FF: Kya aapko Qubool Hai :Last Part, Page-137 - Page 16

Originally posted by: subhakmhl

wow dear ur FF is truly amazing ... kash aisa hi kuch hota in real Qubool hai soap...

thanks a lot dear...

Hey all... am i bad writer that getting very less response? please if it so, do tell me, i will abort this FF... but really sad with very less response...
anyways here is next part...

Part-8

It was night''As Asad reached home, Tanveer came to her'..

Asad, lagta hai aap hame bhool chuke hain?

nahi Tanveer, this is not so, I was just busy with Miss. Farookhi to finish her pending works, her work is complete by now, by the way now I have enough time, we can sit and atlk, let's go'. Asad took her to his room'.. both started remembering their childhood memories'

Asad, do you remember, how we used to finish our home work?

yes, definitely, I do, I used to finish your writing work and you my drawings and practicals'.

yes, I always loved drawings, that why today I am a designer'..

but once you left, I had to make my drawings myself, slowly I learnt that but now I love all that'.

Asda, even today you are particular about your things'..

yes Tanveer, I have always been so' you tell me about your life after going from here'.

From here, we went to Lukhnow due to Abbu's transfer' I moved for my further studies to Delhi'. and finished my designing course from NIFT, here in bhopal, I came for one of my important client'. I have to visit her tomorrow'. by the way Asad, did you get anyone in your life?

Asad remembered Zoya, but nodded his head and smiled'.. no Tanveer, I could not find anyone like me'.. I needed a girl, who can understand me' a cultured, well mannered girl' but no' I have asked ammi to find herself' I don't have time to love, to find someone'. did you get some one?

It was the morning and last day of zoya in India, she had a flight to New York next morning'.

She got up and was getting ready to go to Police station for DNA report'..Asad had already informed her that some of his foreign clients had come so he will be busy in the morning for two hours, she may wait'. but instead of waiting, she thought about going alone to police station and bring the report, so Asad had asked ayaan to take zoya with him'. It was ten am when zoya left from the house while Ayaan was waiting for her near police station, Zoya was all sad and worried about what is going to happen' her heart was ot allowing her to move ahead but she knew there was no going back after reaching too close to the truth'..

As they recahed inside,DSP looked at her and handed over the report to her'. as she opened the report,she was all in tears' it was her mother's dead body' Ayaan helped her to come outside of the room'

She controlled herself' and after some time went again into the the cabin of DSP'

Sir, Mr. Rashid Khan has not killed my ammi' it is some one else'.

so who is that person Miss Farukhi? do you know?

Yes sir, I know, I have proofs too but it will take a bit time'. I will bring it to you today'

Ok Miss farukhi, you may bring it and we will consider your case'.

On listening, both Ayaan and Zoya ran to the home, as they reached there only dilshad was at home, Asad had been on meeting, Nazma had been to college and Tanveer had left to meet her client ..

After one hour, Asad came back home, as zoya and ayaan told him everything, all of three went to asad's room to take the proofs to the police'.

Asad opened the drawer where he had placed the doll and CD, but was shocked to see , it was not there'.

Zoya was in her room completing the packing all in tears thinking she had nothing left as she had to leave next morning'.. she was thinking about something'.. she wanted to stay in India till she could punish her ammi's murderer'.Razia'..

Finally she picked her ipod and found out the ways to extend the visa immediately'.. finally she found one idea and a fade smile appeared on her lips with the doubt'.. who will help her? just one name in her mind'. Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan'.. but will he agree?

Meanwhile Dilshad went to Asad in his room'

Asad'

Ammi Aap? mujhe bula liya hota'.

Asad, Aj main kisi maksad se yhan ayi hun'

ji kahiye'.

Its about zoya'.

ji?

I am talking about what nazma had said on dining table'. can't you stop her?

ammi I didn't get'

main tumahe aur zoya ke rishte ki baat kar rhi hun' main dekh rhi hun, aaj kal tum log kafi waqt sath bita rhe ho and your relation has also improved these days'.

ammi aisi koi baat nahi ha' she helped me in your case when that shooter attacked you and I am helping her now'

par beta wo bhut achi ladki hai, mujhe tumhare liye aisi hi ladki chahiye who can stand by you always'

no ammi, she is good one' but she is not fit for our family'. infect for any family'. she may be good by heart but I don't see any quality of good wife, good daughter in law in her' I don't need a girl like zoya to marry'.

As you wish beta, I just wished zoya should stay here with us forever'

Ammi please find some girl from India itself'well cultured, dignified and well mannered'. someone like''ummm'..

Tanveer? ammi asked''

may be'..but not sure'' said Asad while leaving the room'.

but he could not see zoya was standing there with tears n her eyes on backside of door listening everything'.

Precap:-Something quite shocking''

Originally posted by: -Yaariyan-

WOW this amazing part. loved it

thanks dear for responding...

Hey! It's a great story! Don't put urself down!

Originally posted by: e_enigma

Hey! It's a great story! Don't put urself down!

I love it! :)

So what - if it's not getting the desired response!

Don't stop writing! :)

thanks dear... but when we do some work, we always need a feedback... i am ot saying about just cuchikoo... response,... errors as well as mistakes in my writing ay also be pointed out... i would love it... but in this forum, i know there are enough readers... i can see the counter increasing with every update of mine but no one responds... any ways thanks dear...

Kya twist hai yaar ...pls dnt seperate AsYa :(

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Kya twist hai yaar ...pls dnt seperate AsYa :(

most probably kal pta lag jayega aapko... but don't worry , they may be separate but they soul mates and will always be...

desperately waiting for your update...

Originally posted by: soumyasingh

desperately waiting for your update...

loved it...👏

Thanks dear...