

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