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Posted: 12 years ago
It was amazing...
Arjun's thoughts about Roshni being a kid...
His sorry n thankyou...
Roshni's problems... n Arjun's solution...
Its going really good..
Continue Soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow ...arjun ka woh bache wala dialogue nd ofcourse recharge talktym😆😆..lol😆😆 nd roshni is right arjun ke paas uski har problm ka solution hota hai 😳...roshni is so sweet..kitna bolti hai...!!!!!..😊😊..update soon...waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
"kahanse recharge karwati ho" lol 🤣 🤣 hilarious tha.


Roshni asked for help & Arjun man bhi gaye!!! awww so cute 😛 agar senior junior na hote toh jaroor friends hote. lets see kab tak hote.


I am with shree & chotu definitely there is something cooking up between Arni. 😉 Arjun toh is like opened "Roshni Sahayata Kendra" 😆😆


but definitely agar kuch pak raha hai toh how can chotu missed it!!! 😉 😉


Hayye awesome update tha. I am literaly inactive from IF & out of so many PMs I read it only thats only because of Roshni. I am loving her like anything ❤️ & ofcourse you rocked it darling. superb. 👍🏼
Edited by -sree13- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank for liking the previous chapters.😊
Thanks a tonn to all those who took an effort and gave their feedback...🤗This chapter is dedicated to u all...😃

Part 38

Rathor told the team that they wud b staying in a hotel and they wud go in their SUV's itself. Roshni had no worries for Gia now as she was in safe hands. Next evening they left for the training place. The boys changed their turns on the way to the place. It took them gud 4-5 hrs to reach the place. They arrived there late night. All were feeling sleepy so they just took their keys, wished night to each other and left to occupy their rooms.

Next morning everyone meet in the lawn. The trio was really happy as it was a place faraway from the city surrounded with greenary all around, free from the hustle-bustle of city life - three days free from crimes and their duty.

Chotu : "Sir ye jagah kitni acchi hai na!"
Arjun : "Haan lekin ye mat bhoolna ki hum yaha kis liye aaye hai..."
Shree (keeping hand on Chotu's shoulder) : "Koi baat nhi Chotu! Itni acchi jagah par aane k baad b agar hamare seniors waise k waise rahe to isme hum kya kar sakte hai"
Roshni : "Comeon yaar! Sir ne aise hi normally bola tha..."
Shree : "Haan haan tu to kahegi hi. All of a sudden teri itni acchi dosti jo ho gai hai sir se..."
Roshni : "Nhi yar sir ab pehle se bahot soft ho gaye hai..."
Shree : "Hmm hmm and thats why u r developing a soft corner for him ryt!"
Roshni : "Shreee!"

Roshni runs behind Shree to hit him. Rathor comes there and looks at them furiously.

Rathor : "Kya kar rahe ho? Bacche ho? Behave urself...Breakfast karne k baad training rum me milenge."
Chotu (keeping hand on Shree's shoulder) : "Koi baat nhi Shree! Itni acchi jagah par aane k baad b agar hamare seniors waise k waise rahe to isme hum kya kar sakte hai"
Shree (shrugs his shoulder) : "Huh!"

After a tiring training session, Rathor asks them to get freshen up, have lunch and rest for sometime. Chotu takes all of their guns to keep it in a safe place. They all moved to their rooms, changd in their casuals and meet in the lunch room. After lunch, Rathor got a call and he moves out of the room to hear it properly. Chotu and Shree moved forward and Roshni and Arjun were coming talking with each other.

In the Hotel Lobby

Roshni : "Sir aapki shooting skills to bahot sharp hai. U hit the bull's-eye three times in a row. I hit it only once."
Arjun : "Practice karti raho. Tum b jaldi hi acchi shooter ban jaogi."
Roshni : "Sir wo...ye jagah bahot hi khoobsurat hai. Umm... main, Shree aur Chotu *Arjun notices someone hiding behind the pillar* shaam ko yaha aaspaas ka area ghumne jayenge. So kya aap..."
Arjun (focusing back on her) : "Haan kya keh rhi thi tum?"
Roshni : "Aap sun nhi rahe the? Aur aap *turns* peeche kya dekh rahe hai? Main keh rhi thi..."
Arjun (holds her by her shoulder) : "Listen...*says softly* just pretend ki hum baat kar rahe hai ok..."
Roshni (confused) : "Ek min..bt hum wahi to kar rahe hai na...haawww..."
Arjun : "Will u shutup! I mean...baat karo..."

Roshni irritated looks at him. Then following his orders, as she starts with her talks, Arjun again notices someone clicking their pictures. He rushes to that side shouting "Hey kaun hai waha? Ruk jao!" followed by Roshni. They come to a narrow corridor where they part their ways to search for that boy who was taking their pictures. That boy sees them and hides behind the wall but Arjun being the smart cop catches him taking a different route to his hideout. He was a 13-14 yr old boy wearing decent clothes - it was indicating that he belonged to a gud family.

Arjun (holding his hand) : "Kya kar rahe the?"
Boy : "Nhi kuch b to nhi!" *Roshni comes there too*
Arjun : "Apna mobile do!"
Boy : "Mera mobile hai! Tumhe kyu du!"
Roshni : "Sir lekin baat kya hai?"
Arjun (shouts) : "Apna mobile do!" *snatches the mobile*

Arjun sees Roshni's pics in his cellphone.

Arjun : "Hmm kya hai ye? Pics kyu click kar rahe the?"
Boy (scared) : "Nhi wo..."
Arjun : "Skool me ho na aur abhi se ye sab karte ho! Batao warna abhi tumhari complaint karta hu.."
Boy : "Sir wo...wo mujhe kisi ne kaha tha..."
Arjun : "Kis ne?"
Boy : "Sir wo..waha mera wait kar raha hai.."
Arjun : "Kaha dikhao! Aur naam kya hai tumhara?"
Boy : "Bobby...Bobby hai mera naam!"

He takes them to a stranded corridor. It was clear that it was rarely used by the hotel staff. He stops in front of a store rum.

Arjun : "Ruk kyu gaye?"
Bobby : "Sir..wo mujhe darr lag raha hai!"
Arjun : "Ghabrao mat! Hum log tumhare saath hai. Ander chalo!"

The boy all scared enters the rum. Arjun sees no one around them and asks him. But before they can understand he quickly moves to the door at the end of the rum and gets out of it. As Arjun and Roshni moves to that backdoor, Bobby being quick bolted the door. They rushed to the front door bt someone closes it too. Arjun hears two more different voices now.

Roshni : "Sir ye darwaza b band hai!"
Arjun (shouts) : "Bobby! Bobby darwaza kholo nhi to tumhare liye accha nhi hoga!"
Bobby : "Hahaha! Are accha to tab nhi hoga na jab tum aur tumhari girlfrnd yaha se bahar nikloge. Yaha to koi aata b nhi hai. Complaint karne wale the na ab karo! "
Arjun : "Bobby bewakufi mat karo aur darwaza kholo...Hum log ETF se hai yani police! Apne liye probs aur mat badhao.."

Bobby and his group gets scared. That boy's actual name was Shreyas.

Shreyas : "Police!!!"
Monica : "Shreyas ye tumne kya kiya?"
Shreyas : "Maine kiya ka kya matlab? Maine akele thodhi na kiya hai. Tum sab log b mere saath ho!"
Vicky : "Wo sab chodho! Ab karna kya hai wo bolo!"

Arjun was still banging the door.

Arjun : "Come on Bobby! Open up! Hamari team ko yaha pahochne me zyada tym nhi lagega. Behtar hoga tum khud khol do!...Main jaanta hu ki tum akele nhi ho!"
Monica : "Shit yar! Hum pakdhe jayenge!"
Roshni : "Sir aap un logo ko aur dara rahe hai...Bobby dekho koi tumhari complaint nhi karega. Plz open the door."
Monica : "Yaar main khol rhi hu!"
Vicky : "Paagal ho gayi hai! School trip par aana hamesha k liye banned ho jayega. Parents aur teachers ki daant alag se.."
Shreyas : "Hmm yaha se chalte hai. Kal to waise b hum log yaha se jaane wale hai. Kuch nhi hoga. Chalo yaha se!"

Arjun keeps on banging the door. But they all leave them there trappd in that store room.

Roshni : "Bobby! Bobby!"
Arjun : "Chale gaye wo!"
Roshni (angry) : "Ye sab aapki wajah se hua hai. Aap ne unlogo ko itna darra diya ki wo log hume chodh k chale gaye."
Arjun : "Wo waise b hume kaun sa nikalne wale the."
Roshni (bangs the door) : "Kholo! Koi to kholo!"
Arjun : "Aise chillane se kya hoga! Relax! Main Rathor ko call karta hu wo hume yaha se nikal lega..."
Roshni : "Haan haan plz jaldi sir! Yaha kitni dust aur suffocation hai.."

Arjun takes out his mobile but finds the battery dead. He then looks at Roshni stretching his hand out.

Arjun : "Mere phone ki battery dead hai. Apna cellphone do!"
Roshni : "Offo! Aap kitne careless hai. Thank god main aapk saath hu warna aap to yaha par trap hokar reh jaate..."
Arjun : "Ab tum phone dene ka kasht karogi.."

Roshni chks her pockets but doesnt finds her mobile. She then double chks her front and back pockets.

Roshni : "Oopsie!"
Arjun : "Kya hua?"
Roshni : "Sorry sir bt mujhe lagta hai I forgot my mobile in my rum."
Arjun : "WAT????"


Part 39
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Edited by pink_fairy123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yaayy...me first..
All in the training...
Chotu n Shree's dialouge... :p
Roshni's photo...
Now both trapped in store room...
No phone also...
Whats gonna happen now..??
Continue Soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!!
Awesome part...!!!!

Dono Kamre mein locked...!!!
Nice!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum chapter dear

loved it

OMG arjun n roshni locked in store room

i feel like singing ,"hum tum 1 kamre mein band ho aur chabee kho jaaye "

waiting to kknow wat happens next

BTW who r dese 3 students???
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tani23

Awesum chapter dear


loved it

OMG arjun n roshni locked in store room

i feel like singing ,"hum tum 1 kamre mein band ho aur chabee kho jaaye "

waiting to kknow wat happens next

BTW who r dese 3 students???



Just normal students...played a prank on none other than ASR...😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...
hum tum ek kamre mein bandh ho aur baahar se koyi lock kar jaaye
wow...cool!

cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am literaly chocking to say that it is probably my last comment on it.

love the update & those kids were superb. the masterminds 😆 The trio are the funniest..Kya dialogues diya tha.

as usualy my cutiepie rocked it with her supercute "haww!!!" 😉 oops no mobile great.

"hum tum ek kamre me bandh ho
aur mobile kho jayee.
hum tum ek kamre me bandh ho
aur koi bachane na aye.
lolz my talktime also doesnt end as in Rosh's 😆😆

keep writing & rocking with the FFs. will miss you a lot & will miss your roshni.

lots of love
sreeparna 😊

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