8/3 - Aaj jaane ki zidd na karo! Poetry..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am back today with my lines to depict the feelings Saras and Kumud -

Saras's thoughts -

I know very well that you don't trust me...

But I did all that I could...

To help your Dad feel better and fine...

Coz that's what I think one should...

I'll wait for you by the temple stairs...

I'm sure you will make it there...

You've come...though not ready as yet ...

To say that you too care...

Kumud's thoughts -

Why should I trust your first aid?

Let the doctor see and tell...

Oh - everyone is praising you and your help...

Then why do I always yell?

I don't want to - but I can see myself

Yearning to meet you too...

When am I going to drop my ego...

And confess my love so true...

An amazing episode yet again...the locales were splendid!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Absolutely amazin dear...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really beautiful <3 Love your poems dear <3

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