new saraswatichandra SS- Until You Let Me See You.

"she doesn't even show me her face' how dare she' nobody has ever treated me like that 'that ego of hers is bigger than herself. How could one girl be so stubborn' I came here because she wanted me to and she hides from me. So should I stay here any longer. I'm going back after all I'm not going to marry her." Thought saras while packing his suitcases.

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"stupid boy 'I hate him more than anyone else in the world. How could he refuse the proposal without even seing me.. yes what I did was the right thing to do' why should I show him myself. He refused me because he doesn't want to see me. He'll leave after dad is well in his health and everything will be back to normal." Thought kumud but her thoughts were disturbed by her mother.

"kumud he's going to leave'. Only you can stop him'"

"what??? He's leaving'.but how could he'I'll stop him ma'"

She ran through the hall with all her might. Her heart was pounding so hard, was it the feeling that she's gonna lost him forever or was it the anger of him leaving without telling her father. She was confused but she ran to her room and banged opened the door to find his back towards her.

"how dare you Mr. saraswatichanrda vyas'!!!" yelled kumud with all her might and quickly turned herself away.

"you came here for a reason and you're not going anywhere without completing it ."

Saras turned to find her standing behind him with her locks covering the side view of her face.

"why should I and you cant stop me." He told her still trying to steal a glance at her face.

"I can and I will' if you want to you can leave after you tell him. I don't want to ruin the whole son like impression he has on you."

"fine I'll stay only on one condition."

"what?"

"show me your face atleast tell me why you're not showing me yourself"

"no'why should I 'you refused to marry me without even looking at me'so why should I show you my self. Do you know how humiliating it was. How embarrassing. The first proposal you got was refused even without seeing me. How could you? And that too by a letter? What were you thinking? That I'm some kind of a third class girl who might not suit in to your high class dubai society? Huh? Was it? So now tell me why should I show you my face."

Tear drops were falling from her eyes. She was trying hard to be strong infront of this stranger but she couldn't. tears were flowing through her porcelain face marking it's territory.

"I 'I never thought of it that way'" said saras honestly. He knew he has hurt her a lot. And he knew he will have to make it up to her somehow. He promised himself that he will see her face no matter what and will make it up to her. That he will solve the problem himself.

"of course how could you? You're the guy from dubai. Your brain works like that. You don't know how people will talk here in india 'in ratnagiri. They never blame the boy instead they will spread gossip that the girl is at fault. I don't want to carry a burden like that on top of my shoulders. So you finish what you started and leave. If you are really feeling sorry for me , at least stay until my father is well."

Said Kumud while wiping off her tears and she ran out of the room.

"why was I so stupid. Yes'I will make it up to her. I will finish what I started. I'm so sorry Kumud. I'm so sorry. I never meant to hurt you. You're right. People will talk things and I I don't want to be the reason you will be scolded by people here. I will finish this for once and for all"

Saras thought. He was feeling guilty all over. He unpacked his suitcases and thought of staying a little bit longer .

Precap- saras trying to win kumud's heart

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