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Zara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: deepak148
Look like we will reach third thread. I was among ur starting readers

I know man :P I'm surprised !!! Third thread will be too much :O

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Posted: 12 years ago

#582

How many updates r left and plz update

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Zara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: deepak148
How many updates r left and plz update

Even I dnt knw how many are left :P I just know there is still quite a lot to it :P and yes I'll update today !!

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Ramona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#584

Read all update since Tammy's entry..

Tomato.. I knew this was coming.. 😆 Sanjeeda.. Perfect for this role.. feeling sad that Tammy lost her mom.. but at the same time.. Im glad that she knows the truth.. RK has got his friend back😃

Lekin.. Im a lil worried. It shouldnt affect Rishbala's relationship..

Rishbala... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ their day doesnt end without a Kiss.. and Tomato.. I love you so much for the amazing Rishbala scenes you've written.. 🤗

Tammy meets Madhu.. uh oh.. lekin RK handled the situation.. oh yea.. when it comes to Biwi.. he is extra careful..

finally the love triangle starts.. should I be happy for Rishbala or sad for Tammy??? 😕😕

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Zara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#585

@Ramona - Thankyouuu sooo much my Love ❤️ well u can be both 😛 Happy for Rishbala and Sad for Tamy but the next update wil clear ur confusion I hope 😆

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Zara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: rajeevkiijann
nice update😊

Thanks dear :)

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.Mohabbatein.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#587

Fab update..

Rishbala kiss

I liked tammy saw this thing 🤣

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Zara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#588

NOTE - i want to Thank each and everyone of u for loving my writing and making me reach thread #2 ...infact ive crossed 100 pages already 😲 its such a suprise for me !!

THANKYOU so much guys 🤗

for ur love , support , likes and comments . I heartily thank each n every person who likes me FF and comments and even to those who are just silent readers , ur views only make me happy .

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Zara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#589

CHAPTER 21

Tamanna went to her room , her eyes were blood red in anger and hurt . She cried , cried like there was no end to her tears .

'This can't happen ' she screamed

'Rishabh is mine ! Only mine' she threw everything that came her way .

She screamed in anger , broke things , gettin hurt on her hand as well , she cried like madness.

And finally calmed down , tears still coming down.

'U love me Rishabh ! I'm ur first love'

'No one can take my place in ur life . No one at all ' her eyes widened in anger and rage.

'I'll make u mine' she spoke softly and made her way to the party.

As she came down , she saw RK talking Madhu , madhu was blushing while RK's hand was on her waist . A spun of jealousy ran all over her body.

She went past them to the bar and ordered a drink , just when RK saw her .

'Hey Tamy ! Hope u enjoying the party ?' He spoke coming along wid Madhu.

'Umm yeah ! Great party' she spoke faking a smile.

And just then RK saw a deep cut on her hand which was bleeding .

'Crap ! Tamy what happnd to ur hand ?' He said horrified

Tamy saw her hand and realized she had a deep cut .

'Oh nothing I'll be fine. Just gt a bit hurt' she chuckled

'No ! Let me give u first aid ' RK said sternly

'Rishabh u care for me too much. Bt seriously I'm fine' she looked at Madhu , whose expressions were changing

'Tamy ! No arguments . Come with me ' he dragged Tamy to the room , leaving Madhu's hand in process.

Madhu stood their numb. 'Is something still on btw them ?' She couldn't help notice the care in RK's eyes .

RK and Tamy were in the room , while Madhu watched . RK cleaned her hand and put on some antiseptic , and then band aid , seeing him care like that. Tamy felt happy , a tear rolled down her cheek and fell on RK's hand.

'Tamy why u crying ? Is it hurting much' he asked concerned

'No ! Just a bit'

He wiped her tear. 'Don't worry itl get ok soon . We'l get u an injection tom' he spoke

Madhu stood near the door watching all of it . ' This care isn't just friendship. Its more . A lot more ' she thought

They all returned to the party .

As the music started , RK asked Madhu for a dance . Madhu was lost but she couldn't refuse him even if she tried .

They both started slow dancing , unaware that a pair of eyes was following them. It was Tamanna's .

As the song changed , Tamanna walked up to them ' can I dance wid my Childhood bestie !?' She spoke wid the most amazing smile.

Madhu's heart broke. She was hurt , but with a bright smile she agreed as she went away.

RK was unaware of both Madhu's and Tamy's feelings. For him he told Madhu everything and Tamy was just a long lost friend .

As they started dancing , Tamy felt on cloud 9. But Madhu's eyes had tears as she saw RK's hands on tamy"s bare waist and back , the close proximity btw them broke her heart every second.

RK felt something weird dancing with Tamy. As their skin connectd , and he saw into her eyes , his heart did skip a beat. ' She was unimaginably Gorgeous. Her blue eyes were just driving him closer '

And the song ended ...

RK was busy chatting up with his colleagues. When Tamy walked up to Madhu.

'Hey ' she spoke

Madhu replied "how r u Tamanna !?"

'I'm great ! Better than ever ." She spoke glancing at RK . Madhu saw

'Nice' madhu replied sternly

'So ur RK's secretary ? Niceee . I hope he treats u well ? '

'Yes ofcourse ! Why? '

'Uh No just like that . He can be really mean sometimes and other times can be a total sweetheart. We used to be together 24*7 when we were kids and its strange tht yest when I came , I felt he still feels the same for me. He sat wid me all nite and we chatted like old times. Felt great ' tamy spoke as she saw madhu's eyes buiding up tears.

'That's nice Tamanna. Now if u excuse me ' Madhu spoke and went away , wich left Tamanna smirking.

As the successful Party ended . And the guests made their way out. RK was chilling in his room , waiting for his Madhu.

Just then Madhu entered and closed the door behind.

RK immediately sat up from his bed and walked towards her , crushing her into a passionate hug .

'I missed u' he spoke kissing her neck.

Madhu didn't respond . She didn't even hug him back

RK suspected smthing was wrong.

' What happened Madhu ?' He asked touching her cheek.

'Do u love me ?'

'Yes ofcourse . Why do u ask that?'

'If u love me , then what do u feel for Tamanna !?'

RK's expressions changed suddenly.

'She's just a friend Madhu'

'Just a friend RK? Or something more ?'
'Madhu have u lost it ? I alrdy told u why she's here '

'But u never told me , that u still care for her the sme way or rather more . Neither u told me that she likes u ?'

RK was shocked . He was confused 'she likes me ?' He felt weird sensations running through his body.

'No she doesn't . And ofcourse she's my friend I'll care for her '

'Its not a friendly care ' Madhu shouted
' Are u attracted to her RK ?

'No Madhu' he replied almost inaudibly

'Look into my eyes and say that '

RK looked everywhr but not into her eyes . He himself was confused abt his feelings for Tamy . But he did love Madhu , he was sure.

'I love u Madhu' he spoke softly

'Look into my eyes and say u don't have feelings for Tamy' she spoke crying angrily

There was silence

' I got my answer RK '

'Madhu no . Listen to me...Tamy needs me , she has nowhr and no one to go to'

'Then u shall take care of her, I'll take care of myself ' Madhu spoke inbtw her tears as she left his room.

Tamy saw her barging out crying ..'Mission accomplished' she spoke smirking.

RK knelt dwn unknowingly , as confusion and aggression ran through his veins .

'May I come in ? ' Tamanna spoke

RK looked up ' Tamy I'm not really in a mood. Plz excuse me '

'What hapnd RK ? I'm ur friend , share wid me . Maybe I can help ? '

'I love Madhu ' he broke into silent tears

Tamy's heart broke again , bt she didn't give up

'Then what hapnd ? '

'She feels something is on btw us , she left me. I really love her Tamy. '

'Oh...I'm sorry Rishabh becoz of me she left u . I'll go talk to her'

'No ! Don't ! I know Madhu . Only I can fix her '

Tamy walked towards RK and made him sit on the bed

'I'm sorry Rishabh. I shouldn't have stayed back , I didn't know ul have so many problems becoz of me. I'll leave now ! I don't want to create problems in ur life' Tamy spoke wid tears

RK stared at her crystal eyes for a second.

'No Tamy , its nt ur mistake. Ur not going anywhr . I won't let u go . .. I'll talk to Madhu, she'l understnd , she loves me' RK spoke

'Give her sometime Rishabh . If she loves u she'l understand . That's what love is all about '

'And then I'm always thr wid u ' she spoke hugging him.

RK really need a friend this time , he hugged her back.. Somewhr she did comfort him. Afterall their friendship was years old.

RK sat in his room , smoking . Dialling Madhu's number over n over . But she didn't respond

Madhu sat in her bed , crying her eyes out 'Why RK ? Why did u do this to me ?'

' Was my love soo shallow ? '

'I hate u RK . I hate u ' she cried and cried .

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Next day in office arrived early than usual , but Madhu wasn't thr .

He called in Bittuji

'Where is Miss Mallik? '

'Chief she's ...she's gone !'

RK stood up ' Gone ??? What ? Whre ?'

'She left u this chief ' he handed him an envelope and went out

RK opened it up , it was Madhu's Resignation Letter.

RK banged his hand on the wall

'U can't do this '

He immediately left for Madhu's place .

He was lucky enough to find her sitting in her room , he climbed up and shouted ' what is this ? '

'Rk stop shouting , my parents are home'

'Why did u resign madhu? ' He held her shoulders tightly

' Becoz I don't want to be near u ' she struggled trying to free herself .

he held her tighter and looked into her eyes ' don't u love me ?'

'I do RK . But do u only love me ?'

And RK was once again speechless

'I love u Madhu'

'Tamy or I ? Choose one'

RK's brows creeched

'What is this kiddish behaviour'

'Answer me '

"Do u feel for her "

'Answer me RK . Do u ????'

And he let go of Madhu's arms.

' Stop doing this to Me Madhu' he pleaded

'I can't be with a man who feels for 2 girls at the same time. ' She spoke coldly

'Be strong' her mind screamed

'My feelings for u are stronger Madhu'

'Haa so u accepted u do have feelings for her !'

"Leave RK ! I don't even wanna see ur face . "

'Madhu listen to me '

'I said LEAVE RK ! ' She shouted

'I hate u '

'But Madhu...'

'Go away from me ! I don't want u . Go to ur Tamy'

He hugged her suddenly ' I love u Madhu'

But she pushed him away

'I don't '

He stood there silent . And after few minutes left her place. Leaving Madhu alone , shattered , heartbroken .

He rashly drove his car , heartbroken and shattered .

Hum Bewafaa ...

Hum bewafa hargiz na the
Par hum wafa kar naa sake
Humko mili uski sazaa
Hum jo khata kar naa sake
Hum bewafa hargiz na the
Par hum wafa kar naa sake

Kitni akeli thi woh rahen hum jinpe
Ab tak akele chalte rahen
Tujhse bichhad ke bhi o bekhabar
Tere hi gham mein jalte rahen
Tune kiya jo shiwa
Hum woh gila kar naa sake
Hum bewafa hargiz na the
Par hum wafa kar naa sake

Tumne jo dekha suna sach tha magar
Itna tha sach yeh kisko pataa
Jaane tumhe maine koi dhokha diya
Jaane tumhe koi dhokha hua
Is pyaar mein sach jhooth kaa
Tum faisla kar naa sake
Hum bewafa hargiz na the
Par hum wafa kar naa sake

They both were left heartbroken , shattered and in tears...

P.S - im ready to die

Edited by zara.92 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Today someone need a lesson zara and that is u just kidding lol. Loved it a lovestory is full of pain. I knoe rishbala gonna unite but y rk is si confused like seriously. Now it will be hard to win her back. But i have a weord feeling that madhu can be varrying somethng inside her lol

Edited by deepak148 - 12 years ago