Mr MSK Madhushala Vs Ms MSK MadhuBala/Part 4 P 13 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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mods accepted my request n opened this thread once again omg..so sweet thax Jazz...I gonna complete this
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Originally posted by: Jeba.Rahman

I thought you updated :(



Now I m making update not gonna stretch just one update ...😳
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Chapter 4

Next Morning

Maan got up at usual time but where was Geet ? Rehaan was sleeping next to Maan.He couldn't call her otherwise it gonna disturb Rehaan.He jumped from bed and checked washroom.No signs of her.

'Yeh subha subha kaha chali gayi.Its too early ? I should check outside' he mumbled

He came out of room..Started to scram aloud for Geet..but instead of her Nakul came

'Sir why r u shouting ?Kya apne dialogues ki rehearsal kar rahe hai' he teased

'Oh Shut up Nakul...Where is Geet ?' annoyed Maan yelled

'Wo to shooting per challi gayi.Unko phone aaya tha ...for early shoot this morning.She asked u to take care of Rehaan.' grinning ear to ear Nakul informed him and left.He was enjoying Maan's condition

'Itni early.I hav to take this matter seriously.It is affecting our personal lives' scratching hair he thought

After bath Maan reached shoot as soon as possible taking Rehaan with him Poor child he was still in sleep...

'Mr Khuraana ur shift is around 3.But aap yahan itni jaldi 'surprised Director said ...

Production house for both serials means Maan's and Geet's were same so director was aware of whole shoot schedule

'Kyo main apni wife ka shoot nahi dekhne aa sakta' Petting Rehaan's back he said in frustration


Shoot begun...It was really difficult for Maan to handle Rehaan..Poor boy was feeling uncomfortable..In between this Maan got call from home

'Maan Sir ..Geet Madam's phone is switched off so I called u.Gaon (village) se apki Bua Dadi aayi hai.But Daddi Maa is out of town and Geet Madam is at shoot.So after finding no one at home...She is fuming and about to leave ' Nakul dropped new bomb shell

'What..?' shouts...whole people started to look at him in surprise.But no effect on him Just this new musebat was in his mind 'unka gussa to sabh jaante hai.It is more then Durwaasa Rishi Try to stop her...I m coming' He scratched his hair 'what to do now ?'

He glared at Geet who was busy in giving final touch ups to makeup.Maan ran toward her.He signaled all people in make room to go out

' Geet tumko yahan is shoot ki padi hai waha ghar main Bua Daddi is ready to shoot us .She is here and fuming after getting no one at home ' Maan gave tough look to her

'Maan calm down ...Rehaan ki neend kyo khraab kar rahe ho..Why the way why are you here...You should be at home.U don't have any shoots'

'Ha wo...(searching words ) Actually I wanted to see how you act.So I came..But now what I should do to handle Bua Daddi ' he made pitty face

' Maan u r her blood if u r short tempered .What we can expect from her.By the way my shoot is ready. Plz go and handle her I can't come ' applying liner she said

'But Geet she will get more angry when she will come to know about ur acting' hesitatingly he said

'Mr. Madhu Shala don make me point of target...mujhe bali ka bakra mat banayo...Apni kartootain (acts) bhi bata dena how u r keeping ur business at side line' she pointed finger toward him to warn

'Mrs. Madhubala banke bahut stunt marti firti ho .Ghar aayo fir Bua Daddi k aagay apni acting dikhna' warning her he left


' Mr MadhuShalla time will answer..first its ur turn to face her ' Geet gave devil smile

She dialed a number ' Hello Nakul Maan is coming...Ask Bua Daddi to get ready'


Actually two days back when Bua Daddi called Geet..She was really disturbed due to Maan...and narrated whole situation to Bua and Bua voluntarily offered her services in this mission.Every one was aware that she was coming except Maan.


Much scared Maan reached home to face Bua.Rehaan was out of sleep and he was also crying aloud.Situation was totally out of control.

'Oh to aap aa gaye' Bua Daddi burst when Maan entered in living area.

'Bua Daddi aap suddenly '

'Why main nahi aa sakti..aur mujhe se baad main baat karna...first look at Rehaan...kiase ro raha hai...why you disturbed him in sleep...kyo le kar gaye thay aap isko 'placing hand on waist she said

'Bua Ji wo Geet now a days..she has started to work..' he was searching words

'Has started to work in a serial...why can't she if u can Mr MadhuShalla .?' this was big jerk for him

'Bua Ji you know this ?'

'yeh I know this...Geet told me every thing...she just remained out side home for lil time..itne main he apse ek bacha nahi sambhal raha...' taking Rehaan from him she said

' U don have any problem with her work ' surprised he said

'I may have...agar wo ghar ko neglect karti...But she is doing this just to open your eyes.'

'What happened to me...Meri eyes ko kya hua its open'

'Agar open hoti to aap dekhte how u are neglecting your business and family just for a shoot.'

Addi also interfered in their convo.He has some important documents to get signs from Maan,.So he came to KM as now a days Maan was avoiding KC

'Yes Sir due to this negligence we were on the verge to loose our dream project But Geet convinced out clients.Due to her we have most prestigious contract.' Addi added

'What ?'

'Yes Sir look at this file ?' handling contract file he said

Geet followed Maan to home with Pinky as it was time to disclose things.

'Maan aab bhi time hai plz take in change once again otherwise you will ruin your empire just for some fun moments.I m not saying it is bad but just for one thing how can you forget the main aim of your life.KC which is every thing for you for us.' Geet tried to made him realize .

Maan became silent.Thought for some time.

'Yes Geet you are rite.Mr Madhu Shalla ban kar I forget who I am.But Mrs MadhuBala you made me realize.It is also true you are also neglecting family after being Mrs. MadhuBala'

'Sir she is MadhuBala..But just yours.This was just a drama..real life drama to make you realize. what you were leaving behind.Otherwise she is not doing any show.' Pinky disclosed.

'So it means you all were also aware of this..made fool out of me'

'No Sir how you can be fool...you always make us fool(full) with your anger..' Nakul teased.

'Nakul ' Maan yelled...

'So now our Maan is back...you are yelling on Nakul ...every thing you had forgotten due to your shooting schedule'

'Thanx Mrs MadhuBala you brought back Mr MadhuShala back to real world' Maan hugged Geet lovingly.


Every body laughed aloud...At last Mrs MadhuBala Geet Maan Singh Khuraana got her Mr MadhuShala MSK back.





Hop this lil satire entertained you...I completed it after months..Upto you u wanna like or not...Have no problem.My aim was just to complete it and to give message that we shouldn't forgot real aims of our life for some fun moments. Family is always first...



Sonia

waiting for you...I m not good in OS writing this is just an attempt


~ Complete ~


Edited by Jass.KN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely end quite funny also specially bua dadi acting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome n wonderful ending...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely ending...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update

have fun reading it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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All read in one go
awesomeee!!!! loved it alot
love the whole concept story is awesome
continue soon with another os😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fabulous
get made maan realize his importance for his work
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome 👏and
Lovely ending...👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb👏
loved it dear
thanx for the pm

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