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The Swaron horizon, where the earthly love of Swayam met the mighty highness of Sharon's passion. Once painted with the intense, pure white of Swayam's love and fierce, passionate red of Shoran's spirit was now covered with think stoned layers of blues.

Swayam, who loved Sharon with all his might, all his self was experiencing the painful gray holes of sadness stabbing in the heart of his strength. He was fighting not just with the cold blackness which was once passionate red but also struggling with the black clouds looming over his belief' his faith to win, marking for his self confidence' slicing his heart in thousand pieces. He was fighting for light' to find what was unknown' asking questions not only to Sharon but questioning his very self too.

But the grey was unstoppable. It surpassed his every attempt, blending perfectly in the dark reds of Sharon. Sharon was clutched' caged in her own insecurities, her own vulnerability. The darkness of loneliness was so painfully, so utterly black that she herself felt lost. She was searching for the white. The angelic white love of Swayam, who always believed her, loved her with her darks and brights but at the same time pushing him away with all her being. She wanted desperately for him to pull her out of this darkness, this baffling emptiness she was feeling in her heart.

Her bewilderment was extreme when touched by the strength of his love, his faith in them, faith that they are meant to be' faith that they belong to each other and will be together. His love was undeniable but human he was' possessed with most kindest and sensitive heart, which she has wounded so many times that one can see the reds on his pure white. But he cherished them, taking them as her gifts, as her remembrance. Just because they were related with her, he savored it in his consciousness for ever to keep them ever fresh' evergreen.

He was tired finally. Tired of fighting the deep, unbeatable grays and blacks of the stoned walls shielding his love from him. she finally managed to break him and broke herself when she saw the clear pearl drops beaming in his eyes, seeing not just hurt past those water pools but also the blues of solitary and sorrow' sorrow of failure, of broken trust not in her but himself. He can never blame her. He was as usual beating himself in agony not even realizing that his burning was setting her heart on flames too. There was blue and there was blue.


She could feel his warmth, see his light. She could find herself in that glow if she wants. The light of truth will fade away not only the gray and black shadows of pain and grief but also the blues of loneliness, painting the Swaron horizon again with the orange brightness of Swayam's white and Sharon's red.

P.S- sorry guys for boring you. I know the asthma track will finally be over but I am still worried about Swaron and in blue myself.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Can't believe they officially broke up. That was heartbreaking.😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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But they never behavd lyk a couple when they were in a relatnshp :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What a beautiful picture you painted :)
Its always the blues of loneliness after the storm is it not ? The storm has passed and along with has taken the colors of ones life. The love from Swayam,though Sharon did not accept has always brightened her world, gave shades of red to her cheek and at times she did go green with the thought of loosing him..The serenity of something so pure as white often soother her..
Sharon now has blacked out on everything and with this Only half the picture to he horizon is done..the next half is how things will move forward from now..
I Hope the colors of rainbow soon makes it appearance in SwaRon's life and for this time its all permanent and here to stay..AS only then the complete picture be divine..

P.S - I know..i know..much of my ramblings.. :P
I hope my comment here doesn't take away the beauty of your post :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: d3lover90

But they never behavd lyk a couple when they were in a relatnshp :(

Not really, I mean they never got enough time together and situations were never right for them too. But they alwasy a connection between them that could be understood just looking in their eyes.,, acting like couple was never important. Its not even now they are perfect when they are together. But got your point too, we all want them to see them like normal couple, enjoying, loving each other.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

What a beautiful picture you painted :)

Its always the blues of loneliness after the storm is it not ? The storm has passed and along with has taken the colors of ones life. The love from Swayam,though Sharon did not accept has always brightened her world, gave shades of red to her cheek and at times she did go green with the thought of loosing him..The serenity of something so pure as white often soother her..
Sharon now has blacked out on everything and with this Only half the picture to he horizon is done..the next half is how things will move forward from now..
I Hope the colors of rainbow soon makes it appearance in SwaRon's life and for this time its all permanent and here to stay..AS only then the complete picture be divine..

P.S - I know..i know..much of my ramblings.. :P
I hope my comment here doesn't take away the beauty of your post :P

I agree with you. Though they official broked up now but may be this the indication for a official start of something new. I am sure this new will be progress in Swaron not a restart altogether. I am trying to be as positive as I can. I can never give up on Swaron no matter what.
ABout your rambling, I love them. There were all the things I would have love to include in my post you kind of made it complete and added more to my post. I can just thank you for that.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SmokySapphira-

Can't believe they officially broke up. That was heartbreaking.😭


so so true...it was so sad... 😭
esp when taanu talked bout the "break up" part...i culdnt stop sobbing... 😭
really love taanu's expressions in such scenes...

it directly reminded me of SS confession...and well...i sorta missed SK...she wuld have made each and every1 of us cry...though, vrush did a great job as well...guess, she needs time to master these scenes =)

and awesum post =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya


so so true...it was so sad... 😭
esp when taanu talked bout the "break up" part...i culdnt stop sobbing... 😭
really love taanu's expressions in such scenes...

it directly reminded me of SS confession...and well...i sorta missed SK...she wuld have made each and every1 of us cry...though, vrush did a great job as well...guess, she needs time to master these scenes =)

and awesum post =)

Swayam made me cry. I agree even I missed Sneha. She would have marked it more higher but vrush certainly did great job. I hope there will something intersting to see for Swaron.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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He didn't say bye to her, did he? He turned away. So, I am gonna conveniently believe that there is no breakup, whatsoever. Episodes like the one that aired tonight put stopper in my endless thoughts. I cannot analyse them or even watch them, no matter how enmeshed I was in their majesty while I watched. This sort of intensity is beyond my understanding. I appreciate the actors, the setup and the dances but the emotions involved beat me. Theirs is an epic romance, one that I witness from a distance and can only occasionally comment on.

You have metaphorically given us an extract of the propriety of all things Swayum and Sharon by means of this prose. Might I add, in a most remarkable fashion. Even with heavy hearts, all those who admire Swayum and Sharon and English Language would admire this prose equally.


Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. 😳



Kankshita




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: epiphany.

He didn't say bye to her, did he? He turned away. So, I am gonna conveniently believe that there is no breakup, whatsoever. Episodes like the one that aired tonight put stopper in my endless thoughts. I cannot analyse them or even watch them, no matter how enmeshed I was in their majesty while I watched. This sort of intensity is beyond my understanding. I appreciate the actors, the setup and the dances but the emotions involved beat me. Theirs is an epic romance, one that I witness from a distance and can only occasionally comment on.


You have metaphorically given us an extract of the propriety of all things Swayum and Sharon by means of this prose. Might I add, in a most remarkable fashion. Even with heavy hearts, all those who admire Swayum and Sharon and English Language would admire this prose equally.


Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. 😳



Kankshita




Yes, he didn't said a goodbye and if Swayam ever say Goodbye and mean it even in least that day that will be end of Swaron for sure. I couldn't help but agree with you that they have such an effect ... such an aura about them that one can just feel it. I have never experience such complex vitality of emotions. But I can't stop myself from admiring the beauty of them. They can make you smile and cry at the same time. Swaron is like drowsy mist making its way as per its nature in your heart without letting you realise how much you get affected by them.
By the way, I must mention before I forget you have really beautiful name.😊

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