FF: Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi (TaaRey) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey pls do pm me
loved ur concept ...
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love ur concept but i also love yuvreen so i wish that suvreen could be in it too. but anyways lovely concept plz continue!!😊
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vry nice cncpt dr,slightly d cncpt remembrs 20-20 revolution.i'm rdy to experience d journey.so cm on,cntinue sn dr.
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wow babes m agn impressed with u(plz dnt take it in a wrong way)😉...the concept is amazing...i would love to read this story...n m damn sure u'll rock asusual...so plz dear dnt delay...n continue soon!!!i'll be waiting..😛
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Awsum ya...!!! Totally gud... Pls pm me...!!!
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amazing start
ooh taani and yuvraj a couple
interesting...
and love the banner
cnt wait to see how this FF unfolds
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Andy , i loved the concept dear..looks diff, Waiting to read more.
Bt that 1 sentence of urs "pehli baar mohabbat ki" is to end , u knw it was like adding acid to bruise. U wrote this yes bt i culdnt read then . Today nt nly i read pbmkh last chapter n still m nt out of shock , still i cant believe that it ended. I was very sad u knw and nw when i read this line it again made me sad.
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Other Character

Panchi

Taani's cousin sister, Very close to Taani,Lives in the same house.


In the Busy streets of Amritsar

Early morning, A girl riding her scooty in full speed, She overtakes cars and other vehicles, keeps horning and people start yelling at her for her reckless driving, The girl sitting on the back seat is having a tough time balacing properly.

Finally they stop the bike. The girl sitting at the back seat, jumps off.

Panchi: (irritated) Finally.. This was the last time main tumhare saath aa rahi hu,Taani di!!!

Taani (who was parking her bike in a hurry): Thik hai Panchi agli baar aaram se chalaungi, ab chal.

Taani walking in full speed and Panchi running behind her.

Panchi: I don't understand Di, Subah subah hum yaha kyu?? Tume audition k bare mein kaise pata chala?

Taani: Maine poster dekh liya tha! Number note kiya, procedure pucha aur vaise ye entry form liya. Bass isse leke Rey ne line me khade hone hai,

Panchi stops. Taani walking in full speed realizes Panchis not with her and turns,

Panchi: (shocked) I seriously dont believe this. Subah k 6 baje utke tune Rey k liye form laye?? Uss Rey k liye jisko kuch padi bhi nai, jo ab tak soo raha hoga!

Taani: (impatient) Toh isilye jaa rahi hu na? Uss khumbkaran ko uthane, Chal Panchi warna yahi reh jayenge. (starts walking)

Panchi and Taani walk in the house, Rey's mom was in the sitting room.

Taani and Panchi: Sasriyakal Aunty!!

Rey's mom: Aare sasriyakal Taani putar!!(looks at Panchi and gets tensed) Panchi tu toh dubli ho gayi hai, dieting shieting kar rahi hai kya? Chal, acha hua subah yaha chale aye, Maine Alu parathe banaye hai, chal khalena dono.

Panchi happily walks in the kitchen. Taani looks at her, smiles and rolls her eyes. Reys mom pulls Taani's hands towards the kitchen..

Taani (to aunty): Nahi auntyji muje kuch nai chaiye, ye dekho(hands her a pamphlet) Punjabi movie k liye background dancers chaiye, Rey ko bola tha audition dene k liye. Pakka select ho jayega, lekin Abhi jake line mein khada hona padega warna lambi line lag jayegi. Aur selection nai hua toh??

Reys mom: aare putar!! tum kyu itna tension le rahi hai? Jiska audition hai wo toh soo raha hai, jaa utha usko! Meri toh sahabzada sunta nahi.

Taani smiles and runs to Reys room, she opens the door. Reys room be's all messed up. He be's sleeping like a pig with his leg in one corner and hand half outside his bed, his blanket was half on the floor.

Taani(angry): Muje pata tha ki tum aise hi soye hue miloge..Rey!!! Utho!! Tumhe kal bola tha jaldi soke, jaldi utne! Utho abhi!!

Rey (faintly opens his eyes and starts rubbing it): Kya hai Taani?? Subah subah kyu chilla rahi hai. Jaa, muje nai dena koi audition! (pulls his blanket)

Taani: eeyyy??? Dimag kharab hua hai kya?? Uth ja! Humesha toh rota rehta hai ek break chaiye, ek mauka chaiye, ab uth na!(Seeing Rey still sleeping, she gets tensed she takes the glass of water and throws it on his face, Rey abruptly gets up)

Rey: (annoyed) Taani!!subah subah teri chudailo wali harkate chalu mat kar yaar! (wipes his face with his hands)Uth jata hu, thik hai?? Har baar aise hi uthayegi, Yuvi sahi kehta hai, pata nahi kya khake peda kiya teri biji ne tuje! (keeps grumbling and walks in his washroom)

Taani makes an irritated face and looks at his messed up room.

Finally Rey Gets ready and they leave for audition, Taani and Panchi on Taani's scooty and Rey on his bike. On the way suddenly a red gypsy blocks their way, They suddenly apply breaks, Panchi on the back seat bangs Taani infront, Taani gets annoyed and see's the jeep.

(Yuvraj background music)

Yuvraj be's smiling showing his 32 whites,sitting in the jeep, Taani and Panchi get highly annoyed.Rey smiles at Yuvi and parks his bike and gets in Yuvi's jeep.

Taani: (irritated)Marwayega kya?? Dekh k nahi chala sakta??(looking at Rey) Tu kidar jaa raha hai? Chal, Audition dene!

Yuvraj: Oye Jhansi ki Rani, humari Amma banna bandh kar Samjhi ! Aur rey ko main audition hi dene le ja raha hu!

Taani: (smiling) acha? Rukh toh phir! Hum bhi ate hai, uthar Panchi, gaadi mein bait,(Panchi gets off, Taani parks her bike in a hurry and both girls walking to the jeep, Yuvi looks at Rey, both give each other their naughty smile, Taani was about to climb the jeep when Yuvi starts it and Takes off'(Panchi stands irritated with her mouth open)Rey and Yuvraj laughing as they go.

Taa: oye!! Yuvi rukh'.!!

Yuvraj goes a little forward and stops, Yuvi looks back , takes reverse and reaches near Taani. Taani makes an angry face, Yuvraj starts smiling,

Yuvi: (smiling) Bachpan mein agar teko propose nahi kia hota na, toh nikal jata, abhi girlfriend hai, thoda bura toh lagega, chal bait. (looks at Panchi)Aur wo teri moti ko bhi bhita!!

Taani: Agar bachpan mein tujko yes nahi diya hota na, toh jab tune Panchi ko moti bola tab muh todh deti tera.. ab boyfriend bana hai, thodi toh izzat deni padegi. (gives a forced smile and sits, followed by Panchi. Rey looking at both of them with tensed expression)

Rey: ab tum dono ka hua ho toh chale?? Mere audition hai!! U guys remember???

Taani: acha? Subah toh tujko audition nahi deni thi, ab bada audition ki padi hai!

Rey: jab audition ki padi nahi tab ladd rahi thi, ab audition ke liye concern hu toh ladd rahi hai, Ye Taani ki problem kya hai? Bachpan se leke aaj tak lade bagyer iska din nahi jata, isne toh phD ki hai ladne mein, Novel likhne chaiye tune, 100 reasons to fight, award agar hota na ki pure Punjab mein sabse jyada koun ladta hai, toh wo pakka tujko hi milta.

Taani: (annoyed) kya karu? Ab tum dono awaare, Velle ladke, lade ya chilaye bagyer koi baat mante ho kya? Ache se baat kiya toh tum dono ko sunai kaha deta hai.

Panchi was fed up listening to all three just arguing.

Panchi: god!! Kaha fasa diya! Koun kahega ki Tum tino best friends ho?? Muje toh ab doubt ho raha hai. Ajeed best friends ho tum tino. Jab dekho Ladte rehte hai.

Taani Rey and Yuvi smile at each other and look at Panchi.

Yuvi: (as his driving) wo kya hai na moti! Hum tino chahe jitna lade jagde, Taane mar mar k dimaag kharab karenge.. Par ek dusre ko dekhe bagear humara din shuru nahi hota aur lade bagear din khatam nai ho sakta, humare group ka rule hai.. agar ek hasa toh tino hasenge aur agar ek roya toh'

Rey: toh baki dono kuch bhi karenge uski hasi wapus lane. (Yuvi and Rey give each other hi5, by then they reach the destination)

All four get off and Rey walks in, Taani calls him

Taani: Rey!! (she runs to him and hugs him, Rey smiles and hugs her back)All the best!

They break the hug,Rey hits her head and smiles. He takes a deep breath and walks in.

It's been an hour Rey went in,Taani and Yuvraj walking back and forth, fully tensed, Panchi looking at them,

Panchi: guys!! Relax, baitho please, kyu itna tension le rahe ho. Itna tension toh Rey bhi nai le raha hoga.

Yuvi: Moti tuje nai pata, Rey humesha ek mauke ka wait kar raha tha, agar ye usko mila na, toh bohot khush ho jayega.

Taani: haan Panchi, Rey ne kitne stage performances diye hai, (excited)imagine, agar Rey ko movie mein background mein dance karne mila toh kitna acha hoga. Hum use theatre me dekhenge, (walks to yuvi) Yuvi soch, Rey agar hoga toh hero ko dance karre dekhega koun? Acha ache choreographer use traine karenge, phir rey aur bhi acha dance karega. Kitna excited hoga woh.

Panchi keeps staring at Taani whoz so excited for Rey. Just then Rey walks out from the audition hall, all sad. Taani and Yuvi get nervous looking at him. They both look at each other all tensed, Taani runs to him, followed by Yuvi and Panchi.

Taa: Rey?? Kya hua? Tu..

Yuvi: (upset) select nahi kiya tuje?? Chal abhi todd denge ye banner! Aise kaise select nahi kiya tujko? Kaise dancers select kiye inhone? Chal tu tension mat le, main dekhta hu kaise koi iss movie k ticket kharidega, main kisiko jane hi dunga, tu dekh!

Rey: (sadly) Aise mat kar yaar, koi movie nahi dekega toh kaise tum muje hero k piche front line pe dance karte hue dekega?(starts smiling)

Yuvi: (excited) kya!! Saaley!! (hugs Rey) dramey karega? Maine toh puri todd fod ki taiyari ki thi.

Taani : Ab tuje hum theatre mein dance karte dekhenge!! (starts clapping and hugs Panchi)

Rey: oye hello, Select main hua hu aur tu hug Panchi ko kar rahi??

Taani smiles and Hugs Rey,

Yuvi: haayee nazar na lage mere bunty aur bubli ko (hugs both of them)

Panchi seeing all three hugging, starts smiling.

Taani, Rey and Yuvi break their Hug.

Rey: (excited) Maine sirf ek minute audition diya and they liked it. Muje front line me rakhenge.. lead actor k ek dum piche!!

Taani: (smiling) Dekha!! Muje pata tha!! Wow.. shooting kab se hai?? Hume denge na shooting dekhne?

Yuvraj: (starts laughing) Aare pagli, pehle unki choreography set hogi, phir prac hogi aur phir jake shooting hogi.

Taani makes a pout and stands and then again goes in excited phase,

Taani: chal koii nahi!!!! Rey select hua!! Issi baat pe'

Yuvi, Taani and Panchi scream together: Paaarrrtttyyy!!!!!

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Music (all four giving hi5 to each other and then get in Yuvi's jipsy)

Oo'oo'..(yuvi drives off, )

Life Sahi Hai
Tension nahin hai
(Taani stands behind with her hands wide open)
Life Sahi Hai..(rey sitting front next to yuvi, see's her and smile)
Tension nahin hai

Yari ka cooker hai (They drop Panchi to her college)
Seeti haseen hai (she says byee to all
Jab bhi baji hai (they drive off again
Kis ki baji hai

Yari ka cooker hai (they stop near a dabha)
Seeti haseen (sitting and laughing and chatting
Jab bhi baji (give hi5 to each other)
Kas ke baji (start eating their food)
tas ki baji (yuvi eats a chilllie and starts panting for water)
baji baji baji baji baji' (Taarey start laughing

Life Sahi Hai(finally he gets water)
Tension nahin hai (Runs behind Rey to hit him
Life Sahi Hai (Taani laughing at both of them)
Tension nahin' nahin' nahin'.( Finally catches Rey and both start laughing)
Oo'oo'.. (they drive back home)

Agar tumko hai problem (Rey and Yuvi sitting on Yuvi home's terrace)
Tumhar issue hai (Rey drinking one sip from beer bottle)
Na rumal hai humpe (passes the bottle to Yuvi)
Na humpe tissue hai (suddenly hears Taani coming)
Sutti ka kohara hai (both run and hide the bottle)
Daaron bahi hai.. (Taani see's them hiding)

Life Sahi Hai (she takes out the bottle)
Tension nahin hai (Rey and Yuvi standing all tensed)
Life Sahi Hai (She walks near Rey and smiles his shirt)
Tension nahin' nahin' nahin'. (looks at him and YUvi angrily)

Taani walks away angrily.

Precap

Rey: Dude, phir se phas gaye yaar!! Tujko bola tha na yaha nai piyenge. Ab Taani ko koun manayega.

Yuvi: (tensed)Yaar mujko kya pata tha ki iss waqt wo yaha ayegi. Ab main toh nai jaunga uske samne. Wo jwala mukhi ka gussa tu hi handle kar sakta hai. Tu hi ja na. lekin ab Taani gayi kaha?

Rey: Muje pata hai wo kaha gayi hongi. (he runs)

Edited by AndyTaarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Unres...
I loved ur concept.. Lovetriangle... It's gonna b really interesting... Yuvi.. Taani... Rey...
Panjabi ha.. Treat to watch them in new avatar... 😃
Yuvi n Rey r really lazy n messy.. 😕 😆
I cud imagine condition of Rey's room...aftr all.. BOYS!! 😉
Taani is really jhagdelu.. N caring too!
Aaww.. Three r really cute... 😳
Looking frwd dlfr this story..
It gonna b fun... N Drama.. N dun wat!!
Loved it dear...
Update soon!
Pm me!! 🤗
Edited by Curvmars - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Oh wow. I am so loving it. Love the trio and I just love TaaRey bond. Update soon

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